《Righteous Bestowal: Emperor of All》3.Astoria (Edited)
Advertisement
Astoria planet, a planet five times the size of earth conformed seventy percent of water, thirty percent earth, in where five percent at the top and bottom of the continents are made of icy lands, the coldest parts of the planet, the closest you are too both sides the colder will be, where many creatures of the cold element live, the planet has three continents named after the three sons of the goddess.
This planet was once governed by the goddess of creation Astoria, one of the most powerful gods to ever exist, a beautiful planet in comparison to others with hundreds of times more natural energy, this was the creation of her life, yet this only provoked the jealousy and greed of other gods of creation, because of how powerful she was, they attacked her when she was most vulnerable, injuring her and forcing her to retreat into her realm, these other gods took control of the planet, breaking havoc within it, forcing it races into submission, humans, beasts(Dragons and any mythical creatures), and demons (fairies, elves, actual demons and others), looking at these, the injured goddess, prepared a counterattack, she gave birth to three sons, that had relation with the three dominant races, their name as it follow:
IGIS THE GOD OF HUMANS
EZALL THE GOD OF BEASTS
VAILIFERA THE GOD OF DEMONS
These three gods with the power bestowed by their mother, only second to her, fought against the other gods, but even with all their power, they found hard to resist the might of many of them, so they ideated a plan, after talking their mother of it, she accepted their proposal. It was to give mortals the power to fight the gods, that was mana, using the newly acquired power, they reached toward they mortal races on the planet and gave them the ability to battle, with their help the greatest wars of all started, the war for the planet, Igis leaded the humans, Ezall the beasts, and Vailifera the demons, even with all their forces they were barely able to compete against the other gods forces coming from other dimensions, so in the end the goddess Astoria sacrificed herself in order to put a barrier around the world, no god born from another plane, could go in or out, with this the three sons and their armies clashed against the ones that could not escape, annihilating them, but they could not get rid of all their followers, after most of them were destroyed these went into hiding, waiting in silence, looking for a chance to make their comeback.
Advertisement
At the end of the war, the damage was so big the earth broke into three pieces, what is today known as the three continents, each of the goddess sons took place into one, with their respective races following them, after the follow of the Great War, the reconstruction process was slow, after all the damage sustained was too enormous, with the pass of the time some races started to mix giving birth to what today is known as the demon beasts and demi humans these caused wars, in the past discrimination was something seen, pureblooded races didn’t want to accept mixed races, they were too proud, they tough mixed races as dirty blood, but these dirty bloods showed great power, which soon started to be valued highly by other powerful factions, with the pass of the time mixed races started to be slowly accepted, not only that but most of these ascenders were none but these mixed races, in fact the first of the ascenders was none but a demon beast, when it happened the three gods didn’t show any hostility, which changed the opinion of the masses, today some of the most powerful kingdoms in the continent have mixed races retainers, after all the more power you show, the more you’ll be accepted, yet not all of them think like that some extremist factions still exist.
“Now any questions kids?”(Old male voice)
An old man voice could be heard in the middle of the night, by a big campfire, surrounding the campfire were many kids of different ages, you could even see quite few adults around.
This was village located in Stonewood valley, the old man, Domor of Stonewood, was an elf and the chief of this village. Stonewood was the name of the village and the valley, this valley had four mountains surrounding them and a forest inside it, the village was settled in a mountain halfway to the middle, around the mountain they were settled three mountains were located, two by its sides and one at its front, the location where they settled helped them, they were not too far from the forest where they hunt and train, and close to a small city right behind them outside the valley , where sold meat of beasts they hunt on the forest, bought supplies and worked as mercenaries, these was their choice of living, after all they exceled at mercenary jobs.
Advertisement
The village was composed of many different races, from elves to demi humans, there were 200 warriors, 50 elites, 50 mages, 20 healers and 400 non-combat personnel, this includes kids, housewife’s and some elders , between them and animals, the village has less than a thousand people.
“Here Chief!! Here!! ME!! ME!!” Many kids called.
“Ok, ok don’t fight” (Gramps)
“Tell me Sherie, What do you want to know?” The gramps said.
“Grampa Domor, What did you mean with ascended?” A little girl with white hair and green eyes asked, the little girl looked like six years old, had two cute little wolf ears on top of her head, if you paid attention to her back you would see a little tail moving around restlessly, this was Sherie of Stonewood granddaughter of Domor the village chief.
“Well child, in the past when the goddess Astoria gave us power, she also gave us the chance to surpass our limits, using the mana in the atmosphere, we could train our mana channels (mage) or our mana veins (warrior) in order to make use of this power, the more mana can flow through them, the biggest are the chances to form a core, after the core is formed, the person awakens in to a higher being, in case of humans they become High humans, after that you got to cleanse the core impurities, raising its power, usually the brighter it shines, the more power it has, at this point mage or warriors train their affinities in order to cleanse the core, after you reach white core formation, its says you must form a mana seed and plant it your core, after breaking into this realm you will evolve once more, I don’t know much about this realm, but is it said once you grow the seed you connect to the heavens, ascending where the three Primordials wait for you to join them in the battle.”
“Then, are they still fighting?” (Sherie)
“Hohoho, no one knows, my child.” (Gramps Domor)
“Hey Chief, then who was the first ascender?” (Random kid on the background no one cares about)
“Ohh, listen well, HE WAS KNOWN AS THE HEAVENLY DE…”
“Gramps look back!!” (Sheria)
Hearing her voice Domor noticed that all of the kids were not paying attention at all, in fact they were all looking behind him, turning to look, he was shocked, he saw in the sky, many golden lights falling down to the earth, like comets, rushing down at an incredible speed, there were quite a few of them, 8 in total 7 of them were gold colored and were burning because of the fall yet only one was different, it was not burning, yet it shined with a silver ethereal glow, pleasing to the eye, at difference to the rest this one crashed down into the furthest mountain from them, the one at their front known as Sunrise mountain.
The Chief shock only lasted a few seconds, before issuing an order, toward the rest of adults were looking at this spectacle dazed.
"QUICK! CALL TIBARN!!”
“We need to confirm, what that was.”
“Gramps is everything going to be okay? Will you send Dad away?” little Sherie asked scared by the situation, at difference from the rest of the kids, she was the village chief granddaughter; she had a small idea of what could this mean.
“It’s ok little Sherie, you dad is just going to check the situation, he is going to be fine, after all he is the strongest warrior in our village” Domor said patting her head with reassuring smile on his face, sending his own son to check sure has some dangers, but he must do it before others do, after all beast are not the only dangers that exist on the valley, many other villages are even more dangerous.
Hey guys 3 chapter is done editing, please tell me if you find it more confortable.
Advertisement
- In Serial27 Chapters
Milton
A Cyberpunk Coming of Age Tale The Apocalypse is ugly. The only lights that work are battery powered or neon. Scroungers kill your neighbors and take control of their bodies. Gang wars run rampant in the perpetual night, as usual, except now, most members have magical spells to defend their turf. Life certainly changed once the Rainbow Letters came. For Milton, things changed for the better. The world became familiar. He could find loot, learn skills, and equip weapons and armor. It was all much easier to understand than the perils of pre-Apocalypse life with its grocery shopping and going outside. Then he discovers Ragnarok, Orchestrator of the Rainbow Letters and all of Milton’s problems. The race to figure out why is on. If Milton is to survive long enough to find answers, he must first be strong enough to confront his worst enemy: himself. * This is work in progress and NOT professionally edited. * ** This story is humorous in the begining, but gets very dark around the turning point. Reader discretion is advised.**
8 215 - In Serial19 Chapters
The Descendants
"You're going to die screaming..." A wraith crawled on the ground. Katie smirked before kneeling down and slashing him across the throat. "You know what? I would really like that." Follow the masochist Katie as she slashes and dashes her way through the supernatural world. As of the moment, the update rate will be one chapter every three to four days, roughly. I am proud to announce all the rights of this fiction is completely mine. and if you enjoy this story, or just want to give me money, go to my paetron page in the donation tab and support me by either following me or becoming my patron. Also thanks to Lokumi, Tmq5521, and Imperator of Benera for doing beta-reading for this story.
8 163 - In Serial10 Chapters
POSSESSED
This story is told from a third person point of veiw of the character Kai Sherwood, a young boy who lost his parents at a young age due to a house fire. He and his brother Kent fled to london after the incident and atempted a quiet life that was made impossible by the awakening of mysterious powers in Kai and the anti-power laws placed in the UK. Follow the story of Kai and his friends as they struggle to survive in a world of hatred.
8 156 - In Serial85 Chapters
A Draconic Odyssey
Eight years have passed since war has ravaged the lands of Lokahn. The Justitian Empire, driven by zealotry and righteousness, has destroyed the old Kingdom and its ancient religion of Draconism. All remnants of the old ways have been driven out into the wilderness, forgotten by all of civilized Lokahn, as the land is molded into a fine realm of Justitia. Victor Miller, a farm boy from the quiet village of Riverside, decides to leave behind his quiet rural life for opportunity in the world beyond. Unbeknownst to him, what would begin as a simple journey for a better life would end up with him getting caught in a conflict. A conflict far bigger than himself... This story is only available on the following webstites : RoyalRoad deviantArt Any other websites you see this story on are the result of plagiarism.
8 210 - In Serial14 Chapters
The Nephlim Trilogy: Qleehl
It starts when someone takes a life that was never theirs to take.It ends when every shard drowns and nothing remains of what they once knew. Thirteen years ago there was a massacre; a witch hunt of the worst kind with the ashes of innocents falling from the sky. Now, the world is made up of fragile glass, the cracks sharp and jagged. Hatred boils the crimson sea beneath the surface. All it takes is one wrong move- A plan to change the world.A bloody smile with an unspoken apology.A girl with bleeding hair in the monster filled mountains.A change in destiny. -for it to shatter. This is the story about the second war between nephlims and humans.This is the story of how everything ends. -- (21JUN2020 story will be active for another week, I unfortunately do not have a backlog so I can't extend my chapter updates until another port call. I do not know when the next port call will be so I will be on another Hiatus for an undetermined amount of time. Scribblehub is not blocked on my work computer so I will be able to update my story on that website. It can be found here.) This story is a draft, I'll be doing my best to update monthly; work might get in the way of that so some update might be delayed an extra week or so. There will be roughly 31 chapters in total (I have the entire plot written down for the first book and the overall plot written down for the entire series.). (Summary is also a WIP and will change later to better fit the story. Any advice on how to write a summary for multiple POV's would be amazing)
8 132 - In Serial21 Chapters
Madness with a touch of sanity
A story from the point of view of madman, although they seem perfectly sane, the world will burn around them and only they will remain, and maybe some others too. This is one of my first published stories, hate it if you want, I probably will, but any advice will always be appreciated, if I can improve my writing I will be happy. Cover is temporary, royalty-free image, until I either create or commision someone to create a new one
8 195

