《The Tree-Man and His Wife》OK, Opinions needed
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It seemed there are quite a few confusions going on at this point in the novel. BUT I would like to know what is wrong, so I am putting up a small poll to ask what I can do to fix this confusion. At this point, I had left a few things open on purpose, so certain parts are supposed to be confusing up to (hopefully) the next two chapters.
So the options for this poll consist of should I add a summary of the chapter every time, do I need to add who's POV I am doing in the title, do I need to clear things up in the same chapter instead of the next one, and do I need to add more descriptions about what is going on.
If none of these are what is confusing to you guys, it would be incredibly helpful for future chapters for you guys to comment below on this poll so I can make sure to make each chapter the best it can be!
^-^ Hope you guys enjoy it so far though! It's my new favorite to work on, and I am still doing the other two novels of mine, I'm just trying to catch this up a bit first before I update the others. Juggling school and stuff as a graduating senior isn't the easiest but imma do it for you all!
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Desolate Era
Fate had never been kind to Ji Ning. Wracked by illnesses and infirm his entire life on Earth, Ning knew early on that he would die as a teenager. What he didn’t know was that there really was such a thing as life after death, and that the universe was a far larger place than he thought. A lucky twist of fate (one of the few in Ning’s life) meant that Ning was reborn into a world of Immortals and monsters, of Ki Refiners and powerful Fiendgods, a world where Dynasties lasted for millions of years. A world which is both greater…and yet also smaller…than he ever could imagine. He would have the opportunity to join them, and in this life, Ning swore to himself, he would never let himself be weak again! The Era he was born into was a Desolate one, but Ning would make it his era.
8 230The Star and the Darkness
“When the darkness is at it’s darkest, a star shines brightest.” Humans look up at stars in admiration for the way they shine, but when a star falls to the earth do humans still worship it? What will happen when the brightest star is thrown from the sky into a place she knows nothing of? Praised like a goddess in a temple? Hunted like a prized deer? Devoured by the beasts of the wild? Or maybe something else? A creature that should have been left asleep walks the earth in search of that which was his, restless and unyeilding.
8 124Party Politics
Hans and his sister had logged into the first time-dilated game, Finkar, over two weeks ago, and the first thing they did was rush to the nearest dungeon. Now, upon finding the first player party since they had gotten trapped in there, they have their darkest fears confirmed: All of Finkar is imprisoned inside the game.Pao has seen horrors since the game started, and knows exactly who is to blame: Gabrial and his party. She now walks an uneasy path between helping the players of Finkar recover and avenging them. Which is more important, the past or the future?Hans and Pao must now adjust to their new lives within the game, and maybe change the course of the game’s future.
8 70Terrorizing Conqueror
Once, there was a boy filled with love for his family and his people. Alas, all of it was taken away from him on a certain day. Deprived of his blissful life, he was left powerless and brimming with inextinguishable flames of revenge. Hate and conviction being his only salvation, the boy treaded a path no one had ever before, just for the sake of grasping onto every bit of strength possible. The boy has now turned into a man, his overwhelming rage transforming into mind-boggling determination that threatens to consume everything in its wake. What will happen when such a being, who will stop at nothing, unleashes his fury onto the war-torn world? ************************************ Desclaimer: I do not own the image.
8 86The Bet | Pietro x Reader
An Avenger's High School AUPietro and Tony have made a bet. Who can keep a girlfriend longer? Pietro searches for a girl, and when he finally finds y/n, will he win the bet or fall in love?Reached Number 1 in:#pietro#pietromaximoffxreader #pietroxreader#tonystark
8 122Rishton Ka Manjha - MaAn
Anupama is devasted by the betrayal of Vanraj and Kavya. She picks up herself again for her kids and her family. However a storm comes which disrupts her life for good. It was the arrival of Anuj Kapadia. It is his unconditional love and support that makes her Anupama Joshi Kapadia.This is her journey and their blossoming love story. Witness the Saga unfold after 26 years.
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