《Captain Critiques: A Grumpy Pirate Review Book》The Waiting Game
Advertisement
This is for
It is a guide to the status of your critique and will only be updated once a comment sample has been sent by me via PM and has been accepted by the author. If it hasn't been updated it means a comment sample has not been sent and I'm prioritising survival right now aka busy/sick.
Do not querey the status of your critique if it is written here. I know of it's existence and the decisions are final. If you believe there is a typo then feel free to message me privately but do not inline comment. That is my job.
Author:
Status: In Progress
Style: Book Review
Advertisement
- In Serial9 Chapters
Acceptance
Onix Harvey and her team of a half sphinx girl, and a half nymph monk, have been given an almost impossible mission in the human realm. Once there Onix had arrived she is faced with so many obstacles, that her original mission had begun to be extremely complicated. With her school life, demonic and supernatural forces, along with the face of someone from her past that she fears above all else.
8 179 - In Serial6 Chapters
The Brooding Storm
Alyssa just wanted the recognition of her grandfather, one of the five heroes that defended the humans that were transported to this world 15 years ago. Disappointed that she can’t even get it after all this time she sets out to live life on her own terms. But tensions between the newcomers and old residents of this world are rising. Will Alyssa live through the coming storm and if yes, where will the wind carry her? --- --- --- Hey, I’m new to writing so feedback would be appreciated :3 Thanks for reading
8 105 - In Serial15 Chapters
Emma and Bort
Emma does horrible things with Bort. Co-written with an A.I. Cover created by an A.I. Co-written with Bias_Teh.
8 144 - In Serial24 Chapters
The Account of the Golden Bamboo
Some years ago, a man betrayed his nation and this lead to the fall of the Kingdom of Eustacia. Now, under the Tzappian's rule, the lives of Eustacians are unbearably difficult. This story follows the growth of Tar, who tries his hardest to be a good person despite the world telling him he's not. Is his father a good person, or is he an unredeemable traitor? (Some feedback would be nice!)
8 244 - In Serial40 Chapters
Monday Morning (1)
🎶this flower needs somewhere to go. No room to grow on these dusty roads. Eight fifteen, I'll save you a seat🎶Started: July 4, 2019Published: July 22, 2019Completed: August 2, 2019Sequel: Paralyzed
8 193 - In Serial10 Chapters
MDZS Ghost Festival AU
Summary: Lan Qiren was in the middle of teaching the GusuLan Sect disciples when he suddenly felt an ominous aura. To his surprise only he can feel this aura! He followed the aura and, who did he see? But none other than... the former YunmengJiang sect leader - Jiang Fengmian! What is his purpose for luring him?
8 166

