《Etryria [discontinued]》Explanation, Please Read.
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For those who haven't read or didn't know the description of my story.
It was a guy who loves, light novel, manga, anime, and GAMES, then he was lucky enough to
be a GOD. And what does he do? he created his own GAME WORLD, because he wants to have an adventure, he wants to
live like those characters he had played in RPG Games. That is what the story is all about.
And being a gamer, who wants to be Super OP at the start?(well some people do,but still), of course he wants to star "FAIR" but with a little boost and also have his own "Special skill" to be different.I know gammers will understand this, but being let's say "WEAK" then become "STRONG" is fulfilling being a gamer. That's what Laurence/Elous want, he wants to live like those "anime/rpg games" with special ability. Of course he would like to be trained, never seen an RPG game where you should teach yourself of course you need a master for an specific "JOB/CLASS", and because his, let's say HUMAN(i haven't placed his race yet) he doesn't know everything cause he's not a God anymore, he's not an ALL KNOWING anymore, but he knows a lot of common things like what ETRYRIA is made of cause he created that. My first chapter to 19 was just a background story of the GAME WORLD, i don't know if you have read thatbut i've said it in my chapters. And also about him creating his own body, well it's about ELOUS respecting the job of MARZANNA being in charge of the reincarnation process, i also have said that in the story. If he want's to have a companion but "weaker" why would he make weak companions? and if he created "STRONG" companions, whats the thrill to that if we know that they're strong and no one can beat them? if i do that, that will not be original(I think). It will be just boring if he created or reincarnated to a Super strong being and with a snap of a finger poof, all the enemies are dead, what's the thrill to that? or pretend to be beat up, then suddenly change the course
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of fight and win.
I know we all have our liking of a certain story, some likes op, Super op, or weak to strong, and i respect that.I'm not a professional writer,
i'm just a college student writing this story when i have the "time" to do so, i'm not requesting for money or "donation", i'm just doing this or rather
writing this story because i like it, as i always say, my story is not of everyone, some may hate it or like it. But even tho you hate it now because of the
"changes" from Super Op God, to a "Weak" one, it okay, thank you for reading my chapters, and for those who like it thank you as well. Please don't expect too
much from me. I'm just a normal guy, not a professional writer.
Thank you for reading this boring message. :)
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