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Hellooo 👋🏻
I've been looking back and I've seen that no one really comments. I find that completely fine but i do appreciate feedback. This is my first time writing fanfic and I have no idea wether or not this is good. So if you have anything sort of feedback then I would appreciate it. I will try to compromise with you and see how it could work.
Thank You ☀️
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The Bloodline System
In a future timeline, the earth was visited by a species known as the Slarkovs.Having lost their home planet and in search of a new one, earth was the next habitable planet for them.Humans and Slarkovs made a deal with each other in return for the Slarkovs living on earth.The Slarkovs traded their technology and knowledge for a new home.They were similar to humans except for some of them who had slight differences so fitting into the society wasn’t a problem.Over the years Slarkovs and humans began to mate with one another and reproduce offsprings.This in turn created a new species known as the mixed-blood.Centuries later mixedbloods could tap into their bloodline and perform unimaginable feats.Gustav born into an age where bloodline determines everything, struggles to fit with a useless bloodline.His bloodline only grants him the ability to change his hair color, destroying his hopes and dreams for a great future.His fate is turned around when an unexpected situation leads to him finding a system that grants him the power to unlock and upgrade bloodlines by completing quests but he’s baffled by two quests with a five-year deadline. Success will grant him unimaginable rewards…But only one thing awaits him if he fails… Death!Follow Gustav on his interesting journey filled with unprecedented adventures, danger and death, maybe?
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My name is Laoch. I have stained the plains of the Badlands with blood. I have made legions vanish and knights weep for their mothers. I have started and ended ages with the swing of a sword. I have stolen the souls of the wicked and the just. I have walked paths in the night that dragons fear to fly over in the day and led armies of skeletons against creatures that men fear too much to fight.I have returned, and this is just the begining. I will regain what was once mine. Stand in my way at your peril.My name is Laoch, the Skeleton King, if you have not heard of me. You surely will. Follow the newly summoned Skeleton as he discovers his purpose while carving out a place he can call home in a confusing new world. .
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During a normal Pokémon League Tournament, one of the biggest massacres of the century happened. This journey follows the main protagonist Jordy and his friends Biermann and Thomas on their quest to either save or avenge their friends. The story includes friendship, love and fun, but also hate, despair and death.
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Little Button《✔》
After her mom died, Hazel had to pack everything and leave her old life behind. She was moving to California to live with her dad. The one thing Hazel wanted was to make through her last year of highschool going unnoticed like she usually did being her size. Than again that's what everyone wants. As she expected her whole life was flipped upside down when she met 6'5 chuck of badboy Greyson Grey, well more like ran into him._________________________________________I suck at description. The book also gets better after the 1st chapter! Enjoy♡Highest Rankings #1 in shortgirl 10/15/19#4 in tallboy 8/11/19#603 in badboy 8/16/19#35 in savior 10/17/19#6 in cliche 8/21/19#959 in teenromance 8/21/19#3 in softie 10/17/19
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