《Legends of Etheria》Chapter 1 - The world of Etheria
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"Here take this, it'll help get rid of the pain." Bob pulled out a little flask of red liquid from a little pouch tied to his waist and shook the liquid around before handing it to Ray who was soaking wet and hurting all over.
Ray drank up and felt a soothing feeling flow down the back of his spine and the pain significantly dissipated but more importantly. "Ugh! This stuff tastes like shit!" It was like cooking a nice juicy steak with sour candy and lots of mustard, a most disgusting concoction.
"Heh, you'll get used to it. Most of the potions are made out of bitter herbs and other stuff so you don't really expect it to taste good."
"Bleh, I will never get used to this crud. Got anything better than this?" Ray was trying to wash his mouth out with the lake water as his face twisted in disgust.
"Nope, but who knows? There may be a delicious health potion recipe out there somewhere, but as far as I know it hasn't been found yet." With a shrug and a smile Bob brushed off Ray's question and threw him a white tunic and black shorts. "Here's some new player clothes for you, don't want you wandering around in the nude eh?"
Ray looked down at his nude form and gasped, trying to cover himself with his arms as he snuck behind a large rock. "What the hell! Nudity is allowed too?!"
"Everything's allowed! They wanted a game that most resembles real life but in a fantasy setting, you can get sick, get married, have kids and kill monsters."
With haste Ray wore his new clothes and several message boxes appeared before him in transparent blue boxes.
Achievement Unlocked: Baby's first diapers (You have worn your first clothes with a new character. The first step to avoid becoming a pervert.) Welcome to Etheria (You have fallen into the world of Etheria, what happens next will be up to you.)
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Clothes equipped: A shirt. (Just a shirt.) Pants. (Just pants.)
"I got achievements."
"Guessing it's the newbie ones. I found some of them really funny."
"You would with your twisted sense of humor. Well, how do I look?" Ray stood proudly, his chest puffed out and his hair jokingly flowing in the wind.
"Like a noob getting too ahead of himself. Let's go, the starting town is just a bit away from here we can arrive in a few minutes walk." Without turning around Bob began walking down the cheap dirt road into a thick forest.
"I'm coming!" As Ray stood and began walking, he heard a beep and behold. Skill Gained: Movement Lvl 1(The ability to move.)
"What a fun game..."
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