《Freedom in the New World》Q/A, Reader feedback
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James experimented with the Rod of 10th tier warding. He was amazed when he discovered he could use the rod to directly cast the spells that it could imbue into wards, of which it had many. The downside being those spells would act like he was the caster.
So, to use the rod for directly casting spells was very mana intensive for him. He could perhaps cast 5 spells of the 10th tier before his mana ran out. The power of those spells would also be greatly reduced, so It really was not worth it right now to use the rod for casting.
Using the rod for its warding function simply exacted a price paid in gold. James set up four wards of the 6th tier spell, Control Weather, but he made it so that they acted as if they were cast at the 10th tier. The four weather control wards he installed carried a hefty price for that instillation, 400 million gold in total.
James linked the warding to the existing ward network and was about to give it a test. Then he remembered that the NPC’s he had just made were still standing in their pastures. James quickly lead each group of NPC’s to their respective homes. Now that he thought about it, he would have to add more houses.
With the NPC’s safe from the rain, he used the wards to create a cloudy sky, with some light rain. As the wards worked their magic, he stood there in the rain soaking in the feeling of the rain upon his skin. It was beautiful, then something unexpected happened.
Plants of all different shapes and sizes began to sprout from the ground. When given the water, the aura of the trees had brought forth a bounty of plants. James smiled; this was a pleasant surprise. James cut the rain as the bright sky returned and the plants were still growing. By the time all the plants had stopped growing, over an hour had passed.
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James looked over to the full lake beside him, where he saw several different species of fish swimming around. James had an idea, “Let us do an ocean for the next floor. James was very curious if such an environment was even possible to create in the game currently. He would find out when he tried.
Several more hours later and James had cleared the floor of all the excess foliage. He had however kept all the resources he gained from removing that foliage. There were all kinds of edible plant he had harvested. One of the few plants he decided to leave alone was a rather strange tree that had grown in the Horse folks’ pasture.
The black tree seemed to shine still wet from the light downpour. Its branches were thin and withered. On the entire tree there were no more than a dozen leaves. Contrary to the appearance of the tree and its branches, the leaves sparkled green almost seeming to glow.
James had tried to pick a leaf to examine it. The leaf was vibrantly green, he could see golden ripples washing across the surface of the leaf. When he brought the leave closer to his face, he saw what appeared to be a tiny stem branching off from the stem of the leaf. At the end of the stem was a tiny bulb, like the beginning of flowers upon trees.
The leaf began to blacken and wither, then it crumpled itself up into a small ball before exploding into a wave of green and gold light. Everywhere the light touched it left behind a little bit of itself. James looked at his health to see how much damage he had taken, only to realize he had not taken any.
Instead he discovered that his health bar had extended past its maximum by a small degree. James tried examining the tree to obtain more information, the only information it would give him was its name, “The Black tree.”
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He supposed he would have to wait and see what would happen. “A tree that bears fruit which can increase your maximum health. How exciting!”
There was a burst of light as Takeda appeared next to the tree. “What the fuck?!” Takeda immediately ran over to James, “I could not believe it when they told me that you were the one who found it.” James was stunned for a moment, apparently, he had discovered something important.
“Does this mean that you are going to tell me what it is?” Takeda smiled, “Have you ever heard of an old game called Minecraft?”
By the time that Takeda was done explaining James’ head was swimming. He had apparently hit the lottery of RNG, (Random Number Generation), and now had a tree that could grow the Notch apples of Minecraft. The apples would take a very long time to grow, however.
“I expected trees that grew golden apples, but this is ridiculous.” Takeda was too busy scanning the tree, something about copying it to a testing room for study. Takeda looked at him, bent over laughing then waved goodbye and logged out.
“What comes next?” James opened his menu to check the time, 6:05. It was time to get ready for his date.
SUNDAY
James walked in the door of his home, maybe he should invite her back to his place next time. He ran through his morning routine.
James received a call just after he stepped out of the shower, it was Takeda.
What was strange was that he was whispering, “James! Thank Buddha you picked up. You need to log in NOW!” then the line went dead. This was not good.
He quickly dried his head and then put on some sweats then logged into Yggdrasil.
James was not happy when he saw the system message.
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Mythran's Master Of All - Continued (Completed!)
This started out as Mythran's property. It's a tribute to his story and I wanted to continue Ren's tale. The first 16 chapters by Mythran are here: Master Of All, Jack Of None Please Note: This story has been completed at 10,010 pages or 2,752,750 words, Dec. 7th, 2018 (Previous records of 2 million March 31st 2018, First record of 1 million on May 30th, 2017) 17 year old Ren Haddon hasn’t had an easy life. His drug addict parents used him as a lab rat and left him almost crippled for life. After they were caught, he went on to spend his life in the hospital. Under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew... until that day. That fateful day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game called F.L.O.W. (‘Fantasy Life Online World’). These are his adventures.
8 292Saint's Supporter
Dumped into a world by myself, set up with a class that requires others to excel with just over a week to prepare for a fight with a literal god. This is just another betrayal to add to the list. I won't stop until I find the person who put me in this situation, along with my friend who I dragged into this mess. Transferring to another world and gaining special powers is a dream for some, but if they were dropped into my shoes... they'd probably give up. But I won't. This story has the following elements: Male MC Light RPG mechanics (no in-story stat tables) Non-standard class for the MC Moderate violence A mix of solo fights and group battles with a balance of tactics, skill and ability usage If you're looking for the below, you may be disappointed: Instantly overpowered MC (no prior skills in combat, every bit of growth is earned) Female MC (duh) Explicit sex (may be referenced, but no NSFW chapters) Health bars (damage taken and given reflects reality) Harem Gore and ultra-violence **This story is a First Draft, changes may take place during the process. Three chapters per week at minimum.** **So, this is set up as a GameLit transported to a new world story initially, but it focuses on how such a system would work in real life. There are levels, abilities and mana pools, but damage and health are realistic and combat is fast and frantic. I think that is an interesting mix. If you have any questions, just ask in the comments. I'm always happy to discuss anything in relation to the story.**
8 228Sonny Samhain
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8 151Emerald Gaze
Just as a rough young girl seems to have hit rock bottom, a stroke of fate turns what was about to become one of the lowest moments of her life into a shining opportunity to carve out a new path for herself when it is discovered she has a great talent within her. She need only learn how to use the new tools available to her to do so. Well that is if she can actually figure out how in the hells things work around here. Seriously, why is she expected to just know around half of these things when they hadn't even mattered to her until now? Partially inspired by Forge of Destiny.
8 113The First Half
"Kyran Hall, the Goddess Sada bestows you this gift." With those words, his life changed dramatically. He was granted a System, unique among all others, and abilities unseen before in the world. Granted boundless potential, he and his party would soon rise to prominence, becoming some of the greatest adventurers the world had ever see- *Ahem* Sorry, I've been told by the MC to say he's just an average guy. Nothing special about him. A traditional fantasy story with a (hopefully) new twist on the magic system. There's adventure, combat, monsters, magic, banter, and of course: pork belly. I'm new to writing fiction, and still learning to be more efficient in my brainstorming and editing process. If you have any feedback or suggestions, let me know! If you see any typos, mock me as much as you want because I should feel bad about it.
8 75Given&Taken|FOREST
"Дараа нь тэндээс буцаж ирж чадна гэдэгтээ итгэлтэй байвал ойруу яваарай.Тэнд чиний төсөөлж байгаагаас илүү аймшигтай зүйл байдаг юм."INSPIRED BY:ENHYPEN THEORY.
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