《The Roftkal Love》Important Notice

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To cut to the point, there are some scenes in this book that I truly dislike with a passion. The scenes either make the characters act OOC (out of character) or just embarrassing. So here are the scenes I'll be changing (sorry if you like these scenes ;-;).

* = Has already been deleted

- = Is still available

* Chapter two, scene two. Linx has a 'special player key' that opens the backdoor to Rooster. Thing is, there have been multiple times when they enter through the back and no key was required. So bye bye key, you're a meaningless plot hole.

* Chapter two, the second scene. Linx implied he was turned on by the moans of Finn. Which is a nope because of the next bullet point.

* Chapter three, the entire second scene. Reason is Linx cried way too early in the story and there really was no reason for that. Also, Linx's view on the boys is neutral. He doesn't like or dislike them, yet in that scene I said he likes them. So bye bye scene with your OOC.

* Chapter five, second scene. A small annoying sentence that's OOC for Linx (he said 'oh my god' and that's a nope from me).

- Chapter fifteen, when the doctor is examining Linx. Linx obviously has bruises from all the fighting he does, yet the doctor never questions it. I'll be adding a small dialogue to make up for this small plot hole.

Little side note for changes I want to make but simply can't:

- Deleting Jazz. He feels like such a situational character who's only there to move the plot (which he is, but it feels so awkward). If I ever do redo this story, Jazz is going to become Linx's friend or something.

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- Giving you guys more interaction with the love interests. I definitely lacked in this department because whenever I read, I always got bored when the main character isn't in the current scene. But I kinda wrote too much stoic Linx and we still have no clue who in the world the love interests are as people.

I'll be deleting these scenes within a week from today's update. If I find something else that's too OOC (or if you guys point out an OOC moment) and I plan to delete it/ change it, I'll be sure to update this notice.

Also, when I say delete, I mean just remove. I usually don't delete previously written works, even if I think they're trash (I still have my first two drafts from chapter 1-3 from this story). I do this because I spend way too much time on writing it and I believe that if a certain scene doesn't belong in one book, it might belong in another book. So might as well save the hassle of writing a scene that you already wrote.

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