《Questioning the Basic》Chapter 4: Intermission of Mostly Monologue
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Hello everyone! Thank you for your support for my story, this my first RR fanfic and I wonder if I had done a good job. :?:
The release schedule were disturbed due to this week were exam's weeks. Yes it's weeks. Two weeks. I already had the general idea in my head, but releasing it in Monday-Friday is a big no-no.
Does Anyone here knew how proofreading system work? I love to have proofreader, spellchecker eliminate my misspelling but, sometimes I typed same-sounded word in my story (it's a bit mystery), also my grammar were terrible.
Oh, and thank you for your review! I very appreciate it.
Likopilio
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You has created (Unique) Scroll of Lesser Teleport
[p=center](Unique) Scroll of Lesser Teleport[/p][p=left]Enable the caster to teleport another places instantly. Due to the novel application of magical technology used in the scroll, this scroll could be used for more than one time and the mana cost is tremendously lowered.[/p]
Only able to teleport to place that you had visited before or observed directly (via scrying)
Likehood of success were varies, there are possibility of teleport to fail.
Unless you specify the destination, you may ended in random place that the spell considered your destination
Unable to teleport to warded location.
Only be able to teleport yourself and no more than your maximum carrying capacity (depends on caster strength)
There are 15 minutes cool down per teleportation.
[p=center]Total Teleportation Remained : 102[/p]
"Succes!! Succes!! SUCCESS!" shout Vin, jumping with joy; waving the teleport scroll excitingly.
"See, Fou! Told you, it'd work!"
"Alright! Fine! You're right! Happy?" said Fou, lying on the table. Obviously exhausted, from "assisting" Vin with his research.
"Now, let's work! We're making more! Lots and lots more!"
"...."
[p=center]****[/p]
~Four hour ago
"Now Fou, the theory is pretty simple. I had told you that mana come from external source and magic is the art of harnessing those source, internal mana are CATALYST to redirect external mana."
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"But object, even simple object have at least a bit of mana, and this situation create equilibrium, which due to mana transport are passive transport, therefore, external mana stay outside and the object mana stay inside, because they had same mana concentration."
"We could try actively transporting the mana to object, which were the conventional way to create magical object. But in the process it'd take lots of mana, which defeat our purpose."
"First, increase the rate of transfer by open the "mana lid", you see mana lid were the limiting process of mana transfer, imagine like pouring water from half-closed bottle, it'd be faster to pour the water, if all the lid were open, magician have "more open" mana lid, that's why their mana regeneration is faster than melee class."
"Third, expand the mana capacity within the object. Therefore made it able to handle much more mana."
"Fourth, devoid the object of mana, thoroughly. Simply consume all the object's mana."
"Finally, insulate the object of outside mana with seal. When you want to use the magic, just release the seal. The sudden opening would influx the mana so fast, it'd destabilize the object to brink of explosion. BUT, the sudden influx will provide the energy, that will easily pass the "magical minimum energy requirement" of a spell."
"See for example if we use this technique on normal object it surely explode, but how if we use it in specially designed object, scroll for example."
"Mana influx would cause stress, and the energy that build up will took the most easiest pathway to relieve the stressful condition, namely the spell that we had inscribe. Therefore activating the spell. Of course we had to optimize many things and to optimize the many things, required relentless devotion."
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"Therefore your assistance."
"...."
For Fou, the next four hour could only described by one word. Torture.
"Fou, mana seems have an ineffective coefficient of partition... Half; k=0.5."
"Means, every time you used magic of the object to the fullest, or extract it. Half of it's original mana will remain. If we want to create this influx. At least the remaining mana should be negligent..... umm... let say... 0.0001%?"
"So?"
"Well... for each object that I already expand the mana capacity, you have to extract it... twenty times?"
"WHAT? One times extracting, took third of my mana and a quarter of my stamina!"
"Hmm... well you should put seal every time you finished the extraction, so the mana doesn't come back inside."
"...."
"Good luck!!"
[p=center]****[/p]
The system had recognized the novelty of your research. However, due to the elaborate steps that must be performed, it'd be impossible to generate it as skills.
"Aww.. Shucks."
Please name your invention.
"Eh? Weird..Umm... What should I name it?"
"Fou what do you think? The system asked me to name our research."
"Our? It's your research! I'm a manual laborer for hell sake!"
"Don't be so grumpy! I'm a nice colleagues you see, just a little bit.. demanding."
"....Whatever"
"Well, how about Vincent-Foulivious External Mana Harnessing Formulae."
You're naming the invention as Vincent-Foulivious External Mana Harnessing Formulae, correct?"
"Yes."
Your invention has been considered an intellectual property of yours! Any individual or groups that attempt to use Vincent-Fouvilious External Mana Harnessing Formulae,were obligated to asked your permission. You may charged royalty in exchange for allowing another people using your invention.[p=center]
Number of Patents: 1[/p]
You have learned Patent!
[p=center]Patent Beginner Lv.4[/p][p=left]Enable you to patent your invention, therefore protecting it as your property. To be counted as invention it doesn't need to be tangible. However, your invention should be novel and meet the definition of non-obviousness clause. Higher level patent skill enable you to allow more people to use your patent and pay the required royalty.
Novelty defined as new, means the invention never be made before or a significant improvement of the previous invention
Non-Obviousness defined as your invention should not be novel in obvious way. For example; you couldn't create a bucket, made it twenty time as big, painted red and blue, and patent it.
Higher level skill enable you to patent more things, even if it deemed ludicrous by the masses. For example; you could patent rounded corner.
[/p]
[p=center]Number of Patents: 1
Current Royalty Rate: 14%[/p]
"Wow! This world recognized patent system too! Hmmm... I wonder..."
"Patent Lesser Artificial Blood Formula, name it Vincent-Artificial Blood Recipe!"
Your invention has been considered an intellectual property of yours! Any individual or groups that attempt to use Vincent-Artificial Blood Recipe were obligated to asked your permission. You may charged royalty in exchange for allowing another people using your invention.[p=center]
Number of Patents: 2[/p]
Patent skill level up, Patent now Beginner Lv.5
"Hu hu hu hu! I'd make lots of money!"
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