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•The cover: /5
Things to think about: is the cover unique? Is it aesthetically pleasing? Are you fond of the style?
•The blurb: /5
Does the blurb make you want to read the story? Is it intriguing?
•Readability: /10
Is the grammar and punctuation correct? Is the tense correct throughout?
•How well developed the characters are: /10
Do the characters feel like real, fully-fleshed individuals, or more like props in a story?
•The overall concept of the story- /10
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•Creativity- /10
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•How much it was enjoyed- /10
Would you want to read on or recommend to a friend? How was the reading process?
Overall score- /60
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Poetry
A collections of short poems I've written that have been building up in my google docs.
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*PROCESS OF RE-WRITING*"Why are you keeping me here?" I yelled."Demanding much?" He chuckled evilly.He slowly walked away heading for the stairs."Silverstone one more thing". I called He turned around and made his way towards me.I spat on his face. Cold saliva dripping down his nose."I wonder what helpless brother Luke would think about your actions. You're making this harder and harder Julia. Actions come with consequences.""You should take your own advice. There's a reason there's saliva dripping down your nose.""Put it on her."Both of the men walked towards me. One holding the gagger and the other holding a piece of cloth. ___________Leonardo Silverstone was apart of the biggest mafia out there until his father passed in a freak shooting, he was now left with his business and to bring the Silverstones back to life. Leo was left with a letter from Liam informing him one of the biggest items to flip their world upside down is lurking in the streets. But what happens when the Kings and Nightingales try hunt down Julia?Julia Black and ordinary girl with a typical teenage girl life. Little did she know her father owned one of the most powerful mafias out there ever known. Her mother passing away in a shocking suicide attempt Julia wants to know what really drove her mother to taking her own life.Classified as the good girl there are some rules:Good grades No boys And most importantly No TROUBLEBut what happens when she gets tracked and captured by Leonardo Silverstone and him claiming her to be the key for his desire?His protective instinct grew bigger throughout the time they spent together but how far would he go to keep her away from all the monsters when slowly realised she already knew the biggest one.WARNING FOR TRIGGERING SUBJECTS:suicide Anxiety SHhighest rankings so far:87- sadlife1 - nonfiction
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Kassi was a normal girl living in a normal town until one day her mom drops her and her brother off at their estrange grandfathers house for no reason. Now not only does she have to adjust to her new life and school, she also has to avoid the weird looks the "In-Crowd" gives her on top of avoiding their majorly hot Bad Boy leader. Rhys is tired of watching all his friends find their mates before he does. He is tired of being known as the Mateless Alpha and just as he starts to give up hope, his beautiful mate falls in his arms. Literally... Join Kassi and Rhys as they journey through life, love, and heartbreak. ~~~~~~~"Beautiful" he murmured as he traced a finger against my blushing cheek I gasped and pushed against his broad shoulders His eyes narrowed before his grasp tightened on my waist "Mine"*I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE IMAGES IN MY BOOKBook 1 of 3 of the MOON Series
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i am not a replacement
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