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Hellooo 👋🏻
I've been looking back and I've seen that no one really comments. I find that completely fine but i do appreciate feedback. This is my first time writing fanfic and I have no idea wether or not this is good. So if you have anything sort of feedback then I would appreciate it. I will try to compromise with you and see how it could work.
Thank You ☀️
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300 Moons Till Disconnect (Gamelit)
Luck is a speedrunner who’s been transported into the world of Briarwood Rebirth, an MMORPG he’s been playing for 17 years. Yet things are not as they seem. The world feels like it's missing pieces, and NPCs do not behave like they should. There are 30 others like him who've been dubbed Chosen Ones, and they're just as clueless as he is. And what is the 300 day countdown to this so called "Disconnect"? Is this a dream? Or something else? (Rewrite of Bad Luck) (Updates every Monday and Friday)
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The Fat Prince: The Orc Princess
Prince Cyrus and his heroic band of misfits only have three days left to save Princess Trinity from the nefarious Everblood vampires and time is not on their side. They've reached Hynest Ridge- a mammoth waterfall that no human can scale. The Everblood's dark stronghold lies at the top, remaining safely out of Cyrus' reach. Only a legend speaking of the forest dwelling Aquarian elves offers some relief to the heroes. Aquarian elves can manipulate water and form large bubbles to carry themselves and others. Cyrus and his friends quickly realize they must find one of these legendary elves in order to proceed on their journey. In the middle of the night, Cyrus is kidnapped in a bubble and taken into the dark forest where he is held hostage by a scruffy, ten-year-old elven girl named Oga. She claims to be a ferocious orc who lives by the orc code of pillaging, stealing, and hunting, but Cyrus and his friends can see there's something more to this species-confused elf than she lets on. Tricking Oga into returning to her village, they realized that this young elf is not only the heir to the royal elven bloodline but a future sacrifice in order to keep the waters of the land purified. Can they save Oga from the deadly fate of her true heritage? And will Cyrus and his friends find a way to reach Princess Trinity in time? Find out in this exciting third installment of The Fat Prince.
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Tales and Legends of Tamriel : Twin moons
The continent of Tamriel is a unique place where many races live together. Humans, elves, orcs, lizardmen... they are many to populate this mythical continent. But of all the peoples, the khajiits are undoubtedly the strangest and the most curious of all. This race of cat-people lives in the warm and exotic province of Elsweyr. Under the benevolent gaze of the moons, the Khajiits live as they have for millennia. To our human eyes, their culture would be strange and bizarre, but they don't care. Princess Shazira, daughter of the khan Razirr'Ri, has lived locked up and cut off from the world since she was a child. She is said to be fragile and sickly by nature, but she knows perfectly well that it is all a lie. Curious and adventurous by nature, the princess does not hesitate to run away at the slightest opportunity to discover a little more of this vast world that fascinates her so much and from which she is kept away. It is during one of her many escapades that she crosses by chance a young human mercenary freshly arrived in Elsweyr, Alberic, who pays the price of this meeting. Unbeknownst to Shazira, forces are at work in the shadows as the young khajiit is the object of an ancient prophecy made to her father before she was even born. Strange events soon strike the family of Lord Razirr'Ri and he decides to take his daughter away to hide her and put her in a safe place. For the first time in her life, Princess Shazira leaves the capital. At first euphoric at the idea of traveling, she soon discovers that the evil that has awakened in the shadows is now after her...
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Free
The four continents of the world got combined into Ametar, the only continent in the world. Together they formed a country in the middle that has 5 nations. East of the country is Xou, where the strongest samurai lives. He is said to be immortal and his only goal is to kill himself. Knowing this, he makes children for the only purpose is to kill him. Why does he want to die so bad and how did he become immortal?
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Odyssey
The Year is 2020... An experiment decades in the making known as Project: Blue Monday rears its head. A Portal opens in Fort Lauderdale, and the government keeps it a secret from everyone. Immediately, it sends forces through the portal to secure it, and to escape from a dying planet Earth. Staff Sergeant Hezekiah Brooks is among them. He finds himself in a world of magic, elves, demi-humans, and dragons. As he fights against the ruling Iscariot Empire in the new world, he is forced to adapt to his new circumstances to survive. He finds a new family among his allies and a new enemy of his own making. Carefully, he must find a way back home... alive, keeping his ragtag squad of five soldiers - Unity - alive and safe. All while playing as a puppet for a creature of mysterious origin, who seemingly knows all and controls everything. He finds himself at the head of a revolution that will burn everything to the ground, just to build it all again... Hezekiah embarks on his Odyssey, to protect his family and to fight against the evils of both the worlds of New and Old...
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Dreamnotfound Fluff
So just random bits of Dreamnotfound fluff. This isn't really scripted or outlined or anything, just me practicing my fluff writing skills. No smut, although there are a few implications oopsie. Requests and feedback are greatly appreciated! Thanks! :)Cover: https://twitter.com/ATiredMasa/status/1276579662248865793If you can draw better than me (so like pretty much everyone), feel free to send me covers!!!! :)
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