《Tera Fitoor Jabse Chadh Gya [Completed✓]》Part 16
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Gauri reached to college hurridly and suddenly bumped into om
Om: arre kya Aram se
Gauri: kya aaram se chemistry ka test hai aaj ham late ho rhe Hain
Om: ok go All the best
After test she came out of the class room and saw om was standing there
He saw her and went to her
Om: kaisa hua test
Gauri: accha hua voh teacher hain na shukla sir hamne richa aur sakshi ne uss se do minute extra kya maang liya. Aise ghoor raha tha jaise hamne uski dono kidneys maang liye hon
Om chukled: chlein
Gauri: ji
Om opened door for her Gauri sat
Om start the car
Gauri: Omkara ji Ghar me Shivaay bhaiya aur rudy ke alawa kisko pata hai hamare baare me
Om: Anika bhabhi aur. bhavya ko ??
Gauri: Bhavya se ham kuch Nhi chupa skte . Ham usse jindagi se Jada pyar krte hain
Om smiled and said teasingly: aur mujhse
Gauri smiled and hugged him: aap hi toh hamari zindagi Hain
Om smiled and hugged her back by one hand: i love u too
Suddenly a voice came from outside: are o romio marna hai kya
Om and Gauri chukled and leave each other
They reached Gauri's home
In car
Gauri: kab tak vapas ayenge Delhi se
Om: jld hi
Gauri: jana zaroori hai kya pata nhi hame bahut bechaini si ho rhi hai
Om smiled and hugged her: kya jaan tum bhi 90s ki wife ki tarah behave kar rhi ho
Gauri hit his arm playfully: aap bhi na . Jldi aana mai wait karungi
Om kissed her forehead and hugged her: achha manlo mai kabhi vapas hi na aya toh
Gauri eyes fill with tears: ek jhaap me diwar pe sat jaibe . Khabardaar jo aisa kuch bola toh agar aapko kuch ho gaya na ham mar jaayenge smjhe aap
Om hugged her more tightly: i love you so much wifey
Gauri: i love you too Omkara ji
Om leaves her: byy agle week milte hain
Gauri: byy (in mind) kyun aisa lag rha hai ki kuch glt hone wala hai
She saw Omkara
Om snapped his finger: oye kahan kho gayi
Gauri: kahin nhi byy
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Om left
In oberoi mansion
Om entered and saw Shivika and Rudy was sitting in hall
He came and sat
Anika: chodh aaye meri Devraani ko
Om smiled: ji bhabhi
Anika: vaise ghar kab laa rhe ho meri Devraani ko
Om: waqt aane par bhabhi aapki Devraani ki padhai complete ho jaye phir mai saari duniya ke saamne Gauri ko Mrs Omkara Singh oberoi ka naam dunga
Rudra loudly: haan abhi yeh shaadi vala secret bas mujhe Shivaay bhaiya Anika bhabhi bhavya Richa aur sakshi Didi ko pata hain kisi ko yeh pata nhi chlna chahiye ki aapki aur Gauri bhabhi ki shaadi ho chuki Hai Aur aap dono ek dusre se pyaar karte Hain
Om: chup krr loudspeaker
Shivaay: duffer marvaayega sabko
Anika loudly: mic laun announcement kar do ki Omkara Gauri ki shaadi ho chuki hai itna tej kon bolta hai budhu
Shivaay cupped her mouth: meri pyaari biwi aap apne dever se kam nhi hai
Om slapped his forehead: iss Ghar me rudra ke nature ki bahu aa gyi Shivaay ke nature ki aa gyi pata nhi mere nature ki kab ayegi rudy Vali
Rudra blushed: bhavya hai na
Om: oo haan bhavya hai na
Rudra: bas itni problem hai ki woh aap jaisi hai
Om: shut up rudra
Om: so guys i have to go for packing
At night om came to hall
He took blessings of elders
Tej: beta khyal rakhna
Anika Came to him: Om jana zaroori hai kya pata nhi mujhe michmichi ho rhi hai
Shivaay: Anika tum tension mat lo
Om tu achhe se jaana
Om hugged Anika: meri khidkitod bhabhi ke hote hue mujhe kuch ho skta hai Kya
Tej: beta kab ki flight hai
Om: raat 12 bje ki Dad
Tej nodded
Pinky: take cares beta
He hugged her: ok choti maa byy
He left from there
After sometime
Gauri was sleeping in her room
Just then she shout: OMKARA JI
She take a glass of water: ham bura spna dekh rhe honge.
Other side Shivaay and Rudra sit up with a jerk in their respective rooms
Anika: kya hua Shivaay
Shivaay hugged Anika: mujhe ghabrahat ho rhi hai om thik toh hoga na
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Anika: Shivaay kuch nhi hua hai bura sapna hai aap please so jaiye aap ki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi
In Rudra's room
Rudra: mujhe bahut dar lag rha hai kya karun call krun nhi O flight me baith chuke honge
He drank the water and slept
Other side on the road
Omkara's car is crashed badly and Omkara was in unconscious stage and badly injured
A man saw him and take him to the hospital
At night in Shivaay room he gets a call
Shivaay: hello
Other side : Shivaay ji bol rhe hain Omkara ji ke bhai
Shivaay: ji
Other side: Omkara ji ka bahut bura accident ho gaya hai mai hospital se doctor bol rha hun please aap log jldi aa jaiye
He cut the call
Shivaay screamed: OM
Anika: kya hua Shivaay
Shivaay was numb and not able to say a single word
Anika: bataiye Shivaay mujhe ghabrahat ho rhi hai
Shivaay finally spoke: om..om .k..kk..ka..ac.. accident ho gya
He went to hall and tell everybody
They reached to hospital at night
Tej called kali and informed about accident kaali and Komal went to hospital without informing rivya
In morning
Gauri was watching news in her room
She saw a news and shocked
She shouted: OMKARA
Bhavya came running: kya hua Didi
Gauri was numb and pointed her finger on tv
Bhavya saw and shocked
Bhavya called rudra: hello Rudy om bhaiya kaise Hain
Rudra was in shock: hello bhavya o ki haalat bahut kharaab hai
Bhavya shocked: Gauri Didi om bhaiya ko dekhne ki jid kar rhi Hain
Rudra: nhi bhavya yahan sab log hain tumhare mummy Papa bhi Hain
Bhavya: thik hai
She disconnected the call
Gauri: chlo
Bhavya: Didi vahan sab log hai mummy papa bhi Hain
Gauri crying: hame jana hai ham jaa rhe Hain
Bhavya hugged her: Didi calm down sab theek ho jayega
Gauri crying her heart out
Rudra tell shivika that Gauri want to meet Omkara
Shivaay: ok mai kuch karta Hun
To elders: please aap log ghar jaiye ham sab hain na yahan par
Jahnavi: nhi mai apne bete ko chodh kar kahin nhi jaungi
Shivaay: please i request you aap sab kal raat se yahan Hain please badi maa
Tej console her and all elders left
Gauri reached to hospital
She saw Omkara from outside he was unconscious stage and sit on floor and started crying
Gauri: hame milna hai ham jaayen
Shivaay: nhi Gauri doctor ne ICU me jaane se mana kiya hai
Gauri hugged Shivaay and started crying
Gauri crying: Bhaiya hamne bola tha mat jaiye lekin nhi maane.
Shivaay: chup ho jaa Gauri sab thik hai kuch nhi hua hai hamare om ko kuch nhi hone dunga mai apne bhai ko
After sometime
Doctor came out
Shivaay: doctor om
Doctor with sad face: mr oberoi I m sorry but he is in comma
All were numb and struck at there spot
Gauri: nhi jhut mat boliye sach bataiye doctor
Doctor: dekhiye mai Sach
Gauri shouting: aisa nhi ho skta hai keh dijiye yeh jhut hai please doctor
Whereas shivru was not able to speak a single word
Anika: doctor mazak mat kijiye
Doctor: aap log unhe dekh skti Hain
All went inside the ICU Gauri was going but saw rudra was sitting on the floor numb
She went to him: Rudy Bhaiya kuch Nhi ho ga unhe aap ham sab hain na unke saath please andar chaliye
Rudra hugged Gauri
Rudra: Omkara Bhaiya theek ho jaayenge na bhabhi
Gauri try to console him: haan bhaiya ham hain na unke saath kuch Nhi hone denge unhe ab chaliye andar Omkara ji ham dono ko nhi dekhenge toh unhe lagega ki hum dono unse naaraz Hain
Ruri went inside
Gauri was trying to becoming strong but after seeing omkara's condition she can't handle herself and brust out crying
Anika hugged her: na Gauri nhi rote shaant ho jaa aise royegi toh tere Omkara ji ham sab par gussa honge na ki hamne unki jaan ko rula diya shaant ho jaa Gauri
Gauri: bhabhi hamse keh rhe the ki jldi vapas ayenge agar hame pata hota ki yeh hone vala hai toh kabhi na jaane dete inhe
She leaves Anika and went to Omkara and sat besides Omkara and caressed her hair
Gauri: Omkara ji hamne aapse bola tha mat jaiye lekin aap nhi maane . Kyun gaye aap. Agr aapko kuch hua toh ham zinda nhi rahenge
She cried hugged Omkara
Suddenly om start breathing heavily
Gauri stood up from bed
Shivaay called doctor
Doctor entered: please aap sab bahar jaiye patient need surgery
All came out
Just then Tej called Shivaay
Shivaay pick up the call: hello bade papa
Tej: ham log aa rhe hain
Shivaay: ji bade papa
He disconnect the call
Shivaay: bhavya tum Gauri ko lekar jao sab aa rhe hain
Kaali and Komal thought that rivya were in college
Bhavya left with Gauri
Shivaay: kisi ko mat batana ki abhi kuch der phle om ki haalat bahut kharaab thi varna sab pareshan ho jayenge
All elders entered
Jahnavi: mera bacha thik hai na
Shivaay: ji badi maa om bilkul thik hai bas he need surgery so abhi unconscious stage me hai
Precape: Rikara meet secretly
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