《MLP FiM: The Hero of Equestria (MLP FiM x Male Pony Reader) (Season 1)》Chapter 12: Suited For Success
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In Carousel Boutique, Rarity was currently gathering fabric for her new gown for the Grand Galloping Gala.
Oh, Opalescence. Can't you just picture it? Moi, stepping out in a stunning new gown at the Grand Galloping Gala in Canterlot!
Rarity's cat Opalescence was sleeping on the piece of fabric that Rarity needed as Rarity swipes it off making Opal fall to the floor as she let's out a meow and walks to where she sees another piece of fabric that she can sleep on. That meow however made Rarity think that her cat is talking about her.
Why, yes! I did make it myself. Thank you so much for asking.
Opal then sleeps on another piece of fabric as Rarity also grabs that piece of fabric and starts sewing while Opal let's out a small growl.
Oh, Opal, of course you can help me. Thank you.
Rarity puts Opal on a nearby counter and makes her hold a pin cushion which she just let out an annoyed meow.
What's that? You want to help me more? Oh, aren't you the sweetest thing?
Rarity then makes Opal hold a ton of objects that she needed which included a bunch of yarn, some scissors, glue, and measuring tape which she meowed at and Opal had to balance in order to carry all of the supplies.
Careful now. Don't move. This shouldn't take long at all.
Meanwhile, outside of Carousel Boutique, Twilight and (Y/N) were walking towards the boutique together.
So what are you going to see Rarity for again, Twilight?
I'm hoping Rarity can fix a button on my dress for the Grand Galloping Gala.
Twilight opens her saddlebag to reveal a red dress in it.
Huh. No offense Twilight, but are you sure you want to wear that? It looks kind of plain to me.
Yeah, I'm sure.
You know you could also ask Rarity to make you a dress for the gala. I actually came to see if she could make me a suit for the gala.
Really?
Yeah, I know nothing about fashion and if there's one pony in Ponyville who does, it's Rarity.
Well, that is true. Anyways, we're here.
Twilight and (Y/N) then enter Carousel Boutique and they both looked around to see that she wasn't inside.
Huh? That's weird. Aren't these her normal business hours?
Yeah, but she's not here. Maybe she's working on something upstairs.
(Y/N) and Twilight walk upstairs and opened the door to Rarity's workroom to see her working on a dress while wearing red glasses.
Hey Rarity.
Shh!
Oh sorry.
Can't you see she's trying to concentrate?
Yeah. I guess I was right when I said that she's working on a dress.
I wonder what it's for.
I don't know, maybe it's something big.
Rarity got annoyed with both of them talking a bit too loud as she stopped focusing on the dress and turned towards (Y/N) and Twilight with a forced smile.
Is there something I can help you with?
Oh, so very sorry to trouble you, Rarity, but I need a quick favor. Could you please fix the button for me? It's my dress for the Grand Galloping Gala.
Twilight shows her dress to Rarity who just gasps
Oh, no, no, no! You can't wear this. . . old thing. You need a glamorous new outfit for the Gala and I'll make it for you. No problem at all. It will be my pleasure!
Oh, that's really sweet of you to offer, Rarity, but I can't let you do that. It would be so much work. This dress is fine.
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Twilight Sparkle. I insist on making you a new dress.
But. . .
Not another word! I won't take no for an answer.
Well, in that case. . . thank you for your generosity, Rarity. Knowing your handiwork, I'm sure it will be absolutely beautiful.
See? I told you.
Also, what brings you here (Y/N)?
Oh, that's right. I came to ask if you could make me a suit for the Grand Galloping Gala Rarity.
Of course darling! You can leave it to me to make you the perfect and most stunning suit for you for the Gala.
Thanks Rarity, if there's anypony that I can rely on to make a great suit for the Gala, it's you since you're the best making such wonderful clothes.
Rarity blushes at the compliment.
Why thank you darling.
Look out below!
Everypony heard a familiar voice from above as it gained their attention. Rainbow Dash then crashes through the roof and lands on (Y/N).
Ow! Again?!
*nervous chuckle* Sorry (Y/N). New trick. Didn't quite work.
Rainbow Dash got off of (Y/n) as he starts to use his magic to seal up the hole that Rainbow Dash made in the roof and soon enough, it looked good as new. Rarity then takes at good look at Rainbow Dash before gasping.
Hmm. . . Idea! I'll make you an outfit for the Gala too, Rainbow Dash.
Outfit for the what now?
I'll make one for you and you and all of you. Oh! And of course Pinkie, Applejack and Fluttershy too. Oh, and when I'm done, we can hold our very own fashion show!
What a great idea! If you're sure you can handle it.
Yeah, Rarity. I mean we all appreciate your generosity, but you don't have to overwork yourself like this.
Oh, it'll be a little bit of work, but it will be a wonderful boost for my business. Plus, fun!
Oh, I love fun things.
Well, if you say so Rarity. We'd all appreciate it.
Then it's settled. We'll have a fashion show starring us!
So all you have to do is make a different, stunning, original, amazing outfit for six mares and a suit for one stallion in just a few days?
Oh Rainbow Dash, you make it sound as if it's going to be hard.
You know Rarity, I may not be good at sewing, but I'm willing to help you out with any supplies that you need.
Really? You want to help me?
Of course, why not? Besides, there is no way that you could possibly handle all of this alone. So I'm willing to stay and help you out with all of the outfits Rarity.
Rarity smiled at that.
Thank you darling, in fact I will accept your help right now.
Alright then. Where do we start?
(Y/N) and Rarity then got to work while Twilight and Rainbow Dash left to do their own things and as they were working, out of nowhere Rarity began to sing.
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Rarity then stops for a second to ask Opal something.
Do you think it looks cheesy?
Rarity then heard someone applauding as she turned around to see it was (Y/N) who had an impressed look on his face.
Rarity, that was just beautiful.
Rarity blushed a little at (Y/N)'s compliment.
Why, thank you darling. Now let us get back to work.
Right.
It's been a few days as (Y/N) helped Rarity out with her making the dresses for her friends by getting her the right supplies that she needs. Eventually, Rarity finished working on the outfits for their friends as she asked (Y/N) to get them to come over so they can see the dresses.
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(Y/N) went over to each of the girls' places and told them to come to Carousel Boutique to see their finished dresses. Soon they all arrived at the boutique and knocked on the front door which is opened by Rarity who look excited.
Come in everypony! But first please, close your eyes and follow me.
Oooh! Surprises! Yay!
The Mane 6 did as they were told as they kept following the sound of Rarity's voice and she lead them to her workroom.
That's it. Keep them closed. Don't look. Okay, you can look now!
The Mane 6 open their eyes and they all let out a gasp to the the dresses made for the mares and the suit made for (Y/N). As Rarity goes to present each outfit, her cat Opal was happily playing around with them.
These are your new outfits. What do you think of your old duds now, Applejack? Pretty swanky, are they not?
Applejack dress was western themed as it came with a pair of green boots with red and white trimming and a band around the base of the boot, a green collar with an apple at the center, a hat similar to hers with a pair of apples on it, a green dress with a white band separating the dress from brown tassels, and a series of apples on the white band.
And Twilight! I made this dress for you and I designed each outfit theme to perfectly reflect each pony's unique personality.
Twilight's dress was a blue cape with a light blue saddle and stars that were either white and blue all over it and a star earring with another star at the center of the neck.
Oh, it took me forever to get the colors right on this one, Rainbow Dash, but I did it. Oh, and it turned out beautiful, don't you think?
Rainbow Dash's dress had a pair of gold sandals for her front hooves and wrapped around her legs, it also had a pearl necklace with grapes at the center, a pair of olive branches that rested on the head, and a rainbow colored dress with white puffy lining like a cloud.
I know you are going to love yours, Fluttershy. It just sings spring!
Fluttershy's dress had a pair of green sandals like Rainbow Dash's with green vine looking ribbons wrapped around the legs, a green neck adornment with a large blue butterfly at the center and one for her ear, and a flowing green dress with flowers in it.
And Pinkie Pie, look! Pink! Your favorite!
Pinkie's dress had a pair of pink shoes with white and light blue striped ribbons, a white hat with light blue lining it and a yellow button with pink frills on it, a pink bow tie holding a saddle striped white and light blue with white frills in front, on the back of it were light pink frills, dark pink frills, a white train with candy lining the base and a pink dress with a light blue ribbon following the base.
And finally (Y/N), here is your suit! It will make you look stunningly handsome along with the little hat accessory that I added!
(Y/N)'s suit was a (F/C) tuxedo with gold linings and cuff links, with a white undershirt, a black bowtie, a pair of (F/C) formal shoes, and it came with a (F/C) top hat that had his Cutie Mark symbol on it.
Aren't they all amazing?
There was a long pause as the Mane 6 stared at the dresses while Rarity was waiting for their answers with a huge smile on her face. (Y/N) was the first to react as he got an excited look and rushed over to his outfit.
Rarity. . . I. . . this is just. . . amazing! I love what you did with my suit! It's perfect.
When Rarity heard (Y/N)'s comment she grew a very huge smile to him before looking at the rest of the mares who were quiet for a bit.
Wow. . . they're. . .
Yeah, they're. . .
They sure are. . . somethin'.
Yes! Something.
I love something! Something is my favorite!
It's. . . nice.
(Y/N) looked over to the five with a raised eyebrow as he couldn't tell whether they liked or disliked the dresses.
Um, you girls alright?
Indeed. What's the matter? Don't you like them?
They're very nice. . .
And we're plumb grateful 'cause you worked so hard on them.
Twilight and Applejack were trying to force compliments until Rainbow Dash decided to be blunt.
Mine's just not as cool as I was imagining.
Twilight and Applejack then glared at her.
What? She asked.
I guess what we're all saying is that they're just not what we had in mind.
(Y/N) then walked up beside Rarity with a confused look.
Do you girls really not like these dresses? I mean, Rarity worked hard on these and I personally think that you all would look beautiful in them.
The five blushed when (Y/N) said that before shaking it away.
Well we all do still think they're really good dresses, but there are some things we probably wished that Rarity could've added or taken away.
The other girls nodded and agreed with Twilight on that.
*sighs* That's okay. That's okay. Not a problem. There's plenty more where that came from. They were only a first pass. You're my friends and I want you to be one hundred and ten percent satisfied. Not to worry, I'll redo them.
Oh, Rarity. You don't have to do that. They're fine.
I want them to be better than just fine. I want you to think they're absolutely perfect.
Are you sure? I mean, we wouldn't wanna impose.
Oh it's no imposition. Really, I insist.
Well. . . if you insist on remaking the dresses then I'll still help you out with making them.
This is exactly what I want (Y/N). I want you all to be a hundred percent satisfied with what I make for you.
Well, in that case. . . thank you again, Rarity.
As the mares leave, Rarity has a forced smile on her face until they all leave and she sighs.
What have I gotten myself into?
(Y/N) then goes beside Rarity and pats her on the back.
Don't worry Rarity, like you said you want to make our friends happy, so that's exactly what I'm going to help you do.
Rarity just smiles and blushes at (Y/N).
Thank you darling. Now let us improve these dresses that our friends need for the Gala.
(Y/N) nodded as they both get back to work on making new and improved dresses for the girls.
Later on, Rarity was working on another dress as (Y/N) gave her more materials that she requested for and right now here mane looks messed up which gave (Y/N) a worried look on his face.
Are you alright Rarity? You look stressed.
Don't worry darling I am completely fine, but thank you for asking.
Just then, Fluttershy shows up which both (Y/N) and Rarity take notice of.
Hello? You wanted to see me, Rarity?
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