《Fantasy Tech Online》Chapter 2: A hunt gone wrong
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After looking at his status screen for a minute, Rellik notices something interesting.
-Looks like all the stats start at ten, well, I should start farming experience.
After closing his profile, he looks around. Noticing something wierd, he exclaims.
-Where is the starting village, Isn't there supposed to be one? Rellik thinks.
He starts moving to someone who seems to be in charge, taking the chance to look around. He is in a small clearing surrounded by a tall forest, everyone looks to be a player, based on the reaction. Reaching the boss, he asks.
-Do you know what's happening around here, this place doesn't look noob-friendly?
-I have two theories, the first one is that that there are no "original inhabitants", not likely, and my second theory is that this an uninhabited planet. Says the man, who looks like a vampire. Wait, aren't you Rellik? At Huntre's nod, he continues. I need someone else to start raiding the forest and maybe get an instance first.
HolyPaladin has invited you to join his party
Y/N
After Rellik accepts, a new screen appears.
Party name: N/A
Party members:
HolyPaladin
SinisterSnitch
LoveLife
HPless
RellikHuntre
He closes the screen and signals Holy to continue, As if waiting for that signal, he and some other people, probably his teammates, break from the crowd and head into the forest. After a short walk 10 minute walk, a small miniature earthquake starts.
-Something's wrong. Lo, Snitch, prepare yourselves, HP, ready a healing spell, Rell...
He wasn't able to finish talking when suddenly, a spike shot out of the ground and buried itself in his chest. Seeing their leader die, the others start to panic and are soon shot. By now, Rellik sees the aggressor, a large scorpion that blends with the surroundings, it doesn't seem to see him,
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-It probably can sense vibrations. Rellk thinks to himself before preparing a spell. Luna said that we have to create our spells on our own, well, let's see if this works.
Stellar magic is usually an end-game magic type that focuses on four main aspects, healing, light, area-of-effect and identification. Rellik wants to hopefully use that last aspect to know what he was facing. He launches his spell and a window appears above the scorpion.
Earthspike Scorpion (Boss)
Lvl: 15
-Damn, level 15. Rellik says before realizing his mistake.
The scorpion levitates an earthen spike and lauches it at him, he dodges and throws a condensed snowball. This action confuses the creature and he turns towards the spell, seeing an opportunity, Rellik freezes the scorpion's stinger, which seem to create the spikes. He then throws his condensed snowball towards a tree. The beast runs head first in it and it falls on him. Just to be sure, Rellik creates an ice spike and launches it in the creature's eye. He then gets assaulted by a ton of notifications.
You have gained 300 experience
You have leveled up (x2)
You have learned a spell:
Frozen ball
A frozen snowball, is heavy enough to cause vibrations and deals 0.5 damage per mana
You have learned a spell:
Ice spike
An ice spike , deals 5 damage per mana and penetrates armor (5%)
You have learned a spell:
Identification (Lvl 1)
A simple identification spell, gives a creature's name and level or an object's name and rarity
You have 4 points remaining:
Magic attack: 12 (+) Agility: 12 (+) Vitality: 10 (+)
Magic defense: 10 (+) Dexterity: 13 (+) Endurance: 10(+)
Attack: 10 (+) Intelligence: 10 (+) Charisma: 10 (+)
Defense: 10 (+) Wisdom: 13 (+) Luck: 10 (+)
After reflection, he decided to put 1 point in agility, intelligence, magic attack and magic defense as he could feel the strain on his mana and wanted to play an agile spellcaster.
Gender: Male Lvl: 3 Exp: 0/300 Remaining points: 0 Planet: Staiame Magic: Stellar, Shadow, Ice Defense: 10 Dexterity: 13 Magic attack: 13 Intelligence: 13 Class: N/A Magic defense: 12 Agility: 11 Attack: 10 Wisdom: 13 Diety: N/A Vitality: 10 Endurance: 10 Luck: 10 Charisma: 10
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