As I said in the first chapter, there will be constant revisions based on how the story progresses. It would seem I made things harder on myself by making the character a little less broken EXP wise so that will change. I should also mention that sometimes things just won't make too much since and will be there for comedic effect like the goblins playing COD.

Revisions to be made:

1. EXP workings.

( I will give up on making it fair, if goblins give 25 exp all 3 will get 25 exp. Undead will still get the cut amount) Completed - Arielle's Blessing

2. Stat points changes.

(Only getting 80 Mana with 40 WIS was a fuck up on my part) Completed - 1 Wis = + 5 Mana

3. I will probably combine some chapters for the sake of making them longer, and cutting down on the amount of chapters themselves. Completed

4. Make revisions based on revisons. (Necromany will cost a bit more so that he still couldn't use it until level 2 at least, Exp given by goblins will be lessened)

5. General clean up, make it tidier and more fluid story wise.

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Things to come:

1. The first members of his harem / the four elite guards.

(Candi, Mandi, Brandi, Sandi) A.K.A (Blonde, Raven, Brunette, Redhead)

2. Church fanatics somehow find out Xel is a necromancer and attack.

(A bit further since he clears the mall and owns it by then, need a better reason than Crazy Church people, probably another gods chosen will instruct them... Yeah sounds good.)

3. Bandits attack

(Female Bandit Leader, medieval types that use swords) (Should probably make them non human I.E. Catkin or Dogkin)

4. Xel neotares the heroes waifu

(How is a secret, but related to the girls, Bandit Leader, and a Nun from the church)

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Those are just a few of the things already planned out, having said that, making them flow together is another problem.

Expected to be at least 30 chapters in by the time all 4 have come about. (Number may change due to revisions)

Another thing to note is I suck at expressing the fight scenes in vivid detail. I will probably have trouble with sex scenes in the future as well. Would it help if I make it much more detail oriented instead of straight and to the point?

For the next few chapters Xel will mainly increase his power, learn one of the more useful skills he will get, and obtain his second minion. Though the minion may come first depending on necessity. After that is the girls, dungeon clearing, and so forth. Look forward to it!

Finally, what are some things you'd like to see? The chapters will probably get longer starting now since if I keep them as they are I will have 25 chapters by the time he clears the dungeon, and thats just no fun for anyone.