Jack"We have to stay on the ship as long as possible" I held onto Rose and she held onto Jack.

We jumped down onto the crowded deck. One of the smokestacks killed Fabrizio,oh god. His poor mother. We climbed up the stairs and the lights went dark and then on and off. The pattern of the lights has been repeating for some time now. A man was praying in front of us"Yeah,though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death" Jack interrupted him"You wanna walk a little faster to that valley there?"

(Huge white gust is water going through the ceiling of the Grand Staircase)

(A hallway)

(The propellers)

The lights dimmed again. People continued to fall off Titanic,they were falling like dead flies. A bunch of people were surrounding a priest,praying with him. We reached the rail on the back part of the ship and we held on. Both Jack and Rose held onto me as best they could.

The priest did recite a prayer"And I saw a new heaven and the first earth had passed away and there was no more sea" a mother beside us was holding her son,crying,she said"It'll be over soon. It'll all be over soon" and on the other side of us was Helga and she was in absolute tears.

Priest"And he shall dwell with them. And they shall be His people and God himself shall be with them and be their God" Rose"Jack. This is where we first met" he kissed our foreheads and he held us the best he could. Priest"And God shall wipe away all the tears from their eyes and there shall be no more death. Neither shall there be sorrow or crying. Neither shall there be any more pain for the former world has passed away"

(Broken dishes)

The ship was way up in the air now. People slid down to their deaths,their screams echoing the whole way down.

Jack"Hold on real tight" everyone in the lifeboats saw what was going on,they were absolutely horrified

(Yes,the pause sign made an appearance)

Margaret"God almighty" Mr. Ismay turned away from the horrible scene,he cried obvious tears.

Then the lights went out

The ship split in the middle

All of us that were on what was left of the ship fell forward really fast. I feel really bad for the people underneath the ship,who were already in the cold waters below. We all screamed in terror as we went down.

The ship went back up. Jack"We have to move" Jack hopped over the rail,put me underneath him and gave Rose a hand and she and Jack protected me. Titanic now stood all the way up in the air,we were so tall,I thought I could touch the sky.

Rose"What's happening,Jack?" Jack"I don't know. I don't know. This is it. It's going to be okay, Jackie,Jacqueline,baby"

Jack"The ship is going to suck us down. Take a deep breath when I say,both of you. Kick to the surface and keep kicking. Do not let go of my hands" we nodded"We are going to make it,Rose. Jackie. Trust me" both girls"I trust you"

Jack"Ready! Ready! NOW!" We held our breaths as the Titanic sank completely underneath the cold waves of the Atlantic Ocean.