《Particles of Paradise》⌥ Afterword
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So at last the first arc of Particles of Paradise - The land of Avalon has concluded. If you've read till here I'm very grateful for your loyalty. This first arc was an introduction to the world, its characters and the powers that come with it. I started publishing this rewrite version of my old shitty web novel called 1608:Case on 25th April of this year and it's been months since then, 73 days to be exact. This last chapter, tho being a sub-chapter, was the longest yet. And I'm glad how it turned out. After days of writing this has finally faced the readers and I really want to know what you the reader thinks of it. Feel free to criticize my web novel as long as it is constructive and not directed hate. The last few chapters had suffered some delays which I'm truly sorry for but as I'm a student and my classes have started now it's become really hard to give time for things I like, but I'll try so that this problem doesn't continue with the next arc of this web novel.
Speaking of which, maybe I'll reveal its name to you reader, as a token of gratitude for reading till this far. So the arc will be called "The Forest of Azazel" or the First mission arc, here you will see development of the recently introduced characters and how they develop their relations with our protagonist, there will also be one hell of action and a ton of new information. But as I have to prepare for it I'll have to take a break, no no please don't click off, it won't be a long one I promise, only 2 weeks, and only for you reader there will be a surprise coming out next week so you won't be bored. There will be a new upload schedule implied and more information about it will be shared next week with the surprise.
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With that I will sign off and wish you, my readers, good health and a good day. Bye-bye and keep reading the new chapters I upload, as always it will be highly appreciated if you drop a like and maybe take some of your time off to comment something.
-Shingaka
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Shades of the Moon
I'm rewriting this story! I have taken down Arc 2 and Arc 3 already to avoid spoiling my new novel. The only reason I'm keeping the first 10 chapters is nostalgia; the writing is awkward and the story is not plotted out properly, but it's here if anyone wants to compare it to the new one. If you'd like to read a more professionally written version of this story, I highly suggest checking out my Synergy. Synopsis version too-many-to-count: “I see,” Kiona said. “But . . . you’re changing once again, aren’t you?” The entity considered her question, lifting a clawed hand towards the night sky. They observed the back of their hand idly, watching the glowing orange veins pulse alongside their pitch-black exoskeleton. The wind picked up right then, and Kiona shivered—just as much from the cold as from the savage grin on the creature's face. “That’s right,” the entity said, clenching their hand slowly into a fist. They let out a quiet laugh, staring defiantly at the Moon as it rose from behind the clouds. “We are shades, yet not exactly. Not like the others. Here, in this world, we've become something more. We are the Shades of the Moon.” There was a heartbeat of silence, during which Kiona joined the entity in their skygazing. The light-green Moon loomed over the city, shining like the entity's eyes. It promised otherworldly knowledge and terrible secrets. It promised progress. It promised change. In that moment, Kiona couldn't have imagined anything more beautiful. “Shades of the Moon, huh?” she said, smiling a bit. It had a nice ring to it.
8 192The Shadow Domain - A litRPG
Carter Hart receives a pair of glasses which allows him to enter the Virtual fantasy world of Baria. He is pulled into the dark underworld of an MMORPG and has to fight to survive. Literally. On his quest he meets another adventurer named Alora with her own secret, a plot for revenge. Not any revenge, revenge against the elite, for they have taken something that was very precious to her, her hardcore account. Together they venture forth into this magical world, Gnome wizard and Human ranger. But as soon as the son of Elite businessman Chang, finds out about her revenge plot, he sends assassins after her. In real life. This is the start of the Baria tales. The story of how an a-grade student on his way to engineering school in a dystopian world meets a girl from a rich elite background and together they find a way to show the elite how to have humanity again.
8 174The Benefits of Hearing Voices
Darius never liked the voices, so he decided to try to silence them. But did it work? Hey guys! Hope you like this story!
8 156The Year Before Eternity
A retelling of the classic tale, Beauty and the Beast. After 100 years, Kieran Pietre Erik, Crown Prince of Gaerin, has lost his chance to break the curse that befell his kingdom. Now, he lives for all eternity as the beast. The only people left alive in the abandoned castle to keep him at bay are a maid, her child, and the Prince's guard. Stuck in an endless cycle, they've lost all hope of freedom. Until someone resets the curse. Astrid Delacroix is beautiful and intelligent - and vain. She longs to be free of her boring life in her small hometown, where she has to put up with the small-minded. She toys with the people around her; she knows she doesn't belong in their world. The only things keeping her from running are her ill father and their crippling finances. When her father, in a desperate attempt to steal a rose made of solid gold from an abandoned castle, is held captive by a beast, Astrid switches one form of captivity for another. But her attempts to gain her freedom trap her into the curse that imprisons the castle's inhabitants. Now, with a new addition to the curse, they are given one, final year to free themselves from this neverending nightmare.
8 215Everythink is grey
A story of a teenage protagonist living in one of the few safe zones in a post apocalyptic world with his friends as they just try to make it day to day.
8 386Avneil - being with you
Started: December 18, 2017Ended: August 13, 2019Status: Completed Editing: In process Description:Based on Avni and Neil's married life.....this story is a Fan Fiction of Avneil from the show Naamkaran.....this story continues from the point when Dayavanti is captured by the police......This story will be about the ups and downs of avneil through their beautiful journey of marriage....Do check it out if ur a Avneil fan...
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