《The Critique Rule book》Critiques
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What will be critiqued??...
These are the basics of what we will be looking at when we critique a work, please take this into account when submitting a work.
- Title
= is it catchy?
= is it applicable?
= does is have any special meaning or significance?
- Description/Blurb
= does it catch readers attention?
= grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc...
- Characters
= relationships
= personalities
= growth
= Are they based off of/ or are they a famous person, icon, figure, character, etc...?
- is this supposed to be a Fan fiction?
- Details
= Too little? Too much? Are they relevant?
= Does it make sense?
- Consistency
= do characters stay in character?
= do details stay the why they were at the beginning? If not why not?
= do you know when, where, and who you're writing about?
= If a song/fan fic, does it relate? Is it correct?
- is it an AU?
- Technique
- Skill
= grammar
= spelling
- Creativity/ Uniqueness
= is it too cliche?
= do you have a plot twist?
= will readers stay interested?
- Thought
= did you put ANY into your work?
= do you know how, why, and when things happen(ed)?
- if not, why not?
- Proper tags
Requirements
1. Prepay once we approve your form (dedications will come later)
2. Adhere to rules
3. Complete form:
- Title
- Description
- Characters
= Main & Supporting unless secret
- What chapters will be focused on?
- link to story
- how would you like to receive your critique?
= PM
= Comment
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Odditorium
Creativity is power. Creation is power. Arax is empty, he has no personal attribute and his parents have left him out in the dark. By day he suffers through a mid-level university trying to convert people into Masters but it's given him no luck, nothing will stick. His only momentary joy is the games of Harshings that he plays every night with the members of the Armament Club, ten of the highest level Harshings players of all-time, Arax is the only one under three-hundred years old. Anyways, after a harsh game of Harshings (pun intended) one of the members of the club contacts him with a solution to his emptiness problem, Mimir's Well. Anyways, this story is about God's and creativity and bonkers off the wall (expletive) and rituals and God's and sex jokes. I probably got inspired by like all of the mythos stories that have been popping up on here. It's in a VERY rough form because I've just been getting back into writing. I've written like fifty thousand words already so I guess have fun.
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I'M ALIVE!
I committed suicide after my wife was murdered and raped by some lunatics. I was in hell when I got a book that is able to summon some fucking powerful demons. It was a gift from Satan himself. Nice guy, foul breath. Satan, Santa what difference does it make now? It is a good gift! They will pay... all of them will perish by my own hands because I'm alive again! Pretty messed up shit, right? I would like to see this rotten city burn and I will, but that’s enough talk for now. My mood is really bad. I got an army from hell at my disposal and I have some bastards to torture, and then murder... What the fuck is he doing!? "Hey, Alastor! Wait for me, you son of a bitch!" New cover by Yuri Padial- commissioned before I decided to draw again. Paid for it, so Iwill fucking use it! Hiatus - New chapters will take longer than I expected. If you still with me thanks for the support, and if you are gone... I don't give a fucking crap! Have a nice day!
8 253 - In Serial35 Chapters
Vampire Reborn
In a polluted world where humans ruined the planet, Ren Silver, a man who had been on the bottom his entire life climbed up the social ladder and followed his dreams no matter who put him down. After putting his soul, blood, sweat, and tears, his path led him to greatness, becoming the number 1 streamer and VR gamer in the world. His life took a major turn. And, after receiving early access to THE major game-changing update by the developers, things were looking up for him even more. What awaited him was something truly special that no man would have dreamed of... One much darker than he would have ever expected... [ Greetings Ren Silver… You have proven yourself worthy without a shadow of a doubt… Welcome to your NEW REALITY... ] *****************************IMPORTANT AUTHOR NOTE! This post was made by #NoHaremGang! Although the synopsis and the first few chapters make it sound like one, THIS IS NOT A VRMMO NOVEL. This is a proper Isekai! This will be a MALE LEAD novel, despite the cover. There will be romance however later down the line, and the person in the cover will be the main love interest! The Novel's MC will not be a very moral guy. He is not a hero! He will value logic and reasoning over most of his decisions and values his own survival! There will be some romance later on but probably not a lot of it! The first few chapters are slow and set up the world so don't let that deter you, because the action is not too far from there! I hope you guys enjoy the novel! There will also be original art on specific chapters! So keep an eye out for those! ;) *****************************
8 193 - In Serial11 Chapters
Gur-dun: Grey's Selection.
Afterlife advocates have a difficult job, they never get the easy assignments. Balancing the Benefits, Penalties, and Goals for each client's new life is tricky, every time Mr. Grey must do what he can with what he has. Mr Grey's latest client has been royally screwed by his previous life, and worse, by interns to the reincarnation system.The only solution Mr. Grey could find might be worse than his clients previous life...This is the unfortunate and amazing life of Gur-dun, Son of Suffering.
8 179 - In Serial23 Chapters
Return to Ninjago (Book 2 of the Enchanted DVD Player tetralogy)
Y/n is summoned back to Ninjago just as Lloyd is about to be possessed by Morro. After she releases Lloyd from the ghost's hold, things don't get easier from there. The ninja soon find out that the cursed realm is not what it seems.In the meantime, the overlord is planning his return to New Ninjago City, never giving the ninja team a break. The overlord is after Lloyd's golden power, but soon he discovers that y/n might actually be more valuable...•Book 2 in the "The Enchanted DVD Player" seriesHighest Rankings:#1 Lloydxreader 26/09/2019#1 ninjagoships 12/04/2020#1 ninjagofanfiction 14/01/2022Started: September 2019Completed: October 2019Notice: if this story is found on any website other than Wattpad, then it has been taken without permission
8 125 - In Serial22 Chapters
New Roommate
COMPLETED 😌💛Jake and the boys moved back to the Traphouse and they had one more empty room. Jake asked his childhood friend Y/N to move in. She agreed and moved in right away. Colby: what's the new girls name again?(This will contain screenshots of fake convos and IG posts. This story is already posted and finished on my IG)#1 on Colbybrockfan #2 on colbybrock
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