《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 2|Avni' Birthday Planning
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By the way guys thanks for all sweet comments.
I wish you keep giving me good advice.
And also a little more background info I forgot to mention.
Neil's family already know about avni past and what she has went through and they all welcomed her except sweata but not for long😉😉
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Avni: "so that's what happened. "
Neil: "Avni yaar tum akele kyun gayi mishra uncle ne mana kiya tha pir bhi Tumhara main kya karu 😤😤"
Prakhas: "Neil puttar usko datana band kar ab sab theek hai. The main point is all of us are fine and together." (to avni with a big smile ) andar aa puttar"
Everyone took Avni Maddy bua and karina in, Neil stood by the the door smiling
Neil: (thinking to himself) "avni yaar tum itni aachi ho aur main bhi ek dam bhodhu hun. Tumne mere liye kya kuch nahi kiya. I am sorry for whatever mistakes I did."
Maddy bua: "Neil, Neillll!!!" (Maddy called him...making him come out of his thoughts )
Neil: "Haan bua what happened everything fine?"
Maddy bua: "yes Neil everything fine. You know Avni is just great absolutely great you are very lucky" (and she goes from there smiling while Neil stood there being proud of his wife)
Everyone was happy and thanking Avni when suddenly Avni was shocked with happiness at what sweata said.
Sweata: " Avni I am very sorry" (tears ran down her eyes as she spoke further )" Avni I have done so wrong and hated you all long but you still never let back on my .... I mean our family thank you very much Avni thank you."
Avni:(wiping her tear) "nahi aunty don't cry Plz I am not angry I have forgiven you"
Sweata:" if so than Plz don't call me aunty call me mom ya mummi ji "
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Avni :"mummi ji, mummi ji" (she said with tears of happiness in her eyes)
Sweata:" nahi beta dont cry Plz " (she said hugging Avni. Avni felt her family got completed)" Neil dekh how hurt she is take her to bedroom" (to Avni )" go Avni beta rest go"
Neil took avni in their bedroom.
Neil: "Avni you sit I will come with first aid box"
Avni:"no Neil, there is no need" (she got cut off in the middle)
Neil:"chup ek dam chup, and don't move from the bed"( he went to get first aid kit and started putting cream on Avni's hand.
Seeing the care in his eyes she felt so good and kept staring at him. After putting the cream he looked at her with loving eyes And they shared a eyelock )
This music played in the background:
Suddenly Neil's phone rang, it was Neela maa and due to the phone call the sweet eyelock was broken.
Neil: (shyly )"woh Avni"( Avni blushed and ran down stairs)" hayyyy haasi toh paasi " (than the phone rang again causing a frustrated Neil to pick up the phone)" yes"
Neela: "hi Neil ,sorry to disturb u but actually aaj avni ka birthday hai"
Neil: "kya avni ka birthday???!!!"
Neela:"haan"
Neil: (to himself) "idiot, stupid ,oloo ka patta, monkey it's avni's birthday and last night I told her to leave "
Neela: "monkey....?? Neil monkey ka nahi Avni ka birthday hai Avni okay"
Neil: "hain woh actually."
Neela: "okay okay (laughing) toh main bol rahi hun ki aaj Avni ka birthday hai and I want you to make it very special for her I hope you understand"
Neil: (smiling) " hain ma don't worry I will make this the best birthday for her even you will say wow!"
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Neela :"Thanks Neil I knew you will be the best person for this job"( and she cut the phone call)
Neil:(to him self )" Avni this birthday will be the world's best birthday for you and you will be so happy today" 😊😊😊
Neil went down and saw that Avni was in kitchen so he told everyone about Avni's birthday and they started planning. At evening Avni was in her room when Neil come in with a beautiful dress that he had to make Avni wear for her birthday party.
Neil: "Avni tum yeh pehen ke aa jao"
Avni: "but Neil for what?"
Neil: " woh actually...." ( he went into deep thoughts of thinking )
Avni:"woh kya? uske aage bhi toh bolo."
Neil: (nervously) "woh Maddy bua or karina ke liye party hai, to make them feel happy ,ok now go and change." (he said pushing her in th restroom )
Avni went and changed. When she came out she saw Neil sitting in on the bed looking at his files he saw her and was amused.
Avni:"Neil woh mujhe tumse kuch poochna tha"
Neil:"Haan bolo"( As saying that he started moving closer and closer to her)
Avni:"woh..."( Avni was speechless due to the closeness ,he than put his hand on her wrist and pulled her closer. Avni was so shocked and was also feeling good deep inside. Than Neil suddenly zipped her blouse/kurti which was slightly open. He than started moving back from avni who still in shock.)
Neil: (smiling at her reaction) " Avni tum mujhe kya keha rahi thi" (he was happy to see his effect on her)
Avni: "woh woh main main .....main bhool gayi"
Neil:"start eating badam to get better memory" (happy inside) "let's go sab hamara wait kar rahe hain"
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I hoped you liked it.
Plz comment any suggestion.
I love reading and replying to your comments.
Precap:
Girl1:" Avni ki birthday hum barbad kar denge"
Girl2: " yes ab dekho Avni , this will be the worst birthday of your life" (evil laugh)
Comments down who do you think the girls are and also comment If you liked it and for further suggestions.. 😊😊
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