《half witch//five hargreeves Book 1》03
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Yn pov
After I gave five the note I quickly went home
St: HEY
XXX: what?
St: it was quite when I got home what were you doing?
XXX: nothing
St: Stan, you're lying what were you doing?
S: I promise I didn't do anything you can search the house I don't care
St: fine I'll believe this time but we are having guests
S: when?
St: I dont know
S: what?
St: you remember diego right?
S: wait no you're joking
St: nope I don't know when they are coming
S: I got to get all of my cool stuff out so it can be ready to show him
St: hey dont get you're hopes up to high because you know how unorganized they all are
S: true
St: I am going to Kamar-taj you know hiw to contact me and dont tell yn it's a suprise
S: dont have to ask me twice
St: ok than you
I then went to Kamar-taj and did my own this
Stan's pov
I was cleaning and organizing room and I heard the door so I ran and opened it and I seen diego and Lila and ran to hug them
S: I missed you guys so much
D&li: we missed you too
F: did you guys knock?
D: yeah?
F: it says on the note to not knock just walk in
S: oh well everyone come in make yourself at home if you're hungry or thirsty help yourself
F: was it you who gave you this note
S: oh no it was strange
D: well can you take us there?
S: yeah but as long as you let show you something
D: deal
I go to call strange and let him know
S: he is on his way
Yn pov
I was on a mission and I needed answers for strange
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Y: so ether tell me or pulls out knife* be a finger or two short
Rp: no I am not dumb you are just a dumb girl who is not going to do anything to me
After he said that I cut his pinky finger off
Y: what were you saying? So now tell me
Rp: I won't tell you but I will me with strange
Y: fine write and I'll deliver to him
He starts writing all of the information down and gives me the paper
Y: thank you so much you are so much help
I then blink out and was in my living room
St: were the hell have you been and why is there blood on you?
Y: getting answers
St: please dont tell me-
Y: I didn't kill anyone dont worry
St: then why is there blood
Y: because of this
I gave him the finger that was in a peace of cloth
St: what the hell?
Y: how else do you think I get people to talk
I then gave him a smile
Y: well I am going to my room
St: no stay and insurance yourself
Y: you like to see me covered in blood or in clothes without blood of you're enemy
St: hurry
After I got my room I put on something like this (if you don't like it you can change it)
Once I done was about to go down stairs until I seen diego and Stan laughing in his room as Stan is showing him so many things, I just stood there for awhile smiling then walked away and went downstairs to see everyone on the couch talking
Y: oh my apologies I did introduce myself, I am yn the keeper of all power that gets taken or lost from people like you guys
Sl: wait so you have our powers?
Y: yeah
St: if want you're powers please stay if not then you can walk out
F: wait so we can have it back?
Y: yeah
F: you have our powers how?
Y: well when you guys stopped on the seven bells aka stars, those powers go to me to hold and choose to give back or not
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I wanted to change it because I felt like it would be better but if you guys liked the old one please let me know
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