《Jin the Devil of Remnant》Training and the rise of Jin Rose
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Jin POV
It has been a few weeks since I been adopted by the Rose Family. I've been doing good at my first part of my new life. Learning a different language can be hard plus when you turn back from a thirty five year old man to a nine year old self you forget how you spoke the language in the first place. My head hurts every time I try or even with the help of my new siblings. So most of the time I used the note book that Ruby gave me to write what I say. Back when I attacked the bastard who aimed at my newly adopted mother Summer I got a it of a talk with my mom and my sisters. The cops came and see the guy that attack is one of many bandits that my mother took down. He was one of the last of bandits that got away so he wanted revenge for what she did. But for... many reasons he was in the hospital and what I did to him was... bad and by that I destroyed something called an "Aura" and destroyed about four of his ribs. Seems like my power and strength didn't hold back so looks like I need to train to control my power. Some said about a "semblance" and I only shook my head saying "no." All of the adults were shocked to see such a young kid destroyed "Aura and without a semblance." For now the let me off and my family because what I did for it was merely self defense in my part. Raven gave me a pat on the head for being a strong child I just close my eyes as approval. From that my new family and I got us some clothes for me, but it was very hard because of how good I wore in them. Some of them made me look like my new aunt Raven that she's even speechless from what I wore, but after while we finally got out. I was now wearing a blue jacket and grey pants also I'm wearing black and grey shoes. From that time when we all got back home I stated to help with my Summer with the food and mostly after that it was great for time being.
For now for the past few days my sisters have been bothering me to play, helping them in their homework, and teaching me how to speak English. For my family like Tai he would want me to act like more of a brother and helping him plant, Summer she would always worry about me how would I act around the kids in Yang and Ruby school because I'm going to be in there school soon. Summer would also worry about me about my tattoo and how she wants me to have a better life.. a good mother. Plus what I heard from her that from me she couldn't do missions anymore because of my "condition." Don't know what that means, but still good either way from what I see. Aunt Raven would always tell me her problem to me for some reason, but I didn't care for what she wants or she did so I helped her. For this Raven would always pat me on the head as "Good boy or thank you" I didn't care, but I knew one thing that my Raven likes me as the son she never had. For the final one is Qrow a drunk fool that would always had to hear his stories that wants me to smack him on the head. Some times he would also drag me along with him to his drinking spots even thou I can't drink and I hate drinking. I had to help Qrow back home and Summer would always schooled him for this. Once done he would always give me a allowance also thanks to my sisters help I understand bits and bits of information about this new world. Like the four kingdoms, grimm, huntsmen and huntress, faunus, and dust. For now I'm in the dark with semblance and aura so for now I just wait for the time being.
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Today I'm just watching the blue skies and clouds as sometime I see Yang doing her best to learn from Tai teachings. From what I can tell its a mix of boxing and kick boxing, but mostly boxing she loves tings that goes hand to hand, but that's not going to save her. Legs are important as well to keep endurance and to to surprise attack the opponent. Its also good for long rang for if your arms don't reach plus the devastating blows you can deal with them. Ruby is cheering for them as I stayed away from them, but I feel like its going to end soon.
Tai: "Jin! do you want to learn as well?"
I looked over and shook my head saying "no."
Yang: "Oh come on brother! I want to see you how you fight!"
Ruby: "Yeah please!" She gave me the puppy eyes
I sigh and walk up to my father Tai and pulled my note book and started to write down what I'm saying. After a few seconds I showed Tai what I said.
(Author: Every time Jin would speak in his note book he would have these "{ }" so understand that he's speaking in his note book)
Jin: {Fine, but I'll be the one to be teaching. What you were showing Yang is good, but not good enough. I might even teach you father you might like this fighting style. But be warn these two styles are your choice to make for me to teach. Because one of these styles is very dangerous in the wrong hands. So what do you say father want to learn?}
Tai is surprised by this, but.. his curiosity got the better of him.
Tai: "Okay Jin! I would like to see what you can teach Yang and I. So Yang do you want to see what your brother can teach you?"
Yang(excited): "All yeah! I want to see what my big brother can teach me!"
I then to write something else for Tai.
Jin: {Do you want me to teach Ruby as well? because I have about three styles that are good, but what I can see is she can learn about two. How about it as well?}
Tai looks over it and was about to say no until.
Ruby(happy): "I CAN LEARN TO BROTHER!? SO I CAN BE LIKE "WAH!" AND "HAI YA!" LIKE THAT!? OR IS IT LIKE THIS." Ruby is now doing bad karate that even I could say ITS REALLY BAD.
Tai: "*sigh* Very well, but it better be nothing too dangerous that would make my angle hurt you hear Jin."
I gave a nod and and before we started I wrote one more thing.
Jin: {Bring test dummies because this is going to be one hell of a show}
(Time Skip to Jin eating sushi as Yang, Ruby, Summer, Tai, Raven, and Qrow looking at Jin with either disgusted, weirded, and... concern about this)
Third POV
As Tai gets the dummies out and placed them Jin, Yang, and Ruby waited outside. Once Tai set the whole thing up Jin went in front of the three.
Jin: {First Ruby this style or martial art is called Judo. Judo helps to strengthen one strength, flexibility, agility, speed, dynamic and static balance, explosive power, and finally endurance. Judo is meant to take down or thrown the opponent immobilizing him or her. Once done you can pin down the opponent into a choke hold or joint lock. Judo in the word means "Gentle way" meaning it doesn't harm the person or opponent, but can be deadly in the wrong hands. For Ruby training she will have to toss the Dummy over her arm taking it down. Once done we'll increase the weight of it for each time she's increasing her strength, flexibility, agility, and speed. If this works She will be able to take down enemies faster and non harm ways.}
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Tai is surprised by this and without any rejection. Yang likes the idea that her sister is learning how to be gentle butterfly to take down her enemies. Ruby looks worry because... in her body now she looks like a tiny plush toy.
Jin: {For the next one for you Yang and Dad will be Muay Thai and Muay Boran. This one you might say is kickboxing, but here's the catch. Kickboxing only utilizes the four point striking system. But in these two styles of martial arts they utilizes the eight striking system like punches, kicks, knees, and full body clinch to another. Muay Thai is for only taking down the opponent with powerful blows and knocking him or her down in a bad way. But! Muay Boran is the original style of Muay Thai, but with this style it meant for breaking limbs, dislocating joints, and taking down your enemy in the brutal way possible. These two styles are meant to either beat your opponent, killing your enemy, and winning in a brutal fashion. So father witch style do you want? Muay Thai or Muay Boran?}
Yang was about to say Muay Boran, but Tai beat her to it.
Tai: "Muay Thai please!! but.... I have to say Jin. That Muay Boran is quite... nasty."
??: "I think its pretty amazing."
Everyone then turns their heads as they see Raven looking at Jin with interest, but not interested of Jin she's interested of the Martial art.
Tai: "Raven? what brought you here out of the blue?"
Raven: "Its nothing to be concern Tai, but I just came to see what's Summer up to. Until I see my new nephew talking about these martial arts that doesn't exist."
Jin wasn't surprise by this because these martial arts never exist in this world anyways. So Jin started to write down how he knew them and how he know to teach it... but its a BIG LIE.
Jin: {I created it at a young age back two years ago at Vacuo. I train myself to understand my body parts, but I realized that I can transform. Evolve then using a weapon no my body and soul became my weapon. Till now I develop these styles to create one for sport and not personally harm the enemy, but made the second one as a military style. For I haven't created an aura nor a semblance so I did what I had to protect myself from others and grimm.}
(Author: Fun Fact Muay Boran was created at South of China in the mid-16th Century. Also Muay Thai was created at the capital city in Thailand, during the 14 century.)
Tai and Raven were lost for words a child of six created these two Martial Arts. Tai now thinks that the style that Jin suggested to Ruby was made by Jin as well. Tai right now is a mix of concern and utter shock either that Jin made it here from Vacuo also created two styles. Tai didn't like a kid by himself and now he thinks of many things went through what could've happen to Jin parents. For Raven in the other hand she now see Jin as the son she never had. Raven see Jin as a survivor and risk taker to top it all off a child that's strong will. She now wants to learn from Jin and maybe take him under her wing and teach her tribe.
Raven: "That's pretty amazing Jin. *walks up to Jin pats him on the head*Can you teach me as well?"
Jin writes again.
Jin: {Yes I can, but I need to feel and touch your legs to feel the muscles and durability from your legs. Please don't worry about this because I feel my legs to. In Muay Thai the more powerful your legs are the powerful your punches and kicks are giving the person who uses this style to knockout the enemy. Do know this Aunt this isn't sexual harassment nor anything rude, but to see your legs can take the power and speed. The reason I didn't touch Yang nor Tai legs it's because of their training in kickboxing.}
Raven: "Hmm.. very well Jin, but do be careful." Raven said as she sits on a log.
Jin gave a nod and he knows how to feel the muscles of the legs of people.(Author: AND NO!! its not going to be those anime scenes!! okay!) After a few minutes later Jin got up and wrote down something that even Tai would've say in front of Raven. Suddenly Qrow comes in.
Qrow: "Hey everyone why-"
Qrow, Tai, and Raven looks at the note that Jin wrote down and Qrow and Tai eyes were wide what it said.
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{Weak.}
Tai and Qrow looks over to Jin whose has a normal face, but for them they were shocked that Jin had the balls to say it to Raven. Raven with shadows cover her eyes look at Jin and said.
Raven: "Tell me how am I weak Jin?"
Jin: {For first of all Aunt Raven you are a master of the sword art mostly you don't realize that you mostly fight with your weapon. Instead of your fits or legs. You may have the speed and the skill, but you lack strength, power, and endurance I could say more, but these are your main problem our your body. You have aura and a semblance instead of me I lived a life where I could die anytime and anywhere, but I surpass the thoughts of dying and just think of how would I live for now on. For I evolve and surpass my limits. For that I said you're weak Aunt Raven.}
Qrow and Tai looks at Raven with fear as Raven comes close to Jin and...... pats him on the head again. This was a shock to them as nothing to Jin.
Raven: "I see.. thank you Jin I might need your help from time to time. Maybe taking you somewhere to teach me." Raven smiles.... REPEAT... RAVEN aka the one winged Raven... GAVE A GENUINE SMILE to Jin.
Jin: {But in any case we should start training for a bit so everyone ready?}
Yang/Ruby/Tai: "We're ready!!"
Jin: {Very well lets us begin.}
(Time Skip to Jin carrying worn out Tai, Yang, and Ruby to the house as Summer, Qrow, and Raven with surprised eyes)
Jin POV
Right now my adopted family are at the Vale park. For I just walking around seeing the place also Yang and Ruby are playing at the playground as Tai and Summer are watching them. For Raven and Qrow I do not know. As I was walking around I see a riot around seeing a lot of Faunus holding up signs saying "We are not animals."It makes my blood boil suddenly I see a black cat faunus that looks like the age of Yang about to get hit by Atlas police. That was final I ran to the Atlas Police doing a leaping kick to the face of him I see another one and power punched the other in the gut shattering his aura. Two knocked out police of Atlas by a nine year old how pathetic. Many of the faunus were surprised by this action of mine as I see the news lady and camera man looking at me.
Atlas Police: "FREEZE!!"
Atlas Police 5: "Raise you-"
Jin: "Pathetic." I said in the first time ever in English as my voice sounded cool and very weird.
The Atlas police now spooked by this and from mg gaze I can tell their a bit afraid. I looked back at the black cat girl wearing a purple shirt and black shorts.
Jin: "Go back.. to family little girl."
She did what I asked her to do as I see a red shed on her face weird. I turn back to the officers no a disgrace group of people that used their power to be abuse. I looked back at them and did the move Battering Ram, but instead of my fist I used my right leg. Red electricity now flows over my body then I raised my right leg and I stared at them with my brown eyes. I stomp on my right leg with every ounce of strength into the ground once done. I created a aftershock to make large cracks on the ground where my right leg landed. Making the Atlas polices fall down to their butts from the quake once I looked at them dead in the eyes I said.
Jin: "koko kara deru ka shinu." I said as once again red electricity to add more fear.
The group of Atlas Police that were once with confident, pride, and power now ran way like cowards. Getting on their cars and driving away. I took in a deep breath and started to head back until the new reporter stopped me.
Cyril: "Hello! young man my name is Cyril! and I work for the Vale news. Please tell me why did you take these actions?" He said pointing his mic out in front of me.
I moved out the way and instead of talking I did my writing and a few seconds I showed the news and the world my thoughts.
There's nothing different between human and faunus. They're the same as us no matter what we're the same. I see the faunus as people as should all of you. I stopped something that we cause they're not at fault here. The people should start moving on and stop think of the past its pathetic to think that you people cannot move on. I consider the faunus more human then the humans themselves their are the reflection of nature and beauty between life. No matter what I did nor what I did today faunus are way humans then humans themselves. Now I will be leaving now.
Once I showed the news plus the world and to the riot and started to walk back to my family. Leaving the news reporter, camera man, and riot in utter shocked. Once I returned back to my family.. I got tackled by a crying Ruby and Yang also a worried mother. Once done Summer then pulls one of my ears because they were looking for me for a long time. Tai gave a heavy sigh and for me I have plain expression, but inside I'm in pain.
Jin(mind): "Hmm.. school starts in two days. I wonder what's going to happen? but I might've made a big problem for myself. Nah! that's probably my head messing with me because Summer is pulling my ear."
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But as Jin said in his mind he made a BIG problem he had captured the hearts of the faunus. Back in Menagerie many of the people see Jin as a hope from the note he said made a crashing discovery. At most many of the faunus and humans see this as.. peace and shock. From this action many people of the faunus now see as Jin as hero to them. Because the girl he saved is no other, but Blake Belladonna the daughter of the Chieftain of Menagerie, Ghira Belladonna. Now the faunus idolize the young boy Jin as the hero of Menagerie. What will happen to Jin now?
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