《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 3|Avni's Brithday!!!
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So guys here is my 3rd part.
Hope you enjoy it!
By the way for the people waiting for avneil romance that is coming soon in fact in my next update.
So lets start and dont forget to comment if you liked it.
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Neil and avni headed downstairs while Avni kept asking questions.
Avni: "Neil, why is it so dark? And why have you made me dress so beautifully? I thought the party is for maddy bua and Karina? (Neil started laughing) " Neil tum haas kyun rahe ho? Stop laughing and tell me what going on"
Neil:" bus bus Avni. You know what I should change your name to question kumari"
Avni:" Neil!!!!!"
Neil: "ok ok baba sorry"
Avni still confused to why it is so dark, just then suddenly the light come on.
Everyone: "surprise !!!!" (and started singing) "Happy Birthday to you, Happy Brithday to you, Haapy Birthday dear Avni, Happy Birthday to you...."(all clapped while Avni had water in her eyes )
Avni: "Aap logo ne yeh sab mere liye kiya?"
Bebe: "haan puttar , yeh sab tere pati ne plan kiya" (Avni looked at Neil)
Neil: "now stop staring lets cut the cake"(Avni cut the cake and made everyone eat.)
Sweata: " chalo ab gaana waana ho jaye , arey meri bahu, nahi beti ka birthday hai music toh banta ha!!"
They all played antakshari and sang beautiful song for each other than it was Neil's turn Neil sang:
Than Avni sang :
After all the family fun time and Avneil dancing, 2 people tried to make Avni's birthday the worst day of her life.
(if you guessed Rea and Diksha than you are right)
Rea: " bua are you sure about this?"
Diksha: "yes rea now do as i say."
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Avneil and family were enjoying when they heard a voice.
Rea: "Avni, birthday main mujhe nahi invite kiya" (everyone look at rea , Neil felt that something bad will happen)
Neil: (in his mind)" I will not tolerate if she says one word against my Avni"
Neil:"Rea what do you want and why are you here"(he asked angrily)
Diksha:(coming in)"clam down Neil abhi tak humne kuch kiya bhi nahi"
Avni:" why have you guys come here?"
Diksha: "to give you your best birthday gift"
Neil:" birthday gift?"
Rea:"woh dekho"(the projector came down and showed all pics of avni at small age, it had part when she lost her mother, parts of her harsh childhood, and all the other bad memory avni could ever think of)
When the video ended....
Diksha: (whispering to Avneil) "accha laga ab dekho"(Avni had tear and angry in her eyes)
Diksha:" ladies and gentlemen today I will tell you something about the girl whose birthday party you all are attending "
Rea: "this girl (Avni) stole everything from me every since she was born. In childhood she stool my mom and dads love due to taking care of her than she grew up and stole my brother (Amol) from me and few days back my fiance"
Neil: (shouting) "Rea bus, not a single word more!!"
Diksha:"why Neil why let everyone know who she is" (facing audience ) " when small' she killed her own parents and she is also naajayaz !!"
Neil:"bussss!!!"
Avni: "Rea why are you lying tell them the truth don't lie"(Neela, Bebe and Sweata were consulting Avni while Neil was full of angry)
Neil:"Diksha bua and Rea stop lying and just go from here"
Diksha:"why Neil? and Avni i am lying tell them ,tum naajaayaz ho na, come on tell them."
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Avni: "woh...."
Rea:"woh kya speek na!"
Avni:( shouting in anger)" haan haan hun main naajaayaz"
Neela: "Diksha tum ye kyun kar rahi ho and Rea tum toh avni ki behan ho tum bhi"
Rea:"behan or woh bhi main is nalayak naajaayaz lardki ki never" (looking at Avni) "iska toh last name bhi nahi hai ,naamkaran hi nahi hua na"
Neil:(shouting)"Rea bus , Avni bus Avni nahi hai she is Mrs.Avni Neil khanna and mind your words when you talk to my wife"(Avni stunned at Neil's reactions and words)"And she did not kill her parents, your dadi Mrs.dayavanti Mehta killed them,which has been proven."(look at Avni) "who gave you the right to come in my house and talk to my wife like that, just get out before I do something" (yelling) "OUT!!!!"
Rea and Diksha got kicked out of Khanna mansion. Avni run to her room while Bebe Neela ma and Sweata followed her. All the guest left.
Neil: ( sat on the sofa saying to himself)" I couldn't make your birthday special Avni I am very sorry...I failed"
Prakhas: " Neil puttar..."
Neil: "papa mein Avni ka ye birthday special banana chahata tha lekin.."
Prakhas: "koyi nahi puttar ,tu Avni ke pass ja she needs you ,go"
Neil:"haan papa"
In Avneil's bedroom.....
Avni was talking to both her moms and bebe and trying to feel better ,just then Neil entered. Sweata saw him and signaled all to go out of room.
Sweata:(whispered in Neil's ears)"Neil kuch kar and make her feel good ,at least make her enjoy the rest of her birthday."(Neil nodded )
Suddenly Neil got an idea!
Neil: "Thanks mom"( sweata looked confused)"i got it ,she will become happy"
Neil went to Avni
Neil: "Avni get ready quickly we are going somewhere"
Avni:" Neil but where?"
Neil:"Avni you trust me?"
Avni: "yes."
Neil:"than no questions"
Neil and Avni got dressed and sat in car.
Neil:"Avni close your eyes"
Avni: "why?"
Neil: "avni you trust me na than close your eyes"(Neil put blindfold on Avni )
Neil: "Avni just sit and relax i will open blindfold when we reach our destination ok"
Avni:"okay"
They left from their house.
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Precap: "Neil's surprise and Avneil's romance."
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