《The Critique Rule book》Warnings!
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1. We will be harsh if necessary
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Arcadis Park
Jonah is a college senior who can't seem to score an internship, so she's returned to the summer job that she's had every year since she was old enough to work: lifeguarding at the run down waterpark on the outskirts of her small town. Things take a turn for the worse when a dismembered body is discovered in the lake that feeds the park's attractions, and the whole staff becomes convinced that they are the murderer's next target. [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] (this story is complete as of 12/3/19, though no promises I won't make edits at some point lol)
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The Dark Wish Maker
This story is about how a young girl that had been given a single wish out of the infinite wishes that she could've chosen, had chosen to be able to grant wishes to herself and the great price that she have to pay for obtaining that which she desired.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This is a new story, i am trying to write as a hobby, due to a anon inspiration.My English grammar can be call very terrible. so don't expect anything in that department and if you happen to have the time to spot out a odd sentence, please tell me and i will change it.
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Finding Fabric
Chen Feiyan’s bloodied feet ache as she races up the steps deep in the forest. Fei seeks sanctuary in a monastery hidden in the mountains. Instead, she finds a new destiny amongst the priests, workers, and ancient trees inside the sanctuary walls. The monastery holds magic not known by the world below, used to protect against creatures emerging from the dark of night. Fei struggles with burgeoning feelings for another woman at the monastery as the allure of the monastery’s power pulls her deeper into the mountain. South of the monastery, the ambitious governor Guo Xue searches for Fei, his missing concubine. He hires the experienced investigator, Hu Li. On the road, caught between two empires, Li finds himself in over his head as he learns more about his dangerous employer. Li must decide whether he’s trying to find the girl, or save her from Governor Guo’s grasp. Little does Li know, Fei’s newfound magic means she’s prepared to defend both herself and the monastery: she's not looking for a savior.
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Tesyrion's Call
“Achieving your dreams can make your life more complicated than you expect” Since the accident that took his parents, all Dale Hall wished was a change that could rip his world apart and rid him of the overwhelming feeling of loneliness and boredom. But when he finds a strange letter, ancient machinations touch his fate as he starts learning that his wishes have consequences. Dragged into a new world and thrust into a wicked game, Dale will have to face eldritch horrors and discover the mysteries of this unearthly place to find the truth about his past, evolving to fight for his life against horrible and unimaginable creatures from beyond the void. Tesyrion's Call is a progression LitRPG story in which the characters are taken to a world filled with eldritch beings and other monsters. It's my first attempt at writing and I've been planning this story for a while now, so I hope you're as excited reading it as I am writing it. If you like stories where the MC grows steadily through overcoming challenges without suddenly becoming overpowered, you've come to the right place. Release schedule: M - T - W - TH - F (one chapter a day)
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DreamNotFound One Shots
One shotsWill include swearing, fluff, possibly smut?70K WHATTTTTT YOU ARE POGGERS!!
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Dracula's new Vampire Bride has arrived at the hotel. How will Mavis react to having a stepmother? How will Dennis react to having a grandmother?
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