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I've been looking back and I've seen that no one really comments. I find that completely fine but i do appreciate feedback. This is my first time writing fanfic and I have no idea wether or not this is good. So if you have anything sort of feedback then I would appreciate it. I will try to compromise with you and see how it could work.
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Seeking the Flying Sword Path
This world has Fox Fairies, River Gods, Water Monsters, Great Demons and Practitioners who seek immortality. Practitioners can open their Magical Eye and see Demons and Ghosts. They can practice a flying sword that can kill enemies thousands of kilometres away. Their sharp long-range eyes and sensitive ears could observe everything around them…… The second young master of the Qin clan, ‘Qin Yun’ is one such practitioner…
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A Queen of Ruins
Some people just want to watch the world burn. I'm not one of those people. Some people see the world as something to be saved, and brought to heights never before imagined. Again, not me. What kind of person am I? I'm a Queen, plain and simple. Lots of people, noble and commoner alike, often complain about life being a cruel mistress, or something similar. When I hear those complaints, I can only laugh, or look at them in contempt. Life is simple, you only need to let yourself take the path you are meant for. Me, I was born a bastard, lived with my mostly sadistic half-siblings, among people who thought I was naturally inferior. And look at me now. *********** I do not claim ownership of the picture
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Aegis
What does one do when they have an indecent ammount of money, the legal ability to leave home and see the universe in all of its grim glory, and the obligation to grow the family's fame and fortune? Why, buy up an ex-Imperial Navy escort ship for a start! Then you can set about carving out your own little chunk of the back end of the Imperium of Man... as soon as you can get it back into working order, of course... and deal with the fact that buying a ship left you just about broke... You get the feeling that, somewhere out there, somthing is laughing at you.Part 1 of the Aegisverse Saga. Second Person is used throughout. If that isn't kosher with you, best to back out now. A Warhammer 40,000 Rogue Trader fanfictionComplete, with a total of 100 chapters and 309 pages. On the series - This series was first written as a Choose Your own Adventure (CYoA) on the /r/HFY forum. The between chapter votes have been omitted, as they are not part of the story, despite their influence on it. On the the Author's notes - These were included in the original document, and are included here for the purpose of completeness. Spelling, grammatical, and formatting changes have been made in the process of archiving this story and re-formatting it for publication on Royal Road. None of the contents of the story has been substantially affected.Cover by gej302!
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Beginning Of Reality
Where it all started, and where it all will end. The culmination of millions of years of preperation has led to this single moment, the moment Where Carnatus will have his revenge. He was cast out for wanting to save his people from greed and corruption but He has returned now with a new identity, that of Reality. He is joined by Four immensely powerful warriors, each of which Reality played a part in creating. They will fight alongside him to restore balance within the Universe that Reality once called home, a fight for revenge.
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BABYSITTER ༄ D.KS ✓
burdened with what seems like the worst of the worst, single father do kyungsoo not only has to sing at his former wife's wedding but is in need of a babysitter. the quiet and demure neighbor jung ara - lonely, peniless and possibly the best one for the job. ♡ 2017 © 01SEULGI cover by @frkledsoo BEGAN • 08/17/2017 ENDED • 06/02/2018༄ highest rank#1 kyungsoo#1 dokyungsoo#1 baejoohyun#3 taeyeon#31 irene#38 suho
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LOST
Alyson Stewart, rich English girl, gets stranded on a desert island after the ship her family was on sinks. What will happen to her and her brother? Will they survive?
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