《The park master.》chapter 2 the park proofread
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"I will name him... Steve Dragonheart," said Jacob, with a slightly manic glitter in his eyes.
Ding.
Name accepted. Partnered Park Crystal dubbed ‘Steve Dragonheart’.
Link with Steve completed.
Unlocked class skills!
"What a wonderful name!" Mom exclaimed.
"It’s a great name son. Well done," said Dad, with a vigorous nod.
"Hahaha! Thanks!," said Jacob, with proud laughter bellowing forth from his chest.
Then Steve started to glow, rising from the depths of the ground to the surface. Suddenly, he began to talk.
"Hello Jacob. I am Steve, your park crystal," said Steve, serenely.
“Nice to meet you, Steve,” said Jacob.
"Likewise, Jacob," said Steve.
Out of nowhere...
Ding.
Quest: Help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Requirements: Have a park crystal.
Have the class ‘park master’.
Have talked with your park crystal.
Complete the naming your park crystal.
Objective: Help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Reward: 100 XP
"Wow! I got my first quest!" shouted Jacob.
"Congrats! What is it son?" asked Dad.
"It is a quest to help Steve absorb a mana stone," said Jacob.
"That is the quest that every level 1 park master gets when he gets his park crystal," said Mom.
"Jacob, may I please have a mana stone ?" said Steve.
I took the mana stones out of the horse carriage we rode to get here. I gave one to Steve and said:
"Here you go, Steve."
"Thanks, Jacob," Steve replied.
Steve swiftly absorbed the crystal, with a flash of light, and he grew a bit bigger.
Ding. Ding. Ding. Ding.
Quest Complete: Help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Requirements:Have a park crystal.
Have the class ‘park master’.
Have talked with your park crystal.
Complete the naming your park crystal.
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Objective: Help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Reward: 100 XP
You have leveled up!
All stats +3!
You gained 3 skill points!
Gained skill: Basic park magic.
Quest: Give Steve some of your mana.
Requirements: Complete the prerequisite quest, help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Objective: Let Steve absorb some of your mana.
Reward: 100 XP
Quest: Make your first park item together with Steve.
Requirements: Complete the prerequisite quest, help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Objective: Make your first park item together with Steve.
Reward: 200 XP
"Cool, I leveled up!" said Jacob, with a smile.
"Congrats son!" exclaimed my parents.
"Congratulations Jacob," said Steve.
"Thanks everyone!Steve, do you mind if I give you some of my mana?" asked Jacob.
"I don't mind Jacob. Actually, I want your mana so that we can grow our park," answered Steve.
"Okay, here I go," said Jacob.
Jacob walked to Steve and placed his hand on Steve’s crystal body. He felt l the mana pouring out of him and then into Steve. Jacob felt exhausted. Then the feeling stopped and Jacob’s Mom gave him a mana potion, completely washing away his fatigue.
Ding. Ding.
Completed Quest: Give Steve some of your mana.
Requirements: Complete the prerequisite quest, help Steve absorb his first mana stone.
Objective: Let Steve absorb some of your mana.
Reward: 100 XP
Quest: Help Steve absorb some materials.
Requirements: Complete the prerequisite quest, give Steve some of your mana.
Objective: Help Steve absorb some materials.
Reward: 1) 100 XP
2) Skill- Park materials absorption.
"Thanks for mana stones mom! " said Jacob.
"No problem Jacob," replied Mom.
"Thanks for the mana Jacob," said Steve.
"Anytime Steve.Steve, can you absorb some materials for me?" said Jacob.
"Yes Jacob," said Steve.
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"Thanks! I will go get them," said Jacob, with gusto.
I walked to the horse carriage and took a box, with building materials and more mana stones, and set it in front of Steve. Within seconds, the box transformed into light and entered Steve.
Ding. Ding. Ding.
Completed Quest: Help Steve absorb some materials.
Requirements: Complete the prerequisite quest, give Steve some of your mana.
Objective: Help Steve absorb some materials.
Reward: 1) 100 XP
2) Skill- Park materials absorption.
You have leveled up!
All stats +3!
You gained 3 skill points!
Quest:Let Steve expand his territory.
Requirements: Complete the prerequisite quest, help Steve absorb some materials.
Objective: Let Steve expand his territory.
Reward: 1) 150 XP
2) Unlock park menu
" Cool another level up!Mom, dad: shall I give Steve all of the mana stones?" said Jacob.
"Yes, but give them to Steve one piece at a time," said Dad.
"Yes, just do as your father said Jacob," said Mom.
"O.k., Steve, please grow your territory, I will give you mana stones," said Jacob.
I gave Steve the mana stones one by one. Steve’s crystal body began to grow and his territory grew to about 1km. As the mana that I gave him grew, the grass in his began to spring up, sprouting from the ground to a height of over a 30 cm. At some point when the mana levels had crossed a certain invisible threshold, Steve’s crystal body began to float.
"Wow! Steve you are flying!" yelled Jacob, in amazement.
"I know Jacob," said Steve.
Ding. Ding.
Completed Quest: Let Steve expand his territory.
Requirements:Complete the prerequisite quest, help Steve absorb some materials.
Objective: Let Steve expand his territory.
Reward: 1) 150 XP
2) Unlock park menu.
Park menu unlocked!
To open ‘park menu’ say: “Open park menu.”
"Open park menu," said Jacob.
Ding.
Park menu
Build
Create
Absorb
Terraform
I pressed ‘create’ and created a small pond outside the house. It cost 100 pp(park points).
“Now that I think about it, why is there a house on my land?” I quickly asked Mom.
"Because you will be living there sweetie, “ answered Mom.
"What did you say!" said Jacob
to be continued
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