《The Critique Rule book》Rules
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Rules
1. To be a fairly new story. We don't want to read an entire novel (unless Full Story Critique is ordered)
2. LGBTQ stories accepted
3. Explicit scenes accepted
4. No "locked"/fan only stories
5. If we have too many clients at the moment there is a waiting list. We will inform you if this is the case but please be patient.
6. NO CANCER STORIES!! PERIOD. If a supporting character has it or it is mentioned in passing that is fine but NO full blown cancer stories
7. Don't get mad at harsh Critiques
8. Do NOT ask us to fan you! We won't
9. Do NOT spam our pages! They will be deleted and you will be blocked and/or reported
10. To request a critique you must be the author or beta/publisher with authors permission
11. Plagiarized stories WILL be reported
12. English ONLY, at the moment (Spanish possibly in the future)
13. FanFics- we only do fandoms we are familiar with, so please check first
14. Anything sent over Email must include the site/sites it will be published on
15. If you know what critic/beta you want, please request them
16. Angelz does NOT do beastiality (human/animal). Were, Neko, Anthro, animal/animal is fine though
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The God Effect
After dying an unconventional death, a girl is thrust into the body of an unborn child. Slowly but surely coming to the realisation that her entire existence obliterates all understandings of Magical Power in the universe she had created, our protagonist tries - and fails - to take her life seriously. Come along as a sarcastic and cynical girl tries her hardest to not shake her head in disbelief, restrict herself from groping every cute girl she meets, and tries to hide her absolutely unbelievable cheat-like existence in a world that favours magic overall. [BASICALLY UPDATES SATURDAYS, TRY NOT TO PRESSURE ME, I'LL BREAK. BUT IF YOU LEAVE COMMENTS I'LL [PROBABLY] GAIN BRAIN FUEL TO POWER ON WITH WRITING. Mind you, this is a personal project, because I love OP fem protags, but there aren't enough lesbian/bi harem stories out there, so I wanted to make one... Because I think monster girls are hot, okay? Don't slander me, I sass then have emotional breakdowns.]
8 125 - In Serial16 Chapters
Warlock of the Magus World -offline reading-
What happens when a scientist from a futuristic world reincarnates in a World of Magic and Knights?An awesome MC - that's what happens!A scientist's goal is to explore the secrets of the universe, and this is exactly what Leylin sets out to do when he is reincarnated. Dark, cold and calculating, he makes use of all his resources as he sets off on his adventures to meet his goal.Face? Who needs that... Hmmm... that guy seems too powerful for me to take on now... I better keep a low profile for now.You want me to help you? Sure... but what benefit can I get out of it? Nothing? Bye.Hmmm... that guy looks like he might cause me problems in the future. Should I let him off for now and let him grow into someone that can threaten me..... Nahhh. *kill*
8 85 - In Serial76 Chapters
Reiss of the Eternal
On the northernmost part of the continent, in the humanist kingdom of Ostara’s most faraway region, on a small, quaint fishing town lives Edwin Raanan the youngest son of Hillside's Guardian, a retired adventurer with double marital problems.He is the weakest and most untalented of his siblings, whatever he can do, his older " grumpier" half-brother and "Unique" half-sister can surely do better. He may have been chosen to succeed the village head one day, but that was chosen before he had even been born, but Ran wishes to go against his predestined path, to brave the wide and dangerous world and become a legendary adventurer, to carve his name in history and travel all around the world. But that will prove difficult for a seven-year-old weak child whose sword skills are mediocre at best.Now with the recent arrival of a mage in town Ran has been given an opportunity, a chance that will change his life forever as outside forces play in the background.He will give it his all to travel the path of magic while learning about the people in his life.Sadly, things hardly go the way we want them to. Update: Every Sunday
8 211 - In Serial23 Chapters
Unexpected Text Messages : Stu Macher x reader
Y/n gets pulled into some crazy shit when they get added to a gc they probably shouldn't have been a part of
8 184 - In Serial11 Chapters
Colossal Adventure
The first in a series of 4 books, called "Out of Bounds". In this one we are firstly introduced to Dandelion, who will narrate not only to the reader, but to a bunch of people in the Storyteller Fest who are willing to listen to the story he has been commanded to tell by beings beyond his understanding. He tells about a girl who gets sent into another world through a video game console - the planet Dunia, that harbors the hidan and the hidanna. She quickly realizes there is something sinister in this world only she can see, and gets abducted as a result. However, she is rescued by a boy who calls himself the best Summoner in the world, and is forced to team up with him to be able to return home. But, is she really just inside a video game? And who ordered Dandelion to tell this story, and why?
8 108 - In Serial156 Chapters
Transformers one-shots
Not the best but I like doing fanfictions in my off time. I enjoy them so I hope you will too.
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