《Abyssal Fortress girl in another world》Chapter 19: Commander went Dokaan !
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Starting from the tip of my finger a black mist began to surround my entire body. Then in a small moment, my vision became pitch back, I felt like floating in the ocean under the warm light. But it didn't last so long before I start to enjoy the feeling my vision returns and high ceiling of the dry dock entered my vision.
I definitely shrunk because previously I could just touch the ceiling by moving my arm bit above my eyesight that means I am transformed. Well, to be frank, I am a bit hesitant to check my appearance remembering Avon's ghost like an appearance. Especially his sunken eyes and pale slimy looking skin keeps popping in my mind.
After preparing my mind, I slowly moved my hand upward and opened my eye. And I saw a feminine hand wearing a long formal glove with a sharp end like Abyssal Combat Hand reaching elbow covering my tannish skin. I can't remove it because it is part of my skin.
Well, at least it is better than having slime like a skin. Then touching to my head, I noticed I have short and messy hair just like I had in my previous world which is a little bit disappointing.
So far so good
or not!
Because I felt something sharp in my mouths and by this shape, I have a very sharp row of triangle teeth. This is bad, but I can cover with my lips that makes a somewhat plausible to pass as a normal human right?
[Master] I heard Kurogane's voice, I saw he is standing in front of me with red ears along with Woods holding a large worn-out coat while his gaze pointing towards other direction.
Oh... WHAT SEC!
Why I can see, above Woods!
[Woods. come. here.]
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[But commander you need to dress up first]
I quickly took that great coat from his hand and wore, I pointed place right beside me.
[Stand. here. now. this. is. command]
[Y-yes ma'am] with a dark expression Woods stood right beside me.
Looks like I unconsciously used Aura of the ruler for a second. Sorry, Woods but this is important.
Yep as I thought, his bald shiny head only reaching my shoulder. Using my Smart Vision, I calculated my height by comparing to Woods and an answer was 6.9ft.
Well...I had nothing to say.
[Master wai-]
Before hearing Kurogane I took one step suddenly everything becomes blurry for a second and.
*BOOM!*
[Hahaha]
[Just like in the cartoon]
[Commander went Dokaan !]
I slammed into reinforced wall of the dock in insane speed creating wall art of my self.
To be laughed by those idiots I want to disappear.
What happened?
Kurogane runs towards me and spoke.
[Master due to the large difference between your Abyssal form and Human form you will face some difficulty for controlling your strength.]
Tell that sooner and how do you know that?
[How.do.you.know.that?]
[Once a time I visited dragon valley to meet an old friend of mine that time I saw young dragons training to control their strength in their human form.]
So this thing happens in a fantasy world as well.
[Don't worry commander in this dock we have a special training room specially built for people just went surgery to become combat cyborg. Ma'am, you will control your strength in no time] Woods said with a confident tone.
*1 day later*
Currently, now I am sitting in the special room and stacking block with shaking hand. It was a thing that anyone normal people can do even with their eyes closed. But for me, it felt like trying to write with my feet it both uncomfortable and hard. Learning to control my strength was very hard in just one day I destroyed more than 100 blocks and destroyed 20 walls I couldn't even take one step without slamming towards wall or ceiling and holding something was even more impossible one time I got a bit frustrated from slamming wall like a car without wheel I punched a wall.
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As result completely destroying the room along with the building that used to store socket soldier's uniforms but thanks to that I got chance to switch their rag-like clothes to new clean uniform and try to move in my Abyssal form. I also noticed In my human form I have large 'X' shaped scar between my eyes just like in my Abyssal form that didn't completly healed by Mad Cell because unknown substance Avon used in his beam.
I could easily move in my Abyssal form even stack blocks that smaller than my pinky without any problem but in the future, I definitely leave the abyss so I must learn to control my strength.
*Crack*
[Ah!]
I turned another block into a speck of dust.
[Master that 200th block please little be more carefull]
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