《A different Mahabharat》Part 4
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"Bheem go and untie your cousins and be quick. We still need to fight the king of panchal." The order of his elder brother annoyed him even more.
He denied the order but was scolded by his eldest brother karn.
"Bheem don't talk like this to Yudhishtir he is your older brother and Yudhishtir is right we should help them despite how rude or overconfident they are........ They are our cousins. Now go and untie them." Karn scolded Bheem.
"Fineeeee..........Nakul, Shahdev and arjun come here and help me." Bheem said in an annoyed voice to his younger brothers who smirked and got down from their horses.
Bheem,arjun,Nakul and Shahdev started untying the kauravs.
Once they were done kauravs left the battle arena with a frown on their faces and returned to hastinapur defeated.
Pandavs already planned everything the day before so they didn't take much time and brought their plan in action.
Karn took his position in the east and Yudhishtir stood in West.
Arjun was the only one who knew how to enter the trap safely so he moved towards the north side which happened to be the front of the trap made by panchal king.
Bheem, Nakul and shehdev followed him to assist arjun.
"Don't enter from the places where the gate is opened. Or you will get trapped." Arjun warned his brothers and they nodded in response. After that arjun moves towards northern east side and starts running towards the soldiers.
Karn has already cleared the way for his younger brothers. Arjun mouthed him a 'thank you' and karn nodded. Many soldiers came in the way of arjun but he defeated them all. Arjun reached towards south and saw Maharaja Drupad standing there with his head held high with confidence and pride.
Arjun's grip of his bow tightened. He was unknown of a pair of lotus-shaped brown eyes which watched his every move since he came here.
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