《The Critique Rule book》Critiques
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What will be critiqued??...
These are the basics of what we will be looking at when we critique a work, please take this into account when submitting a work.
- Title
= is it catchy?
= is it applicable?
= does is have any special meaning or significance?
- Description/Blurb
= does it catch readers attention?
= grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc...
- Characters
= relationships
= personalities
= growth
= Are they based off of/ or are they a famous person, icon, figure, character, etc...?
- is this supposed to be a Fan fiction?
- Details
= Too little? Too much? Are they relevant?
= Does it make sense?
- Consistency
= do characters stay in character?
= do details stay the why they were at the beginning? If not why not?
= do you know when, where, and who you're writing about?
= If a song/fan fic, does it relate? Is it correct?
- is it an AU?
- Technique
- Skill
= grammar
= spelling
- Creativity/ Uniqueness
= is it too cliche?
= do you have a plot twist?
= will readers stay interested?
- Thought
= did you put ANY into your work?
= do you know how, why, and when things happen(ed)?
- if not, why not?
- Proper tags
Requirements
1. Prepay once we approve your form (dedications will come later)
2. Adhere to rules
3. Complete form:
- Title
- Description
- Characters
= Main & Supporting unless secret
- What chapters will be focused on?
- link to story
- how would you like to receive your critique?
= PM
= Comment
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Trench
/ Somwhere in the world of gesia where magic spells and the fire of guns are a daily commodity on the frontlines/ ZoOm..BoOm ZoOm..BoOm ZoOm..BoOM Fuck that one was close, I turn left looking for my squad mate in the trench, and immediately I turn away tears in my eyes, dead, definitely dead there is no way he survived that, one of the shrapnel shards of the artillery shell got him dead in the eye, I hear the sound of blood gushing, out like a water fountain but much more disturbing. I try to vomit but after we got separated from the supply line for more than 6 days after the attack of a squadron of dragons there wasn’t much left for me to eat, so the only thing that was coming out of my mouth was the sound of emptiness I want to go home...I want to see my family..I..I... ZoOm…BoOm I flinch, I could swear the Artillery shells are getting more precise after every second, I try to grab my gun without looking at the corpse of my squad mate, the moment my fingertips grace the cold steel of my weapon I feel something wet, I shudder knowing what it was. I close my eyes and stand up my hand around my gun, planning to never let it go. I try to rub the blood of my hands on my already dirty pants and after that i climb out and run faster than i ever did before... ...Ziiiiiip...splash.... / the Cover art belongs to the kikstarter campaign of Interbellum RPG /
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Armin Wright. That's my name. How I got here? I don't know. Where I'm from? I don't know. Why I'm here? I don't know. I do know that the ability to do magic is frikkin amazing! I also know that surviving matters way more to me at the moment. Crude magic can only do so much. Sleeping, eating, drinking, oh- and not getting eaten are kind of at the top of my list at the moment! What to expect: A crazy fantasy world of eat or be eaten in the most literal way possible.Survival and leveling / self improvement focus.A decidely not OP MC. Yes he has a little bit of a cheat ability but that certainly isn't going to fill his rumbling tummy.No language translation skillLittle need for a language translation skill - no humans
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Elemental Heir | ✔️
(Complete) **A MATURE FANTASY** Book #1 in the Elemental Heir Series. "Your ready wit never fails to surprise and delight me, Brenya." He murmured, his lips only inches from my own.I blinked, my lips parting, as his heady scent encircled me. He licked his lower lip, running his teeth over it as his electric blue eyes burned into mine. The heat of his bare chest seeped through my thin cotton shirt, thawing my icy irritation."Even when you're being cross." He added in a low voice. He leaned closer, before I could respond, and ran his teeth along my jaw.I suppressed a moan. "I wouldn't be cross if you weren't so keen on irritating me." I said, unable to hide the smile in my voice.I felt his answering smile against my neck. "How can I make it up to you?" He whispered, planting gentle kisses up and down the column of my throat. He moved to the other side of my neck, flicking his tongue once against the mating mark near my shoulder.My hands slid up his abdomen, exploring the dips and hard lines of his muscles. Heat uncurled deep in my belly, spreading lower, and lower, until I felt my panties dampen. He growled into my ear, sending shivers down my entire body.*~*~*~*~*~*~#1 in ROMANCE 9/13/18~~#1 in ACTION-ADVENTURE 12/05/18 and 4/25/19~~#1 in ACTION-ROMANCE 1/16/19~~#1 in DRAGONS 6/9/19~~#1 in FAIRIES 7/20/19~*~*~*~*~*~*⚠️!! WARNING !!⚠️ This book contains intense violence, mature language, and strong sexual themes.
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"Sometimes some must die in order for the rest of us to survive." Ever since the condemned rebelled, the world of Desmond has been shrouded in darkness. Having ripped the throne away from the Creator Himself, King Motch keeps a firm-taloned grip on his subjects, aided by a ruthless, Gifted being known as the Veiled Lady. Families are torn apart as parents are forced to give up their children to be raised by pitiless trainers who groom the children to become brain-washed warriors. All who fight back are dead. In a strict society built on the blood of the people, hope is a rare term. Yet it is still had. Against all odds, four lives are entangled. A timid boy brought from another world, a princess warrior on the run, a young soldier haunted by death and duty, and a slave boy with mysterious gifts - they are brought together to fulfill words spoken long ago: that a Deliverer would come and find the Creator's son, who, in turn, would save them all. Thrown into the fight of their lives, the four must work together to bring about a change in a dark and dangerous world. The mission the Deliverer has been given is a necessary one, a foreseen prophecy spoken of long ago. Therefore, Motch knows they are coming. And, as we all know, dragons love playing with their prey. DAILY UPDATES!
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