《The Critique Rule book》Critiques
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What will be critiqued??...
These are the basics of what we will be looking at when we critique a work, please take this into account when submitting a work.
- Title
= is it catchy?
= is it applicable?
= does is have any special meaning or significance?
- Description/Blurb
= does it catch readers attention?
= grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc...
- Characters
= relationships
= personalities
= growth
= Are they based off of/ or are they a famous person, icon, figure, character, etc...?
- is this supposed to be a Fan fiction?
- Details
= Too little? Too much? Are they relevant?
= Does it make sense?
- Consistency
= do characters stay in character?
= do details stay the why they were at the beginning? If not why not?
= do you know when, where, and who you're writing about?
= If a song/fan fic, does it relate? Is it correct?
- is it an AU?
- Technique
- Skill
= grammar
= spelling
- Creativity/ Uniqueness
= is it too cliche?
= do you have a plot twist?
= will readers stay interested?
- Thought
= did you put ANY into your work?
= do you know how, why, and when things happen(ed)?
- if not, why not?
- Proper tags
Requirements
1. Prepay once we approve your form (dedications will come later)
2. Adhere to rules
3. Complete form:
- Title
- Description
- Characters
= Main & Supporting unless secret
- What chapters will be focused on?
- link to story
- how would you like to receive your critique?
= PM
= Comment
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