《One Who Questions》Chapter 22
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‘Qi is the natural energy of life. It gives the body the will to exist and the soul energy to flourish. The most basic of all energy forms known to all mortal kind. Qi is the physicality of existence in the form of energy.’
That opening statement clarified many lingering thoughts and suspicions I had from skill descriptions and the like. From there, it was a description and pictures of Dantain, meridians, and even Qi vessels. The book was almost 300 pages in total. Basic child education but holy shit, if this is considered a children's book, then what was college level. Start them out young, so they don’t go through Qi deviation like my dumbass like me did. Same with my Qi vessels, I know I would have to create my own personal meridians. With each one tied directly to a major organ. With my brain, to my surprise, not being on the list. Heart, Lungs, kidneys, liver, and other major organs all had similar functions for Qi as they did for blood and other bodily functions. What stumps me was if I tried to create my own, would the drawbacks be greater than the benefits. All it would take is one mistake, and I could permanently damage them. The book even references the importance of meridian protection, with them being vital assets to the body's health. There's a direct correlation between the rank of one's meridians and the talent and hard work one would need to progress on Atherion. I even learned there’s no baseline for stats. One can be born with all 10’s ’20s, or even ’30s across the board, while few unlucky ones could have 1-5’s and be considered crippled even with the system's help. Thinking back to my stats now and what I came here with, piecing it together, I truly was on the bottom of the totem pole with INT and WIS being my only strengths. Since meridians are something innately born with and only through rigorous experimentation, one's body can be altered. One must deal with the luck of the draw. To my surprise, genetics has a ‘MAJOR’ impact on the grade of one's meridians. If one's parents have an average rank of C rank, then their child's chance also inheriting that rank is almost 50% but at the cost of 60% Qi deviation because of the supreme overload on the infant's body.
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That's how far it went into the specific; right when it was getting interesting, my only hypothesis is balancing. For if this entire plane of existence is a training field for future gods. You can’t have everyone being born top level. But with the Source being the original creator, all about love and what not being the original alpha and omega. Why would it allow the chance of infants to die at birth? The concept of free will comes into play for who has the right to deny two individuals the chance to leave a lineage of their success to the world. Death is not something one should worry about because their line is destined for the greatest because of their efforts from the start.
Going back to the meridian section, I finally understood why my skills seemed to take up so much of my Qi reserves. It’s because I’m only running on the bare minimum of what my body can truly produce. Or should I say refined, for that is what my daintian does. It refines the external mana it absorbs to produce my own Qi supply. It’s not a storage device but a purification machine. That new information will definitely help with how I view future skill creation.
For my situation, I was given a new mind, body, and soul based on the previous me’s ‘stats” from earth. Unlike everyone else here, I wasn’t born into a world of numbers, which gave me a loophole in a lot of what would be considered common sense. A prime example being my artificial Qi vessels. At any point, I could stop the skill and recreate them into a superior grade but would require the knowledge and skill to do so, with my meridians stopping me from doing the same concept. The source must know bringing an average man from earth here with no support would result in absolute death for me and my species. So what it does it do? To play by its own ruleset allows me to ‘reset’ and recreate myself within its own rules. A true backdoor to the system that dictates one's starting potential and position from birth. For I am nothing more than a spirit given parts to fill, just as Jeremiah said, a spirit user is a scary thing. My traits now make sense. Through knowledge, I can gain the power to alter myself. I’m playing to my strength, not just the physicality of them but my cultural ones. In my day-to-day life, violence was never a problem but thinking outside the box and observing the world was. To be wealthy, one doesn’t play by society's rules. No, they bypass those same rules taking and rarely giving to those to create a reality befitting only them. The same goes for athletic performance from performance-enhancing drugs. To secret knowledge kept by those in power to keep the common man in a constant state of less and them more. This was my advantage, my ‘cheat code’ to this bloody system.
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A true spirit user with no limitation only set by oneself.
Within an instant of that thought passing, a notification from my status forcefully showed itself to me.
Wisdom increased by 5 Intelligence increased 5 [GROW, Jack Talbot. Do Not Disappoint Me.]
I could only look in pure shock. I could feel the energy radiating off this message. This wasn’t the system giving me some random bullshit inspirational message. Something or someone was watching me. Whoever it is, had a deep sense of what I could only sense as Duty towards me. The question that raddled my brain constantly was I the puppet or the master in this game of chess? It was answered, but I still don't know by who or what? Swiping the screen away. I could only go inside my inner world, my own sanctuary from the outside, and hysterically laugh at the situation.
I could only imagine what I could learn from the mana and psy book. This is bigger than me in all aspects. This is only the bloody start. Pure excitement ran through my very being. In my soul, I feel a deep burning for MORE! Back on earth, I thought I had nothing but here on Atherion.
THE POSSIBILITIES ARE ENDLESS.
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8 130What Is It Like To Be Eternal? (Completed)
Actual Word Count: 683 925 Words and 2487 pages. Under edition. Chapter 36-44 must be edited. Read the red text below to learn more. Synopsis: Have you ever thought about what is it like to be Eternal? What does being Eternal even mean? Maybe I can show you what it is that you are desiring. What lies at the center of the universe, when you reach the peak of strength and power? Can love reach that place too, or do you lose your feelings the stronger you get? How long can you travel and hold onto yourself, before feeling that you are starting to fall apart, losing your mind to your strength? How long is your road? Your feelings? What's going to win over you? The Darkness and the Hate? The Love and the Light? Or maybe none? Follow me as I show you my colorful yet gray path to eternity. My Discord server: https://discord.gg/XMSzDPH Special thanks to my editors. Azorath1234 (70-99th chapter), BlackStarLine and Kaentyr from the 100th chapter. Cornerstones:9th Chapter - Bonding Through the Night38th Chapter - The Way of Cultivation is a Way of Life54th Chapter - The Universe Is Ever Changing and Evolving69th Chapter - Beyond the bond [Inheritance]83rd Chapter - What I call Art!88th Chapter - What Does It Take To Kill?93rd Chapter - Chasing Rainbows [Loop?]108th Chapter - The Fall of a Creator?109th Chapter - A Family [Descendant]119th Chapter - What Is It Like To Be Eternal? Detailed reviews:http://royalroadl.com/fiction/10058/what-is-it-like-to-be-eternal-completed?review=132372#review-132372http://royalroadl.com/fiction/10058/what-is-it-like-to-be-eternal-completed?review=153956#review-153956 Both the Novel and the Cover picture are copyrighted. The Picture is a result of my commission. Cover Art: Novel: P.S.: I'm also hosting my novel here and on Novel Updates Forum. Nowhere else for now! EDIT: The novel is in rework. The original and the new ones are completely different. Where you see [Edited] it means that I'm done with editing the STORY! Whereas where you don't see it, it's in the old style. For now, I'm editing only the style. Once I'm done with every chapter, I'll run through it once again and correct possible grammatical mistakes. The style will be edited until the 45th chapter.
8 103Pawns to the Flame
It was supposed to be just another day. Wake up, contribute to society, go home and try to keep yourself sane. It was without sign or warning, that the unlucky soul was torn away and forced into an unfamiliar body. Their past memories a blur, the future hidden, the present unfamiliar. Stranded in a harsh world that is no more hospitable than the last, it would take everything they have in power to survive. But first - how do these weird limbs work? Temporary Update Schedule: M-W-T-F. The tags and content warnings are placeholders in case my writing goes that direction. It's not a promise or guarantee of said content. This is my first time at writing a fiction and stupidity is my first language, so please be kind in your criticism. I hope you enjoy reading this story as much as I do writing it.
8 98The Lost One
At 19, life has given Aislinn Nox many things, most of them she never wanted. Like dead parents at the age of six. Scars.A slaughtered pack.Nightmares. To be forced to live with humans. Thirteen years of hell. A new name.An old legacy. All of them are hers, all of them have broken her, but none of that will matter when she finally gets the one thing she desires: revenge.For five years she has been planning her revenge for the brutal murder of her parents, and the vicious slaughter of her entire pack. And for five years, it has been all that she has lived for.And nowhere, in those neat little plans did she included a pack, friends, a mate she could never deserve, or remembering everything and everyone she lost. But life is cruel. And rarely do we get what we want. ..Kaiden Salvatori is the first born son of Alpha Sergio Salvatori, who thought he had life all figured out. He was easily learning the ropes of the family business, taking over his roles both in the pack as Alpha, as well in the corporate world as a powerful CEO. It was all simple and predictable, boring even.But that all changes in a single night when he happens to stumble across a she-wolf being hunted on his territory, discovering that not only is she a rogue herself but that she also happens to be his mate...In that one fateful encounter everything changes. Lies will be uncovered. Truths revealed. Enemies exposed.When secrets and betrayals come, both Kaiden and Aislinn will be forced to choose; what are they willing to give up, and what they are prepared to fight for. Fate has destined them for each other, but sometimes even that just isn't enough.©The Lost One (2015)
8 131The Time I Became a War Golem
Oh hey! Welcome! It's a pleasure for me that you stumbled here and found this story. What? What exactly is this story? Oh you know, it's like those run-of-the-mill Isekai stories, the main character dies and then gets reborn to another world, fights all kinds of evils and stuff until they finally get a happily ever after. I am the Main Character in this story, your's truly Nigto Zed. In this story, you would follow my life (of course) in the World of Gaia, where I would be involved in fights of both Good and Evil and also the ones inbetweens. You would also read about some of the lives of the people that I meet here from their perspective so it's not all me. Oh well, enough with this. Again, I welcome you to the World of Gaia, wherein, Man and Demi-humans alike experience the two sides of Life, The White and Pure along with the Black and Stained. This is the story of both Suffering and Healing. Of both Successes and Failures. A world where Souls paves the way to Destiny, and where Relationships ensures Victory. This is the World of Gaia and this is also the Story of the Time I Became a War Golem. Enjoy!
8 159An Unbroken Love Story (Sam X Eteled) (Wii Deleted You)
You meet your friend Sam at the concert, and she falls in love! Who exactly with? Well, you probably guessed by the title, but it's Eteled!
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