《Captain Critiques: A Grumpy Pirate Review Book》Payment & Form
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Payment is given ONLY once I finish the critique. I will message you once the critique is done.
Depending on my enjoyment of the critique I will ask for one of the following:
*1 - 5 comments on the first three Night Rider chapters - NO copy/paste critiques - I WILL know
*1 - 5 comments on the first three Nightspun chapters - ONC 2020 project
*1 - 5 comments on the first three The Soul Thief chapters - ONC 2021 project
* A follow
*A dedication
I will tell you want payment to give. It will NOT be more than one choice mentioned so it is quicker and easier.
If I don't get confirmation of payment within TWO weeks after I inform you about your critique I will delete all my messages from your story and add you to my Mutiny Reading List AND my Hells List alongside a possible Mute.
There are exceptions but I NEED confirmation i.e. a message via PM that the Payment will be completed. If you are on hiatus for longer than a month then the same thing applies.
I don't want to waste my time critiquing for someone who is no longer there.
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Cairo
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