《The Critique Rule book》Rules
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Rules
1. To be a fairly new story. We don't want to read an entire novel (unless Full Story Critique is ordered)
2. LGBTQ stories accepted
3. Explicit scenes accepted
4. No "locked"/fan only stories
5. If we have too many clients at the moment there is a waiting list. We will inform you if this is the case but please be patient.
6. NO CANCER STORIES!! PERIOD. If a supporting character has it or it is mentioned in passing that is fine but NO full blown cancer stories
7. Don't get mad at harsh Critiques
8. Do NOT ask us to fan you! We won't
9. Do NOT spam our pages! They will be deleted and you will be blocked and/or reported
10. To request a critique you must be the author or beta/publisher with authors permission
11. Plagiarized stories WILL be reported
12. English ONLY, at the moment (Spanish possibly in the future)
13. FanFics- we only do fandoms we are familiar with, so please check first
14. Anything sent over Email must include the site/sites it will be published on
15. If you know what critic/beta you want, please request them
16. Angelz does NOT do beastiality (human/animal). Were, Neko, Anthro, animal/animal is fine though
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- In Serial73 Chapters
I'm Just the Guard!
When an NPC in the MMORPG game Raidscape achieves sentience, he desperately tries to level up to stop Players from raiding the castle.
8 112 - In Serial7 Chapters
Invictus
The story of a disgruntled civil servant that despite his hatred for his role, he keeps working until one day an assignment changes his life around completely. A life torn apart, and a Kingdom in turmoil. Fate however holds the strings which will decide the outcome of it all.
8 81 - In Serial12 Chapters
CRYPT 12
As a Porter, Bishop's primary job profile is decrypting synergists used in the development of Matrix for the brain. A support mechanism which allows the brain to thrive in a new world the human race find themselves, one which has suffered major depletion as a result of man's zest for development, hence, the exodus to Phase I--formerly called the moon.But not everyone left for Phase I.Somewhere in the highly unstable and reactive Sector 16 of Bathfog Ruins back at Phase II is the Eureka Elgium synergist, a key factor to the revolutionary Afterlife Matrix. Bishop's next job.Joined by a team of the finest squad in Phase II, Bishop sets out for Bathfog Ruins, but when their airship crash-land in the ruins, everything changes. Certain truths are unraveled about the government's scheme, their lives are threatened by unusual beings and Mecha hit men. And when the biggest fact of all is revealed, Bishop realizes he's more valuable than he knows and his real job is staying alive.*Current cover by @AAKhan
8 303 - In Serial14 Chapters
Labyrinth of Anchored Moments
While dreaming, a hard working family man is approached by a child-like god that has become bored of their custom created gaming world. Allowing the man to choose whatever 'Class' he wants, he chooses to become a 'Time Wizard'. He's dropped off in a city above a labyrinth with only this directive. "You just have to play my game, which is styled after your world’s dungeon exploration RPGs, level up, and save the world. Or don’t. I don’t care."
8 130 - In Serial13 Chapters
Discontinued-Harems Are Evil!!
Sorry!, This story as of now is discontinued! I apologize greatly if anyone liked my work! But, if I feel like it I will try to Revamp some of them and make them better!
8 179 - In Serial40 Chapters
Sundrop x Moondrop {Smut, Angst Oneshots}
A smut one-shot but with small little bits of plot- LATER CHAPTERS ARE BETTER FOR BETTER SMUT SKIP TO THE NEWER CHAPTERS
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