《Paint Me a Poetry》03: A Writer's Mistake
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Scribbling words into masterpieces,
Crawled towards complex phrases.
Multiple barriers would soon interfere,
Erasing letters and stopping phrases.
Dialogue dragged out of this world,
Shading narration being told.
Characters merely don't have enough fold,
To come out alive with a pen of sword.
Scenery showed blind anyone,
Darkness surrounds, killing the fun.
It sometimes showered a killer light,
Allowing everyone to run in fright.
There's a moment when tension rise,
Adverbs screams in description's cries.
To showy for anyone to care,
Not dealing with details to be fair.
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