《The Critique Rule book》Rules
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1. To be a fairly new story. We don't want to read an entire novel (unless Full Story Critique is ordered)
2. LGBTQ stories accepted
3. Explicit scenes accepted
4. No "locked"/fan only stories
5. If we have too many clients at the moment there is a waiting list. We will inform you if this is the case but please be patient.
6. NO CANCER STORIES!! PERIOD. If a supporting character has it or it is mentioned in passing that is fine but NO full blown cancer stories
7. Don't get mad at harsh Critiques
8. Do NOT ask us to fan you! We won't
9. Do NOT spam our pages! They will be deleted and you will be blocked and/or reported
10. To request a critique you must be the author or beta/publisher with authors permission
11. Plagiarized stories WILL be reported
12. English ONLY, at the moment (Spanish possibly in the future)
13. FanFics- we only do fandoms we are familiar with, so please check first
14. Anything sent over Email must include the site/sites it will be published on
15. If you know what critic/beta you want, please request them
16. Angelz does NOT do beastiality (human/animal). Were, Neko, Anthro, animal/animal is fine though
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An Advance in Time
In the year 2050, nanotech was invented that allowed humanity to do what it does best: ignore reality. Jason was a project manager at Razor, Inc. where those simulations were crafted and improved every day. That is, until an accident with a power outage and a poorly-coded backup protocol saw his consciousness transferred to a server and his body in a coma for the foreseeable future. With the corporate vultures circling around what they see as a new piece of company software, Jason finds himself in one of the simulations he used to design. If you enjoy kingdom-building, strategy, technological progression and big challenges, you’ll likely enjoy An Advance In Time. Remember to follow the story by clicking the bookmark icon and add the story to your favorites list! Reader comments: “It’s like those incremental games, but much much more entertaining. I can’t wait to see where this goes, and can’t wait for the next update!” - Reddit user “Solid prose and an interesting start... I’m always a sucker for industrialization, so I think I’ll be watching this.” - Reddit user “The story is just the type of story I love reading.” -RoyalRoad reviewer Discord server: https://discord.gg/aRQNgR7 [A WINNER of the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
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The Gamer's core
As a gamer, Damian would love nothing more than to spend his days playing virtual games, and -Knights of oblivion- is his go-to game, but all that changes when the young boy finds himself thrown into a world much different than his previous world. Filled with new friends, enemies & rivals alike. Swords and shields. Wands & staves. Might and magic. Now he must do whatever he can to survive. Use everything he learned and adapt. Utilize his limited arsenal to evolve. Understand and master his new ability -Gamer's core-.
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Sam and the Dead
Samantha, apprentice necromancer, raised the dead for a living. Her sponsor and mentor, Maestro James Cowen, has promised her the career of her dreams. She only had to do what she was told.
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Shepherd Moon
On the run from the Earth government and military forces, wanted former terrorist Maddy Hawthorn seeks a new life on Mars. When she discovers plans for another terrorist attack, her only hope to prevent a global catastrophe is to seek the help of other insurgents. But everyone wants her dead, including the people she is trying to save. With the help of a runaway Elite teenager and a band of renegade slaves, Maddy fights to save the very government system she despises. Nothing lasts forever. Although it alludes to events in the previous Maddy Hawthorn book, "Days of Iron", this is a separate story and is designed to be read and understood independently.Cover art by BeyondBookCovers. www.beyondbookcovers.com
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TRAGEDY || R. BLACK ✓
BOOK ONE OF THE MARAUDER ERA SERIES-"Most love stories end in a tragedy, you know.""Not this one."-started march 8, 2021completed march 15, 2021
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Tranquility: A collection of original poems
"The words in my mind are too hard to express.Is that another problem you refuse to address?Political powers you say are corrupt,Though your ways in turn seem equally unjust."Welcome to TranquilityWhere things will be tested for their plausibility."Don't worry, continue your ways, my friend,For I have countless ways to make it end."HIGHEST RANKINGS:9 in poetry - 13/09/221 in originalpoems - 18/09/229 in poem - 18/09/224 in poembook - 18/09/225 in poetrycollection - 18/09/22
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