《Rebirth Of The Commando》Chapter [ 16 ] - Do You Smell Something Sour?
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Rebirth Of The Demon
Chapter Sixteen [ 16 ]
Do You Smell Something Sour?
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Back in the classroom, everyone who had crowded around Li Feng’s desk looked at him as though he had his head jammed by the door.
Looks of ridicule were thrown towards Li Feng’s direction after he made his bold statement and seeing that made him furrow his brows, getting no response from anyone, he then repeated himself.
“I said! It’s time to discipline some rabid dogs!” Everyone clearly saw Li Feng directing his gaze towards the group that barged into the class and started this whole mess of a situation.
Poof! His words almost made his classmates fainted from shock, even they couldn’t believe what they heard. Li Feng, the person who had silently received the brunt of the bullying head on ridiculing his bullies before their faces? Unbelievable!
“We heard you the clearly the first time round Feng Gege.. There is no need for you to repeat your words, everyone present knows that they are rabid dogs that bites anyone they see.” At this point of time, Ouyang Feng Ling interjected and almost made a few people burst out in laughter under the tensed atmosphere.
“Oh! I thought you guys didn’t get that I was calling these guys here rabid dogs hehe.” Feigning a look of embarrassment, Li Feng rubbed the back of his head sheepishly.
’As expected of my Feng’ Er, our hearts are indeed linked as one[ 1 ]’ Li Feng mused as his lips raised upwards into a charming arc.
Li Feng snuck a glance at Ouyang Feng Ling who was also coincidentally looking towards him and sent her an ambiguous wink. The quick-witted female then pretended to wipe her mouth with a napkin in order to disguise her charming smile.
The back and forth exchange of sarcastic remarks between Li Feng and Ouyang Feng Ling was indeed meant for the group of five who interrupted their lovely date. Every single one stabbed deeper than the other, it felt as though they were being bitch slapped after each sentence was dropped.
“Pfft..” The Zhou Cousins didn't keep it in and snorted out a muffled laughter under their breaths, it was indeed hilarious as they watched their faces change throughout the public humiliation.
“What the fuck are you chuckling about you fuck faces..” Miao Jin Gang wasn’t someone who has a very good temper either, after being told to his face that he was a rabid dog made him feel humiliated, much less by someone that he had bullied previously and that annoying chuckling only served to add insult to the injury.
“What are you going to do about it? Hit me then keke..” Zhou Da Er’s ears twitched at the mention of both him and his cousin, sporting a wide grin, he then attempted to agitate him even further.
“This is none of your business so you’d better piss off..” Although Miao Jin Gang wasn’t afraid of getting into a brawl with the notorious pair, the time still isn’t ripe for them to face each other.
“You are in no position to tell us what to do you dumb oaf. You six, barged into our classroom and outright insulted one of our classmates before our eyes shows that you are not giving us any respect so if you are in our position, do you think this still concerns us?” Zhou Da Er rebuked coldly as he pointed them out one by one.
The entirety of the 3-1 class nodded in agreement to his words, even the six intruders couldn’t find any words to refute them, helpless, they could only swallow this in silence.
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“What’s with the chatter? Let’s just take them down..” Zhou Jin Xing raised a brow and suggested firmly without any hint of teasing, he was displeased at the fact that strangers throwing a hissy fit within their safe haven.
“Zhou Cousins, this is the matter between us and this waste so cease your blabbering.” The revealing female didn’t have any scruples and rudely blurted out unhurriedly before she shifted her finger away from the Zhou Cousins and towards Li Feng.
Outraged that they were being disregarded, scowls instantly emerged on the faces of the pair that only made them look much more imposing but as they were about to give in to their impulses, Qing Yun Feng stopped them with a mere shake of his head.
“Tch!” They both clicked their tongue in annoyance and stopped in their tracks, Miao Jin Gang who managed to catch that moment of interaction between the trio inwardly breathed out a sigh of relief and shot a strange look towards the weak-looking person standing behind the Zhou Cousins.
Whilst he was in the midst of his thoughts of trying to figure out who that person was, the revealing female then hissed “Y-you.. W-who gave you the courage to say that..” Her voice trembled slightly as she couldn’t believe the words nor the things she saw today.
Was this the same person whom she had suppressed all this while, the cowardly person who endured everything she threw..
Her vulgar actions did not go unnoticed and Ouyang Feng Ling’s eyes gleamed with a deathly chill, how could she withstand someone doing that to her Feng Gege!
Li Feng who caught onto the flash of chill within her beautiful eyes immediately stopped her with a knowing glance as doing anything impulsive might risk ruining both her image and his plans.
Noticing the confidence that Li Feng exuded, Ouyang Feng Ling’s worries and anger then instantly dissipated into thin air.
For unknown reasons, Ouyang Feng Ling felt as though her Feng Gege had undergone a drastic change recently, not only what he had shown on the surface so far but the entire package.
If it was the Li Feng of the past, he would undoubtedly tried to solve this in the most peaceful way possible and not adding fuel to the fire like what he is doing now.
If she isn’t mistaken, Li Feng should have started to change right after that accident that he had gotten into and thinking back of the things that have occurred after, her eyes started to glaze over.
All of her memories still seemed as vivid as though it had only happened yesterday, the images slowly flashing past like a movie. The time when Li Feng had scared off those hooligans, including the ambiguous moments they shared and the domineering words he had softly whispered her ears still rings to this day.
’Ahh! How shameful, what am I thinking about right now!’ Ouyang Feng Ling chided herself for recalling the embarrassing moments but couldn’t resist sneaking a glance of Li Feng’s side profile.
Although she does not know what had triggered this sudden change, the current Li Feng doesn’t seem that bad at all, if not, it even added more of a mysterious charm about him that attracts her greatly.
Tapping her reddened cheeks, she then managed to pull herself out of her daze and turned her focus away from the charming man and back to the conversation that was starting to heat up.
“Chen Ling, this flawless face is what I rely on to earn my daily expenses so I’d appreciate that you kindly remove it somewhere far away from my face.” Li Feng called out to the woman who had her nails hovering centimetres away from his face.
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“And what if I do not move?..” Chen Ling responded crudely after hearing his cheeky words but indeed, Li Feng’s face was the type that draws in hatred from all the women and men alike as it is too flawless. How can a man be so beautiful!
“You know… I have a principle and that is to not hit women but please do take note that the principle of mine does not go the same way for bitches..” Li Feng smiled light-heartedly and grabbed her finger.
Everyone’s eyes widened once more after he had done the unexpected yet again, flirting around with Chen Ling before Miao Jin Gang’s eyes is akin to asking for a death sentence.
“Hey.. Wasn’t there a rumour that was spreading around recently regarding Miao Jin Gang pursuing Chen Ling?” Someone nudged the person beside him and whispered in curiosity.
“Yeah, I have also heard of it, almost everyone in school including the teachers knows about it… Miao Jin Gang the Basketball Club’s captain is indeed chasing after Chen Ling the female gangster…”
“Yeah, I saw him handing a bunch of roses over to Chen Ling the other day..” Another student contributed to the conversation.
The parties involved definitely heard the conversation that is currently ongoing as they weren’t exact whispering..
Chen Ling’s face turned beet red but no one knows whether it was from anger or from coyness so they could only watch.
Miao Jin Gang wasn’t as composed as he was before, his gaze never breaking away from Chen Ling’s finger which is currently being grabbed by another man other than himself.. His fists were clenched tightly into a ball within his pockets and anger was clearly evident within his bloodshot pupils.
Ouyang Feng Ling frowned slightly but didn’t utter a single word, her eyes was however glued onto Li Feng. Feeling as though a predator was breathing down his back, Li Feng retracted his hand.
Without saying a word, Chen Ling ran out of the room with her followers in tow but Miao Jin Gang alone, stayed behind and glared at Li Feng.
“We’ll meet at the basketball court after school, there will be consequences if you don’t show up, I assure you..” He practically squeezed the words between the gaps of his chattering teeth and left the room in a hurry. Miao Jin Gang knows that if he stayed any longer, he would not be able to hold himself back and chop that waste into several pieces.
“Hey Xiong Di( Bro ) [ 2 ], do you need us to accompany you? I’m afraid you won’t be doing something as innocent as playing basketball but rather something else..” Zhou Jin Xing suggested kindly, he did not want to see a fellow classmate being bullied, especially one that he admires.
“Thanks Xiong Di but I think I can handle them alone! I doubt they could even harm a single hair on my body keke!” Li Feng waved his fist around in an intimidating manner and cackled.
“Ugh haha! Alright we’ll look forward to see how you would beat them all up into a pulp!” Zhou Da Er laughed heartily but no matter how he looked, Li Feng still gives him the impression of someone with bark and no bite.
“Haha! You guys can come but please try your best not to fall in love with me after witnessing my legendary skills, your Feng Da Ge is only interested in women!” Li Feng raised his head in an arrogant manner and patted both of their shoulders just like how an elder talks to their junior but they don’t seem to pay any mind.
“Hahaha!” The pair laughed out loud as they find Li Feng to be quite the comedic person whereas Feng Qing Yun stared silently at Li Feng as if he is an extra-terrestrial that hailed from outer-space.
Li Feng finds these people to be worth befriending as their words suggested that they would tag along just in case anything goes awry but put it in another way so as to not hurt his pride.
Their willingness to help out a fellow classmate is pretty admirable and that alone proves that they are really kind-hearted people.
“You guys can continue your chat, I’ll go now..” Ouyang Feng Ling stood up and left, seeing this, Li Feng immediately chased after her.
“…” Zhou Da Er found it to be strange for the stupid gorilla to be so quiet but when he turned to look at him, Zhou Jin Xing had tears streaming down his eyes like never-ending waterfalls, as they were standing pretty close to each other, he could have sworn to hear him mumbling something about envying Li Feng.
“Don’t worry man.. I’m sure you’ll find one soon enough.. In the zoo that is.. HAHAHAHA!” Zhou Da Er burst out in laughter trying to comfort him and even Feng Qing Yun patted him on the back in pity.
“You meanies!” Zhou Jin Xing ran away with his face covered in tears, looking at his back, both Feng Qing Yun and Zhou Da Er exchanged a glance before the latter spoke “That is just disgusting..” to which Feng Qing Yun trembled with his usual poker face.
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“W-what do you want..” Ouyang Feng Ling squinted her eyes as she looked at Li Feng with blame but her heart had been drumming furiously ever since he trapped her in an isolated stairway void of any life.
“Do you smell something sour? [ 3 ]” Li Feng inquired he as sniffed the air, a crooked smile emerging on his face.
“I-I don’t..” She tried her best to remain calm and avoided any sort of eye contact with the domineering man that pinned her against the wall by her wrists.
“Really? But why does it smell like it’s coming from you? Let me take a sniff..” Li Feng leaned down and stuck his face into her neck, enjoying her feminine scent that sent his senses into disarray.
“A-Ahhnn… Mmghh~” Feeling the hot breath brushing up against her sensitive areas, Ouyang Feng Ling’s head went completely blank and felt her strength being drained away as the seconds passed.
“I-I a-am not jealous.. Ahhn!” She protested as he began to lick the sides of her neck, suckling on it gently as he gradually headed upwards and nibbled on her soft earlobes.
“Are you sure? Well that doesn’t matter now.. All that matters is that you belong to me and that I am going to ravage you right here right now…” Li Feng declared and began to tease her.
“Y-you can’t.. Mmnghh! Ahh!” She protested but her actions betrayed her, Ouyang Feng Ling wrapped her creamy white arms around his neck and began to nibble on his ears as well, her heavy pants clearly resonating within his ears which made the fire within him swell.
“It seems.. L-like your body is much more honest than you are.. Tell me.. Do you belong to me?” Li Feng ceased his actions and stopped pawing at her after dropping that question.
“Y-you can’t do this you bully!... F-fine.. I-I belong to you, both my body and soul!” Ouyang Feng Ling pinched him softly in resentment but gave in after she met Li Feng’s serious gaze head on.
Even Ouyang Feng Ling herself couldn’t believe the words that came out of her mouth! Flustered, she then drilled her face into her lover’s embrace so that he couldn’t see her ridiculous state.
Li Feng smiled and lifted her chin upwards to meet her face to face. Seeing her coyness, he couldn’t help but to plant a kiss onto her alluring lips and although this was just a simple peck, it meant a lot more to the both of them.
Within each other’s embrace, they exchanged passionate gazes which transmitted the love they had for one another.
“No matter what happens in the future, just know that I, Ouyang Feng Ling loves you more than anything else in the world..” She gently caressed her lover’s face as if afraid of breaking her precious possession.
“W-“ Li Feng’s brows knitted and as he was about to speak out, Ouyang Feng Ling took the initiative to shut him up with her sensual lips and with that, another war broke out.
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Ten minutes later, both Ouyang Feng Ling and Li Feng sat by the desolate stairs with their fingers entwined, and her head resting on his shoulder while his head on hers.
At a closer glance, Ouyang Feng Ling’s hair seemed to be a little messed up and her uniform looked to be a little crumpled.
“You beast.. My chest hurts from all your groping pig paws..” Ouyang Feng Ling complained disgruntledly as she rubbed her breasts, however, the coyness from before had long gone as they have confirmed each other’s position within their hearts so there are no scruples.
“What! Your chest hurts! My precious baby. I’ll heal you soon, don’t worry!” Li Feng exclaimed as he stretched out a hand towards her breast and kneaded it without restraint.
“Ahhn! S-stop it! My uniform is c-crumpled-Mghh!” She tried to slap away his pawing hands but could not muster up any energy.
“Don’t worry, your husband will make you feel better in no time..” Li Feng’s lips grew wider as he groped her beautiful pair of bunnies.
Knowing that there is no stopping to his unbridled actions, Ouyang Feng Ling simply gave up all protests and allowed him to do so as she also gained pleasure from it, every single time he touched her made it fell as though a current passed through her.
After a couple of minutes have passed, Li Feng then moved back to his original spot and pulled her into his embrace.
Ouyang Feng Ling did not put up a resistance and laid quietly in his arms, unknowingly, her chest didn’t feel as uncomfortable as before but that doesn’t matter now, all she wants to do is to be spoilt by his endless love.
Seeing such a beautiful woman acting like a little kitten before him made him feel a little proud, who wouldn’t?
Looking at the expensive-looking watch that laid on her small wrist, Li Feng shook Ouyang Feng Ling gently and helped her get groomed as she looked like a tornado had passed through her.
Like a virtuous husband, Li Feng started to help her get dressed. Patting her uniform, adjusting her tie, buttoning up her blazer and even combing her hair, he did it all so perfectly that even Ouyang Feng Ling looked amazed.
“Feng Gege, have you learnt how to do this before? Anyone who marries a gentle and virtuous husband like you is akin to winning the lottery.” Ouyang Feng Ling showered him with constant praises and enjoyed his five star service.
Li Feng could only smile wryly in response, let’s just say that he had picked up an enormous set of skills during his solitary days of a Special Forces Member…
Stroking her head gently, he then kissed her gently and patted her upturned buttocks, ushering her back to her class.
“I’m heading back now alright? I’ll go to the basketball court after school as well so don’t you dare lose or I’ll dump you!” Ouyang Feng Ling adorably threatened with her gesturing fists and kissed him before she left.
After she had left, Li Feng’s gentle smile vanished, only to be replaced by an emotionless expression that supressed the atmosphere around him.
“No one can snatch you away from me.. Not even the gods above.. ” His words echoed within the desolate stairway, placing his palm against the window pane, he looked up at the darkening skies with a strange light coursing through his eyes.
Author’s Note
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Was looking at the stats of this fiction and saw the ratings lowered with a review stating that the pacing is too damn slow T^T
I can’t help it either! *Runs away crying* But seriously though, this is how I write and I just go with the flow, sighs.. Such a bummer..
Anyways! Here is the chapter! :D Enjoy and please do not hit me!
Can you smelllllllulululululuul What the rock! Is cooking! *Entrance song plays in the background*
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[ 1 ]
Hearts linked as one – Xin You Ling Xi Yi Dian Tong ( Chinese Pinyin )
This phrase just means that the connection is very strong between two individuals that they are able to understand each other’s thoughts without any exchanging of words.
[ 2 ]
Xiong Di
This term is pretty widely used and can be interpreted as Bro in the English language.
Mostly used to refer a stranger which is of the male gender, also a friendly term treating the other party as someone equal.
[ 3 ]
Do you smell something sour?
Just a way of implying that someone is jealous. In the Chinese language, Jealousy is Chi Cu which directly translates to Eating Vinegar and vinegar smells sour so yeah..
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