《Rebirth Of The Commando》Chapter [ 17 ] - You.. You Ruined My One And Only
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Rebirth Of The Demon
Chapter Seventeen [ 17 ]
You..You Ruined My One And Only
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At the back of the school, a tall male student can be seen being pulled back by several men of the same statures. Like a raging lion, he roared and struggled with all his might, both of his eyes were bloodshot and looked as though they were about to pop out of their eye sockets.
“Get away from me! Are you trying to rebel!” Miao Jin Gang bellowed, his veins squirmed about under his skin like worms causing him to look extremely hideous at the moment!
“N-no! We will not let you pass until you have cleared your head!” A person that held him by the arm insisted but judging by his pale face, it seems like he would be running out of energy soon.
“If you want to pass, you’ll have to walk over our dead bodies!” Another student shouted out in defiance but his clothes were already in tatters, and he didn’t look any better than the other four that clung onto the berserk student.
“… Eh?” One of them muttered breathlessly as he doesn’t feel any movement from their Da Ge, exchanging glances with the other three that held him down, all of them nodded and let go at the same time.
After they had retreated a few steps back, all they saw was Miao Jin Gang with his dishevelled hair looking downwards at the ground without any hint of movements.
“Da Ge? A-are you alright?” The first person who spoke out was someone with a ponytail as he usually hangs out with Miao Jin Gang and is on pretty good terms with him.
His voice was interlaced with an obvious worry, anyone could feel his worry as he treated their Da Ge like a blood brother whom he looks up to and seeing his state now made him feel both worry and unease.
“..Can I see her?” Miao Jin Gang’s coarse voice rang out, wisps of hair swaying in the wind as he turned to look up at the four pathetic-looking individuals who had obstructed his path, the people who he had taken under his wing, the people who had had trusted his life with..
“…N-not now Da-Ge, Chen Da-Jie [ 3 ] said she didn’t want to see anyone at th-“ Before Ponytail could finish his words, as though someone had flipped off the switch, his entire world spun before slipping into a complete darkness.
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At the basketball court where the promised fight was held, multitudes of people were already crowding around the venue as they heard wind of a fight breaking out between a no-name student and the famous prince from the basketball club.
But at a closer look, the number of females overpowered the number of males but why was that? Of course it was because of one sole reason! Hunks!
When you hear Ren Yi Basketball Club, what are the things that comes to mind? For the females, the only thing that they can think of are a bunch of sporty and youthful hunks hanging out.
For the men, all they can think of are disgusting and smelly pigs playing with a ball within a basketball court that reeks of male hormones.
“Oh my gosh! Look at that sexy guy by the railing!” A female student exclaimed as she nudged her friend with an elbow.
“Kyaa! He just looked into my eyes!” Another female student almost fainted in the crowd after “ he ” swept his glance around.
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“He is perfect, my ideal boyfriend!” Within the female dominated area, a fiery discussion broke out, endlessly praising the person that they just saw.
“Che, it’s just a gigolo, what’s the fuss?” An overweight male student saw this and disdainfully spat at the grown while playing with his small and indiscernible moustache.
“What did you say?! Get him!” A female dinosaur [ 1 ] that just happened to walk past overheard his ridiculing words and shouted.
“Noo! Not my moustache! It took me years to grow that!” His pleas went unheard, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned can be used to describe this scene, brutal and merciless.
’R.I.P’The people who managed to catch that scene or more accurately, most of the males had the same thoughts and paid their last respects by clamping their open palms together.
“You a-assholes-Gahh! Your d-daddy isn’t dead yet so stop praying for me and lend me a hand you bastards! Gwohhh!”
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Li Feng settled himself on the railing, paying no heed to the ruckus that started just because of him.
His expression at the moment undiscernible, both eyes fixated at the darkening skies that occasionally released roars as it churned.
His legs swayed leisurely in mid-air as he enjoyed the motherly caress of the breeze that had started to pick up as the seconds passed by but a certain scent caused him to frown.
Looking towards the direction where the familiar scent came from, he frowned as the crowd had also noticed a tall figure approaching the basketball court.
“Gorilla, something seems wrong..” Zhou Da Er whispered with unease as he observed the incoming individual.
“Really? I don’t see anything wrong..” Zhou Jin Xing expressed his doubt, he couldn’t find anything wrong with the scene at all.
The pair then turned towards their leader, Qing Yun Feng who is currently leaning against the pillar and noticed the frown on his face.
“…Prepare..” An extremely strained voice rang out, as the volume of the sound was really low, it was almost imperceptible and would go unnoticed if it weren’t for the distance between them.
Qing Yun Feng face looked extremely solemn unlike the usual as he eyed the figure that moved across the basketball court with unhurried steps.
Hearing their leader’s voice for the very first time in so many years made their eyes widen, but this wasn’t the time to be overcome by surprise as they instantly understood the severity of the situation.
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Li Feng leaped off the railing without much difficulty, patting his pants, he then heaved out a heavy sigh.
As the figure got closer, Li Feng could gradually make out his face and without any surprise, it’s Miao Jin Gang but he looked a little unusual right now..
His short hair looked unkempt, there was a distinct reddened mark by his cheek, his uniform crumpled, his chest pocket torn and lastly, the crazed gaze that never moved away from the slender figure standing by the railings which then shifted towards Li Feng’s hand as he encroached.
’Disheveled hair and crumpled uniform, do not tell me he rolled around with a woman before this, that couldn’t be it.. The scent.. My hand.. This doesn’t seem good..’ Li Feng had first thought that Miao Jin Gang was fooling around with Chen Ling just like how he was with Ouyang Feng Ling but he appeared too pathetic and his face soon sunk as he discarded that possibility.
Abruptly, after getting into a certain distance, Miao Jin Gang’s eyes widened and charged forward with giant strides and every single time his feet came into contact with the ground, it left loud resounding “ Thumps ” behind.
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Like a starved beast that craved for human’s flesh, Li Feng’s especially, his eyes shone with a vicious light and he pounced, lunging his seventy five kilogram body forward without any regards for his own safety.
Faced with such a simple and direct attack, Li Feng simply stepped to the side as he could see the attack coming from miles away.
As Miao Jin Gang’s body slipped past, Li Feng could hear his constant mumbling and it confirmed his suspicions.
“…die..die..die..die..die..die..die..die…” Murmured Miao Jin Gang who was in a state of delirium, forcibly stopped his charge and lashed out with a violent swings.
“Tch!” Li Feng clicked his tongue in annoyance as he dodged the dangerous swings that contained a large amount of force but if he keeps dodging, the fight would never end.
Sfx Swish! Swoosh!
At the beginning, Li Feng was planning to tire him out but it seems that that would not happen anytime soon as Miao Jin Gang seems to possess an endless amount of stamina which he deduced to be from the basketball training.
Without exhaustion, the crazed man continued to rain down a series of never ending strikes but could only manage to strike air time after time which he had plenty to waste.
Faced with no other alternatives, Li Feng could only risk getting injured heavily trying to put this beast in his place and that will count heavily on his eyesight and fighting sense as it only takes a single blow to place in the disadvantageous position.
Sfx Pitter.. Patter.. Pitter.. Patter..
As the fight was about to switch into high gear, cold beads of rain started to fall from the heavens, the amount growing as the time prolonged. The sky had long since darkened into a dull grey which projected what Li Feng was feeling currently.
Feeling the cold hard droplets lashing down, the crowd of students started to scatter in different directions in search for a shelter that they can view the fight from.
“Why does that handsome guy keep dodging?”
“Yeah! Fight back!”
The students that found a shelter began to rile up, yelling at the two individuals that paid no heed to the storm.
’Seriously? Rain? At this time? Gosh!’Li Feng snorted and inwardly cursed the rain that crashed on his parade.
Sfx Swish! Pow!
For every mediocre punch that his opponent threw, Li Feng rushed in and countered with an accurate jab intending to shave off his immense health like a game character in a boss fight.
This style of fighting carries great risks but he had no other choice, you can’t expect him to whip out his needles in the public do you? He’ll be sent to prison mind you!
“Oh my god, he started to strike back!”
“Yeah! Fight fight!”
Just as Li Feng’s laid down his counter attacks, the crowd then started to get rowdy, this was what they came here for!
Sfx Ssssss!
Stepping on a puddle, Li Feng’s face paled and he retracted his neck just in time! Barely dodging a surprise kick that Miao Jin Gang lashed out at him, because of the awkward angle he wasn’t able to do much but his fast reflexes saved his life!
“Haha..” Li Feng smiled wryly as he quickly pried himself off the wet ground that almost did him in.
’This wet environment sucks ass.. Tch, damn it! Why is it so cold?!’ To be honest, he did not expect Miao Jin Gang to be able to kick but he did just that, albeit a little rusty on the edges but cursed when he felt the chill seeping in.
“Eh?..” Stopping in his tracks, Li Feng examined himself and a vein bulged by his temple and in a snap, any remnants of his mood then plunged into the depths deeper than the eighteen levels of hell[ 2 ]
“…You piece of shit… You.. You ruined my one and only uniform you asshole!” As Li Feng wanted to touch his chest, he found his hand going straight through the cloth and he immediately looked down to be greeted by an “:O” face.
What “:O” face you say? To be put in simple terms, the buttons on his uniform represented the eyes while the wide gaping hole acted as the fucking mouth that looked as though it was trying to communicate with Li Feng by opening and shutting.
“You love to kick don’t you? Fine! Your daddy here shall go through with your fucking tea party you inconsiderate uniform wrecker!” Li Feng sneered coldly at the approaching figure that tried to kick him yet again.
Re-positioning himself, Li Feng’s leg then lashed out like a serpent out to kill, snaking its way towards the leg that sacrificed itself to the toxic jaws!
Sfx C-crack!
A bone-freezing crack rang out crisply, soothing Li Feng’s wounded soul and uniform that suffered under the abuse of Miao Jin Gang.
“die..di-ugh..” Unlike Taylor Swift who simply laid, Miao Jin Gang crashed into the cold hard ground with great impact after his left leg was left bent in a horrible angle.
Watching by the side as he face planted into the muddy puddle, Li Feng didn’t even feel the slightest of pity for the crazy man that tried to take his life, he simply reciprocated the act.
In fact, he should be thankful that Li Feng decided to bestow him a beautiful kick that was timed nicely, angled perfectly with the accurate amount of force.
Like the person in the Skyrim videogame who whined about getting an arrow in the knee, Miao Jin Gang shouldn’t be able to kick with that leg anymore in the near future.
Seeing as he was still trying to get up, Li Feng narrowed his eyes and chopped down at the back of his neck, forcibly turning off the lights in his world temporarily.
Looking around, he then proceeded to grab him by the collar and started dragging him towards the shelter and asked someone to get the ambulance.
With that out of the way, Li Feng ran off under the many pairs of eyes at looked at his shrinking figure.
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At a distance away from the basketball court was the Ren Yi High’s back entrance, where a sleek and majestic looking vehicle had been parked nicely by the curb.
Just its presence alone gave off a strong aristocratic air which is to no surprise that it attracted gazes from the meagre number of people passing by.
By the side of the vehicle, stood a solemn middle aged man clad in a neat-looking suit with a frightening scar squirming down the side of his wrinkled face.
“Hmm? Look at the guy, he looks just like a mobster, damn he frightens me..”
“Ignore that person! Look at the vehicle behind him! It’s a RollsRoyce!”
“Who do you think that guy is waiting for? Do we know of anyone in school that fits the criteria?”
Hushed whispers were exchanged as the various students walked by, anyone who uses the back entrance was bound to be uncommon as it was catered just for the rich and the powerful that wanted to keep a low profile.
Which means that it wasn’t strange for expensive vehicles to appear but for the rich and powerful, there are many ways to show off your statuses and vehicles are one of them.
Just like how there are distinctions between products, RollsRoyce can be considered one of the higher end which sent the people guessing who in the world had a background that could afford a vehicle like that.
Sfx Ring Ring! Papa! Pick up the phone!
Following the rings, the adorable voice of a little girl rang out which caused the emergence of a smile on the scarred man who then pulled out his phone.
“Oh my god! He is going to kill us! Run!”
“Mummy!”
A pair that just happened to walk past scattered in two directions before drilling into their vehicles just from looking at the horrendous man, it wouldn’t even be weird if he was an escaped convict that stole the suit and the vehicle.
“Xiao-Jie ( Young Mistress )[ 3 ], yes, I understand.. I’ll take my leave...” The man hung up the phone as soon as it rang before driving away with the expensive vehicle.
Just as this ended, another incident popped up elsewhere within the campus grounds which shocked many students.
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“If I’m not wrong, this should be the place where they usually hang out..” Li Feng muttered under his breath as he searched calmly.
’It should be here..’ Li Feng thought as he pushed the gate open and drilled in without any hesitation.
“Indeed.. The scent of blood…” Li Feng frowned, this was the scent that he had picked up from Miao Jin Gang earlier before the rain washed all traces of it.
The dried leaves crunched incessantly underneath his foot as he made his way across the unkempt area, paving his way through the occasional tall grass almost poked him in the eyes several times.
Shifting his gaze at the ground, he then began to look for traces of footprints and destroyed weeds and surely, he found one shortly after.
Allowing the destroyed path to guide him, a small shed then comes into view. Before the broken shed are a few items littered across the ground, like tires and bricks encircling a small pile of stacked up branches that had already blackened.
Moving through the crushed cans, he then checked the shed before moving onwards, where the heavy coppery stench lies.
Another small building came into view but in a small scale but the bodies was what brought to Li Feng’s concern.
Four tattered bodies laid on the ground, one of which laid in a small pool of blood. Pulling out his wallet, he slipped his fingers through a hidden pocket and brought out a few needles.
This was prepared beforehand in convenience just in case anything goes wrong and turns out that it was the right choice as this was the moment!
Although the four bodies looked like corpses, Li Feng didn’t hurry and instead, strolled leisurely before crouching down at the one with the ponytail that just happened to have sustained the more serious injury.
Looking here and there, Li Feng unhesitatingly struck him with a needle to cease his overflowing of blood and left to tend to the others as his Ponytail’s wound was already clotting up.
“Meh, their injuries aren’t as serious as it looks so why are they still laying on the ground like dead dogs.. It seems like my legendary CPR skills wouldn’t be put to use today...” Li Feng stepped on their bellies and left his dirty footprint as signatures before making his way towards the small rusty shed.
There was no need to break open the entrance as the indented door was already hanging loosely by a single hinge, it was not hard to guess that it could possibly be done by an external force.
Pushing the door, he entered the cramped area and heard a shuffle before a voice whimpered “P-please do not hurt me.. Please d-do not hurt me please… please..”, it came from Chen Ling, Li Feng’s former bully..
“Sigh.. Hey..” He tried to speak to her but her reaction only got stronger “D-Don’t touch me! P-please!” Seeing this, Li Feng crouched down and whispered softly, although it was a fact that he was bullied by this woman, there was no need to cling onto the events of the past..
Her heavy make-up was smudged so he couldn’t tell if she had any injuries, her uniform was torn into tatters and the creamy white arm that was exposed on the outside had a reddened handprint, judging from the size, it probably belongs to a man.
“Shh… It’s going to be okay..” Li Feng pulled her trembling body into his embrace, forgetting the fact that his shirt was wet but Chen Ling clung onto him, refusing to let go of the feeling of security at her lowest point in life.
Her nails pierced his uniform as she gripped him tightly like a koala and as though the lid of her emotions had been open, she cried.
“Uwaaaa… Wuwuwuu..” Her tears and heavy make-up mingled up and sullied his uniform even further but Li Feng could only smile bitterly in response, you can’t expect him to push away the poor girl that was scared stiff do you?
’Seems like I need to get the asshole to pay me a fresh uniform.. Annnd perhaps extort him while at it.. kekeke..’ Li Feng smiled slyly as his hands continued to stroke her dishevelled hair.
Author’s Note
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:yayaya: Thank you for the encouraging comments! :kyaaaa: *Showers himself in comments and titty sprinkles* So here, i present you, Chapter 17! :panda: *Applause*
Idk why but the various references just slipped into the story as it went on..
I also made a new signature woohoo! *Applause*
Click >Fluffy Space
For Chinese terminologies / abbreviations used in this fiction click >HERE< Also, please feel free to post your suggestions there as it would help me out in the long run. Thanks!
" Waffle " Speech/Dialogue
’ Waffle ‘Thoughts
* Waffle * Actions
Sfx Sound Effects
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Female Dinosaur – Kong Long Mei
This pretty much means a woman who literally looks like a dinosaur, someone who isn’t pleasant to look at..
[ 2 ]
18 Levels of hell – The Chinese hell has 18 levels, each carrying out a punishment worse than the other.
[ 3 ]
Xiao-Jie – Young mistress
Chen Da-Jie – Chen as in Chen Ling, Da-Jie pretty much means the same as Da-Ge except that its used to refer a female.
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