《The Critique Rule book》Critiques
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What will be critiqued??...
These are the basics of what we will be looking at when we critique a work, please take this into account when submitting a work.
- Title
= is it catchy?
= is it applicable?
= does is have any special meaning or significance?
- Description/Blurb
= does it catch readers attention?
= grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc...
- Characters
= relationships
= personalities
= growth
= Are they based off of/ or are they a famous person, icon, figure, character, etc...?
- is this supposed to be a Fan fiction?
- Details
= Too little? Too much? Are they relevant?
= Does it make sense?
- Consistency
= do characters stay in character?
= do details stay the why they were at the beginning? If not why not?
= do you know when, where, and who you're writing about?
= If a song/fan fic, does it relate? Is it correct?
- is it an AU?
- Technique
- Skill
= grammar
= spelling
- Creativity/ Uniqueness
= is it too cliche?
= do you have a plot twist?
= will readers stay interested?
- Thought
= did you put ANY into your work?
= do you know how, why, and when things happen(ed)?
- if not, why not?
- Proper tags
Requirements
1. Prepay once we approve your form (dedications will come later)
2. Adhere to rules
3. Complete form:
- Title
- Description
- Characters
= Main & Supporting unless secret
- What chapters will be focused on?
- link to story
- how would you like to receive your critique?
= PM
= Comment
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Femalekind
Femalekind Book One: Created by Prometheus, exiled by Zeus to placate Aphrodite her new soul is scarred as an apology to Prometheus' tormentor Aetos the Caucasian Eagle, spawn of Echidna. She must discover what it means to be human, and then what it means to be female in a new world far from her creator. Will she hold on to her humanity, embrace existence as a monster as does Aetos or be a slave to the first powerful presence she meets in this new world. Book Two: Aphrodite is betrayed by Zeus and seeks revenge. Book Three: Aim to hit a fortnightly release schedule. This book concentrates on further developing several threads from Book Two in the form of multiple POVs, with Aphrodite more as a significant influence instead of the MC. P.S. the Covers are made from free resources and originals which aren't mine, they are works re-imagined by me, so if the original artist contacts me they will be withdrawn.
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Hero:Generation
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Venos: exploring the city life
Venos is a, 15th century, girl and she is also, a part of a (fictional) minority. Since her birth, she was cursed to bear another personality, another voice, inside of her; but aside from all that, she is still a child seeking a pleasant childhood and the only way to accomplish that is to distant herself from her conservative village, by enrolling into an academy far away, in a city. Follow Venos' journey, as she slowly explores the bizarre, cruel and exciting city life. [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
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Immortal War
A blend of the Chinese Xianxia genre with traditional Western Fantasy setting and voice. No endless cycles of revenge to drive a plot line. More internal dialogue from the character's POV so you feel more drawn INTO them as opposed to viewing them.Synopsis: A young man born of a merchant family takes a journey on the path of Cultivation. In a society where the strong eat the weak and nobody bats an eye to blatant murders on the street. Can this youth wage a war against the establishment power to secure a better life for not only himself, but for all men?Chapters on RRL will trail publications on my wordpress website. If you want to get current on the story, head to: https://wexiay.wordpress.com/
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I wish I was Her
based on heatherstory about Shun Kaido and his new discovered feelings for Kubayasu Aren story is based off of heather by Conan Gray some of the lyrics will be in this book .Decide to do a KuboKai story sense there is not a lot of those FINISHED UwUCharacters in here are not mine!!! Only the ones I created thanks for reading bye uwu
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