《Jin the Devil of Remnant》Prologue Rebirth and Family
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Summer POV
Right now I just found a child half naked he had weird hair, two red gauntlets, pants I think one side is black and the other has fire, he has weird shoes, and a weird tattoo on his left arm. How I found him was just a surprise I was called by Ozpin for a mission that was finish as I bake cookies for Ruby. As I walked down a road that had a river by it I see the kid just floating through the river and my mother instinct kicked in. I ran to the river and caught him he was quite warm to my surprise. As I'm carrying him many question went through my head.
Summer: "Why is there a child here in the middle of the river!? is his mother or father of this boy alive? what's with the hair it looks like he puts jell, but it seems natural? who gave him this tattoo this early in a young age!?"
(Time skip to Summer carrying the unknown boy to patch)
Once I got back the boy was still asleep as I am carrying him to my house. Before I even got to the front door Tai open it before I got to knock.
Tai: "Summer its- dear Oum! what happen!?"
Summer: "I found him floating in the river and I don't know anything else. But let me in so I can put him down."
Tai let me in as I'm still carrying him. Once I got in I put him down at the couch. Once I did I see Qrow and Raven at the table talking until they see the kid.
Qrow: "Woah! what's with the kid? also why does he looks like Raven if she was a boy!"
Summer/Tai: "Huh?"
Raven: "Let me see this."
Everyone in the room goes towards the kid and... what Qrow said is true minus the long hair, but the resembles aren't far from it.
Summer: "Oh... my.. Ohm..."
Tai: "He does looks like Raven!"
Raven: "....."
Qrow: "Raven... did you have-"
Raven: "No.. and that's the truth." She said as she glares at her brother.
Tai: "Hey look he's waking up."
When Tai said that I see the boy wiggling around and once he stopped he open his eye slightly and said.... said.. I really don't know?
??: Koko wa doko?
We all turn to each other if one of us knew what he said.
Qrow: "What the f- I mean what the freak did he said?" Qrow said as he knew not to swear in my house.
Raven: "I never heard any language like that before?"
??: "Anata wa daredesuka?"
Tai: "Sorry kid, but we don't know what your saying."
??: "Karera wa watachi o rikai shite inaiga, watashi wa karera o kimyo ni rikai shite shite iru."
From that my head started to hurt because I didn't know what he's saying. Plus Tai, Qrow, and Raven are as well.
Raven: "Wait a sec... kid can you understand us?"
??: (nods)
Raven: "Can you speak our language?"
??: (shakes head)
Raven: "Well.. at least he understands us."
??: "Dakara, itsu anata wa darena no ka oshietekudasai?"
Summer: "Lets us introduce ourselves my name is Summer."
Tai: "My name is Tai I'm Summers husband."
Raven: "Raven."
Qrow: "The name Qrow kid and don't go saying my name around."
??: "Karasu... ?"
Qrow: "Huh?"
??: "Karasu." He said as he points at Qrow and Raven.
Summer: "I think that's your names in his language Qrow and Raven."
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Qrow and Raven looks at each other and nodded.
Qrow: "Karasu huh? I kinda like that name."
Raven: "....Can you all call me that name for now on?"
Qrow: "What!? no! I want that name!"
Raven: "Are we really going to fight over a name?"
Qrow: "Yeah! plus why do you want that name anyways?"
Raven: ".....The strongest gets the new name."
Qrow: "Oh! your on!"
??: "Baka.." The boy said as he shakes his head.
Summer: "Well.. that's our names what's yours?"
Jin: "Jin."
Summer: "Jin.. where are....(flash back to the river) Jin do you want to become my son?(mind) He got that tattoo in such a age and he was in the river. I think its better that he doesn't go back to his parents."
Jin eyes were wide as he was confuse as the others as well. For a moment the boy thinks and and answers me with a nod.
Summer: "Okay! your name will be Jin Rose. Do you like it?"
Tai: "Summer do you really-"
I then pointed Jin left arm and Tai see it and understand also Qrow and Raven see it as well. Both of them are confused and mad because why did Jin have that tattoo?
Jin: "Jin Rose... indesu ne."
Summer: "Oh... can I ask you something Jin?"
Jin looks at me with his brown eyes and I said.
Summer: "Jin... how did you get that tattoo? and... "
Jin looks over to his tattoo and seemed shocked by it once that was done he went to the standing mirror. He looks at himself looks left and right around his body as if he wasn't his body to begin with. Jin looks at his reflection with such a mad glare to it and I see that he's clenching his fist, but he wasn't mad at himself, but too the tattoo.
Summer: "Jin... is everything alright?"
Jin: "....Yeah..."
I can see in his eyes rage of that tattoo and I felt bad until I get a idea. Tai looks at me and knows what to do do he went to get the girls. Raven and Qrow are still fighting over the name still so for the time I talk to Jin.
Summer: "Jin how old are you?"
Jin then lifted nine fingers and by the looks of it he's right he looks about nine years old.
Summer: "Are those gauntlets your weapons? do you have an aura?"
Jin nodded the first question and shakes his head on the second question. I was about to ask him another question until I see Tai with the girls.
Summer: "Ah! Jin come here! you're going to meet your young sisters. Also be nice to them."
Jin nod and we went towards Tai and I see my little rose hid behind her sister Yang. It was so cute and I see Tai ready for the big reveal for them.
Summer: "My little girls today is a big day because today is where you get yourselves a big brother."
Yang: "WHAT!? we got a big brother!?"
Ruby: "I got a big bwother now!? Yay!"
Tai: "Okay girls just don't get scared when you meet him."
I then walked aside for Jin to walk towards them and I still remember that he's shirtless, but Jin didn't care. From one appearance alone Ruby got bit sacred and hid behind Yang and Yang she went to her brave and strong sister mode.
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Yang POV
Once I saw my new big brother I can see why dad mean not to get scared. He got spiky black hair, not wearing a shirt, wearing some kind of pants and shoes, but the most that got me is that he has a pair of gloves that seem like gauntlets.
Yang: "So what's your name big brother?"
Suddenly he said something that I didn't understand .
??: "Dakara anata no watashi no imoto sutekina futari wa anata ni amiasu."
Yang/Ruby: "Huh?"
Summer: "Oh! sorry I forgot to mention that Jin has a different language then us. But don't worry he understand us so I hope you two teach him."
Yang: "Well okay my name is Yang and this is Ruby!" I said as I pointed at Ruby behind me.
Ruby: "H-hello." She said in a timid tone.
Jin: "Jin Rose."
He then bends down to Ruby's level and gave a smile.
Jin: "Akazukin-chan." He said as he looks at Ruby.
It took us a moment what he meant until Jin points at Ruby's red cloak then make imaginary basket. I then got what Jin mean.
Yang: "Ooooh! you said that Ruby looks like little red ridding hood!"
Jin gave a nod and everyone started realize it too and began to laugh. Ruby then gets off behind me and went off to Jin and said.
Ruby: "I will be the bwest little sister!"
Jin looks at her and smiles and gave a rub onto of her head Ruby smiles.
Yang: "Okay! what about me bro? what do I look like to you?"
Jin: "Gorudirokkusu."
Once again we're all confused until he explained that I was like Goldilocks and the three Ursas. Dad and mom started to laugh also Ruby giggled, but for me I got a bit annoyed.
Yang(pouty): "Okay! what about you huh?"
I then see Jin smile faded and close his eyes and and said.
Jin: "."He said with venom.
I got a bit spook from what he said and it wasn't me everyone got a bit worry. I then see Summer come close to him.
Summer: "Jin whatever you said your not that. Your my son now and we'll take care of you. But I have a question for you.. what do you want to become when you get older?"
Ruby and I knew what he's going to say because I bet that he wants to become a huntsmen until.
Jin: "Live.... nothing more..."He said as he looks up and close his eyes.
Ruby and I were shocked by this including mom and dad Ruby then goes towards him with a confused face.
Ruby: "You don't want to be a huntsmen brother!?"
Jin shook his head he didn't want to become a huntsmen.
Yang: "So why do have those gauntlets then!?
Jin: "Defend..... myself... from others."
Tai: "Jin are you a fighter?"
Jin: "No watashi wa butokadesu."
Tai: "I'm guessing that your not a fighter so your a martial artists?"
Jin: (nods)
Yang: "Alright! another fighter in the family!"
Summer: "Anyways Jin sleep in the girls room for now until we can get a room for you sleep their."
Jin: "Dajiobu..... haha."
Yang: "Let me show you our room big bro!"
I then take my new brother with me also ruby is coming with us, but when Jin said that to mom I could see her face brighten up. Maybe it's because Jin said "haha?" its probably mean mom or something. I then took him to our room once we got there Jin started look around.
Yang: "Well Jin this is your room or I should say our room for now."
Ruby: "Yeah! oh! I got something for you bwother!"
Ruby then runs to her desk and gets out a some kind of note book and a pencil.
Ruby: "(holds up the book and pencil) Here! right now you can't talk to us until we teach our language so use this to speak to us."
Jin pats Ruby and she smiles and he takes them and began to write something. A few second pass he wrote something that may us happy that he's our big brother.
{Thank you and being my family Yang and Ruby.}
Back to Summer POV
Qrow: "So the Jin doesn't have a semblance, aura, nor does he speak our language, but he can write our language... strange."
Raven: "Yeah and not to mention he doesn't want to become a huntsmen. Maybe its because he doesn't have an aura or a semblance."
Tai: "Yeah kids his age would want to become a huntsmen, but for him... he looks like he doesn't want to fight."
Summer: "But as Qrow and Raven were fighting for a name when I ask him about his tattoo he had a face of someone that hates it. He doesn't look he was abused or hurt, but he seems that he hates who ever gave him that tattoo. Also when Yang what is he he looks at himself with such hate it maybe because of his tattoo."
Qrow: "Whatever it is.. you made a wise choice making Jin your son Summer, but I do feel like-"
Raven: "Qrow shut it! but.. I have to admit that he does looks like me."
Summer: "Not to offend you Raven, but he does acts like you in some ways and gives off gazes like you."
Raven: ".....I'm going to check with Ozpin if he had anything to do with this."
Tai: "Why Oz?"
Raven: "Because he's the only one that knows what I have plus Ironwood.. what Summer said... you might be right.. we need to cheek his blood to make sure."
Summer: "Well for now lets just sleep for today."
(Time skip to the next day to someone making breakfast)
I woke up this morning that was strange because I'm smelling something good. I got from my bed and headed down stairs until I notice it wasn't Qrow because he can't cook so I check on Raven, but she was need bed so no. I went down the stairs to find something surprising.. my new son Jin is cooking their were six plates of pancakes that are different types. But one plate is odd from the others so I went down headed towards Jin.
Summer: "Jin... did you make this for all of us?"
Jin gives a nod and he pointed to one of the plates that I think its mine. After a few moments he set up the dishes that look like not any breakfast I ever seen. Suddenly Tai, Raven, Qrow, and my little angles came down look at the food.
Tai: "Did he-"
Qrow: "Make-"
Raven: "This?"
Summer: "Yup he did! and he didn't get help. My new son is a new cook now."
Ruby/Yang: "Yay!!"
Once everyone sat down plus Jin who sated on the place where he set his weird food.
Summer: "Jin... what is all of that? not to be rude."
Jin: "Gohan, Miso Shiru, Natto, Yakizakana, Tsukemono, Nori, soshite Kobachi." He said as pointed to eat dish.
(This what Jin is eating right now)
Once we all sat down and about to eat Jin said something as he place his hand together.
Jin: "Itadakimasu." He said as he starts to eat with his chopsticks.
Summer: "Hmm...(places her two hands together) itadakimasu!(mind) I think it meals thanks for the meal... I like it." She said as she starts eating too.
As I said that everyone in the table learns the new word and everyone said in unison that includes Raven surprisingly.
Everyone: "Itadakimasu!"
After a while everyone is done eating and we're all cleaning the plates. For a few moments Yang, Ruby, and Jin are playing with Zwei or introducing him to JIn. Once that was over I went outside as Tai gets ready the car for the adopting papers for Jin. Once outside I look to see Yang and Ruby playing with Zwei, but Jin is laying on the grass and looking at the blue sky. I called them all to come over and we all got into the car. Jin was mostly sleeping through the ride as Yang and Ruby are playing with each other. But I still wonder how he got that tattoo as I was still thinking we got to the hospital. We all got out and once we got out I just notice this right now that... Jin is still shirtless.
Summer: "Oh no! Tai, Jin doesn't have a shirt."
Tai: "Don't worry I brought my jacket with me." He said as Tai get his jacket.
Tai gave Jin his jacket it was a bit too big, but Jin walked it off. We all started to walk together I see Ruby getting a bit sacred because every child is scared of the doctors. Jin sees this and he let his handout for Ruby to hold onto once she hold onto to Jin hand she calmed down.
Summer(mind): "Aw~ Jin is becoming a big brother each step! I'm so proud of him."
Once we got in Yang, Ruby, and Tai sat together and I went with Jin to one of the rooms of the doctors. For a few moments later the doctor comes in and has clip board with him.
Doctor: "Okay so everything is good. His health is good, physical is good, sight is great, and now we just need to take his blood."
As Doctor sits next to Jin takes some blood Jin didn't even filched from this after that the doctor ask us to sit back with the rest of our family. Jin and I went back to Yang, Ruby, and Tai, but we had two surprising guests Raven and Qrow. I started to talk with them for awhile until I see the doctor came to us.
Doctor: "Well his blood is good and to my surprise that his blood type AB positive. You have a one of a kind kid you have Ms.Summer." He said as he smiles at the paper work.
Qrow: "Damn.. that's rare.. Summer we got a very healthy boy."
Raven: "Yeah, Jin is one good boy.. maybe he has some short of diet?"
Summer(mind): "Maybe it was his parents? ...I doubt they are a good family. From I can tell Jin seems to be heated when people mention his tattoo. For now I make sure that Jin has a good life with us."
Jin POV
So it has been day since I been... reborn in some kind of way. I defeated my father and I didn't have the energy to move or even fight, but I knew one thing both of us die. But I woke up that day when I met the Rose Family and met everyone and join their family. I couldn't help, but to be happy for myself finally... maybe this new life I can do something good. I also know that I turn young around to nine years old, but its good. Until I notice that I still have the Devil Gene in me the fact is true because my tattoo. This family is quite odd, but.. I like it.. mom would be happy for me for finding a family that I can use my power for good. Today my new family is getting my adoption papers so that I can be in the family I did some stuff in the hospital after that a doctor took some of my blood I got worried, but I just hope they don't find any traces of the Devil Gene. Right now I'm hanging out with my two new siblings Yang and Ruby also thanks to Ruby smarts I can just write to tell them what I say because in this new world none of the people speak japanese.
Ruby: "Big bwother! give me ride!"
I then pick up Ruby and put her on my shoulders as she hangs on to my head.
Ruby: "WOW! big bwother hair is nice and spiky."
Yang: "Hey! I want to touch his too!"
I bend down so that Yang can touch my hair as well. Once that was done I see my new mother Summer coming towards me and my new sisters.
Summer: Seems like you having fun Jin.
Luckily the note book that Ruby gave me really helped out when talking.
Jin: {Yes I am mom and its not much to handle}
Summer: Well that's good also your now my officially son. Welcome to the family JIn Rose.
I couldn't help, but smile as I look to my new family the only thing I could think at this time is.
Jin(mind): I don't know if I died or I have been transported, but if there is a god then I thank him for giving me a second chance of life. Maybe.. this time I can use my power, knowledge, and fighting power to help, but I will see what this world has in store for me."
As all of us started to get out of the hospital I then hear running footsteps I turn to see a hooded man coming. He has a Knife while running towards us both of his hands are on the handle. He's charging at Summer I place Ruby down quickly and run over to Summer side in front of the attacker. I took in a deep breath and looked at the bastard.
Bastard: "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!"
I pull back arm the attacker missed me, but I pulled in a lot of force to the punch. I used Glorious Demon God Fist on the poor bastard and my left fist hit the left side of his gut I think I broke about three ribs. Once done I see that he started to glow grey, but fall to the ground unconscious.
Jin: "Kangaeru no wa aware-" (Pathetic to think-)
I then get tackled by my two adopted sisters as as they were crying on top of me and hugging me.
Ruby(crying): "Big brother!!"
Yang(crying): "Don't you ever do that! EVER!"
As they cried on top of me I then see my adopted mother Summer crying to as she got worried as well. She picked me up as she hugs me as well.
Summer(crying): "Never do that EVER Jin! do you know how worried I was for you!? never ever do that! or you'll be grounded mister!"
Jin: "Hai... mom."
Third POV
As Summer, Yang, and Ruby are hugging Jin the three were in shock by what they just saw.
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