Plot (6/10)

I found out the plot from the synopsis. The idea is not really different from others that I have seen where the person reincarnates with thier lover but the lover doesn't remember them. I would like to see how it will be excuted as there are only 3 chapters posted.

Grammar (9/10)

I didn't notice any major issues. As I read I didn't see anything glaring that stood out. There wasn't a major error that I noticed when I reread it. I can nitpick a few minor things but it isn't really much to take away from your writing.

Characters (7/10)

I would say the lack of chapters you have worked against you because I don't have a sense of who your characters are or any growth that they will have. You have developed some characters well though in the 3 chapters you have so far like the female lead.

Cover (10/10)

I started with the cover like usual and I liked what I saw. It was a cover that although simple still stood out. The 'It' factor was there and I could see myself picking this book up. The background and title give me a reminiscing feeling. They are in unity in my opinion. After reading the story and seeing the synopsis, I think it really fits.

Title (10/10)

I feel the title is the best it can be. I don't think you can change it to be any better than what it already is. Your title is something that would catch a reader's eye.

Detail (10/10)

I love the detail. You understand the importance detail has in understanding not only characters but the setting as well. You have invoked my senses to imagine your book happening in real-time. That's extremely important for a book's growth to be high. Your able to showcase that a book is more than just words on a page.

Originality (7/10)

I can't speak to the overall idea that you're trying to showcase as there isn't enough detail. Even so, I do see a few original ideas sprinkled in with what you have so far. I look forward to see how you will make the ideas in your book one of a kind.

Prologue/ Introduction(10/10)

As someone who personally likes having quotes at the beginning of a chapter, I see the appeal. I don't add song choice to my judging but the song fits with the writing you had. I like how dynamic your chapter is and it really flows well. I was invested in what was going to happen next and interested in the story.

Writing Skills (8/10)

I see work has been done to make the writing skills look good. I would say to work on syntax and diction. There are a few areas where it isn't the best when it comes to those two things. Also, the figurative language is amazing so if you can add more, you should.

Overall story(6/10)

I would say in my honest opinion that having more chapters helps your story to grow better. By adding more chapters, your book has more dimensions and can speak more to your writing ability. Whether chapters aren't posted or youre still writing, get more chapters to enhance the writing you have. Shorter/ Uncompleted books on wattpad will get fewer reads unless thier absolute perfection.

Overall Score: 83 (B+)

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