《Mine (Z.H)》once
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-You look really pretty today babe
-Oh, thank you
-Is that a new skirt
(this is awkward, say something nice, anything else, maybe you should just stop talking)
-you noticed? uh yeah i just got it the other day
-Well, it looks real nice on you
(he's surprised you noticed, but you notice everything he does? just stop talking stop talking stop talking)
-Thank you, um your jacket is nice
-yeah
(great you've made him uncomfortable, say something nice, no just shut your mouth)
-ok, well um i'll see you tomorrow Zee?
(stop him, say something, anything, he's leaving)
-yeah, i wanted to ask you something
-is everything alright?
(he's worried about you, grow a pair and ask him)
-Uh, i was wondering if you would like to come over to my place, you know? only if you want to?
(you stuttered, why did you stutter?)
-really?
(he thinks you're joking, why does he think you're joking?)
-yeah, um he could hang out, study uh watch movies, whatever you want
-uh, ok i'll talk to my parents about it
-ok, um maybe this weekend on saturday?
(why the hell are you so awkward? pull your sht together Malik)
-yeah that sounds wonderful
-alright, I'll pick you up then
-ok, um bye i love you
(say it say it back, say something anything)
-ok bye babe
(he's shutting the door, you made him sad, are you stupid say something!)
-bye Zee
(he's walking away, say something, do something, he's inside, it's too late)
- a bottle of scotch is waiting for me at home
and he drives away.
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this is a really short chapter, and a different writing style, the sentences in parenthesis -()- are Zayn's thoughts, what is going on in his mind, do yall (sorry im from TX, just comes out) like this or should i just stick to the classic style?
i kinda like it.
ok bye guys, stay safe
Liz xx
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