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•The cover: /5
Things to think about: is the cover unique? Is it aesthetically pleasing? Are you fond of the style?
•The blurb: /5
Does the blurb make you want to read the story? Is it intriguing?
•Readability: /10
Is the grammar and punctuation correct? Is the tense correct throughout?
•How well developed the characters are: /10
Do the characters feel like real, fully-fleshed individuals, or more like props in a story?
•The overall concept of the story- /10
How does the storyline flow? Does it feel as if the author has made a good effort in creating the concept?
•Creativity- /10
Is the story creative and different to others?
•How much it was enjoyed- /10
Would you want to read on or recommend to a friend? How was the reading process?
Overall score- /60
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