《The Critique Rule book》Rules
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Rules
1. To be a fairly new story. We don't want to read an entire novel (unless Full Story Critique is ordered)
2. LGBTQ stories accepted
3. Explicit scenes accepted
4. No "locked"/fan only stories
5. If we have too many clients at the moment there is a waiting list. We will inform you if this is the case but please be patient.
6. NO CANCER STORIES!! PERIOD. If a supporting character has it or it is mentioned in passing that is fine but NO full blown cancer stories
7. Don't get mad at harsh Critiques
8. Do NOT ask us to fan you! We won't
9. Do NOT spam our pages! They will be deleted and you will be blocked and/or reported
10. To request a critique you must be the author or beta/publisher with authors permission
11. Plagiarized stories WILL be reported
12. English ONLY, at the moment (Spanish possibly in the future)
13. FanFics- we only do fandoms we are familiar with, so please check first
14. Anything sent over Email must include the site/sites it will be published on
15. If you know what critic/beta you want, please request them
16. Angelz does NOT do beastiality (human/animal). Were, Neko, Anthro, animal/animal is fine though
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A FORGEMASTER OF WAYLAND
William Drake, a modern day Illinois blacksmith, is no stranger to unusual orders, but the latest one is odder than most. He has been commissioned to create a sword of bizarre specifications, and the sword isn't the only thing that's strange. His customer, Markham, is definitely not a local, and balks at the bill. The sword is stolen by Markham, and William storms after him, finally retrieving the blade at the top of a rented Scottish tower. During the confrontation, William is transported, artifact in hand, to an alternate world called Wayland.Sly bartering demons, the Aos Si, wish to claim Wayland, as does a rival duke and his mage, Veddick. Meanwhile, a banished dieity, Credine, is seeking return to Wayland by using William as his unwilling avatar. Caught in a web between the three competing powers, William must unravel the mystery of the sword he has forged, stave off the encroaching god Credine and save the residents of Wayland from the god, the usurpation of the rival duke, and the Ao Si.
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Hero or Fool
Waltraut Fayiz, a listless 15-year old boy, finds the world utterly mundane and boring. Fortunately, he’s abducted from this bleak outlook and cast into a world full of colour and fantasy. Contracted into following a now hated Goddess, will he transform the world’s hate into love? Or, will he go down in history as the Goddess’ last follower? Whatever the outcome, he’ll always be a hero in at least one persons’ heart…
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Greenblood
Drake Castro is your ordinary 21-year-old gamer, except that he's won the lottery... twice. After getting early access for him and his friends to the new VR game, GreenTree Online, he joins the game ready to kill some monsters and become a legend. However, when Drake and his friends uncover a sinister questline, they learn that the game is far darker than the cheery environment and cute monsters might make it out to be. Now Drake is embroiled in a plot far over his head, and he has to make a dangerous choice. When the stakes are high, which is more important; morality or freedom?
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The Villain's Double Life
“The Villain’s Double Life as the Hero’s Mentor," “Demon Nobles Want to Live Too: A Hero-Raising Simulator for the Transmigrated Villain," “Just Because I’m a Villain Doesn’t Mean I Want the World to End!” Cyrus Calvide was the second son of an aristocratic lord; haughty, vain and power-hungry. One day, when his ancestral inheritance manifested, he discovered he was able to steal other’s powers and abilities using demonic magic. Taking this as a sign that he was destined to rule over others and become the new king of this land, he poisoned his father, killed his elder brother, and embarked on the path to greatness, taking advantage of a demonic invasion to consolidate power and harvest the abilities of others in a cruel and bloody fashion. Until he was summarily defeated by the Hero as a mid-game boss battle and executed for his crimes, of course. When a dedicated fan of the RPG “Next to Eden” awakened in the body of the cruelest future Count, four years before the beginning of the game, he pledged to live humbly. He would let his brother lead and support the Hero from the shadows to ensure the demon invasion would be defeated and he could enjoy life in peace. Rather, he would have, if he hadn’t gotten the Hero’s mentor killed in a freak monster attack before the Hero’s training could even begin. How was he supposed to live a life of peace and luxury if the Hero couldn’t stop the end of the world!? Donning a mask, Cyrus took up mentoring the Hero himself; how hard could it possibly be? . . . Four years later, the kind jack-of-all-trades hero Leon had become a twisted powerhouse: alienating his party members, clearing enemy encounters in a single magical blast, and coldly ignoring the affections of the girl whose love would have allowed him to clear the final boss. He seemed to have plastered himself to his Master’s side, instead. Cyrus bit back his despair while the hero reached out to grasp his hand. “Please stop ignoring the saint, Leon; you can't beat the Demon King by grinding stats! You need the power of love, remember?” “Don’t worry, Master,” Leon smiled as he traced the lines of Cyrus’s palm gently, almost reverently. “I have all the love I need.” VDL is two parts plot and worldbuilding, one part slow-build gay romance, starring a man far too proud to admit he's in over his head and the hero who loves him. Should be updating weekly.
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Number 7
The Cataclysm. The end of the world. When one wakes up in a world destroyed with rot and overtaken by the undead, survival should be one's number 1 priority. However survival is no longer an option. As he awakens one day, Marcus finds that he is no longer alone in this world. Ever. [It is only through experiencing death and destruction... that you will truly know the meaning of suffering.] [And the demented nature of humanity.] [And what better place to experience such things... than in a world which has been ruined?] This is the story of a man and a monster. [Man and monster... are they not one and the same?] This is the story of Number 7.
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The Jerk | A Lizkook FF
What will happen between Lisa Blackpink and Jungkook BTS? Will they be able to love each other again? Or will they find a new person to be the love of their lives? Lets find out soon!
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