In SerialCaptain Critiques: A Grumpy Pirate Review Book
When it comes to reviews, I'm probably as harsh as the hellhole most story ideas crawl out of.
I'm blunt, sarcasic, to the point and I know what I like in a story. As you can probably guess, you don't wanna take my advice if your like an overprotective mother about your story. Who am I kidding, EVERYONE is like that about their stories.
But, if you could find the courage to pry the story out of your cold, crabby hands so I can give my brutally honest opinion then be my guest.
Just don't try and start a fight once I provide it.
You DON'T wanna fight a pirate.
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I reserve the right to decline stories as this will be taking up quite a bit of my time and if I say no, I mean NO. If your blurb is unreadable I will decline it. If it includes the genres mentioned in my 'Hell No' section then I will send it back where it came from.
Do NOT critique the Captain.
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Chapter Selections
1. Intro Kinda Thing
2. The Hell Lists
3. How This Works
4. Payment & Form
5. The Waiting Game
6. Captain's Critique: Dreadwall Breach
7. Captain's Critique: This Realm of Sinners
8. Captain's Critiques: Sanguinus
9. Captain's Critique's: Next of Queens
10. Captain's Critiques: Sired by Divinity
11. Captain's Critiques: The Lioness Who Roared
12. Captain's Critiques: What The Eyes Can See
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