《Eternity's Wake》Interlude 4
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John exited the game for the first time in a day. He cleaned his VR pod performing the necessary maintenance before going to grab a large meal. After eating his daily calories in one sitting he got on the phone with Ed.
“Hi Edward, things are getting exciting now, aren’t they?”
“Yes. But there is something we need to talk about.”
“What’s that?”
“Your leadership style is a bit draconian. You need to give people more room to breathe and be their own person.”
“I was just taking charge to level us up.”
“Just because you think you know best doesn’t mean people will appreciate being ordered around,” Edward continued.
I reluctantly admitted he was right. I’d forgotten what I’d learnt in middle management and had instead pushed things aggressively. It was time to take a softer touch and let my guild mates bloom. “You’re right Edward. I’ll change things. Thanks for letting me know.”
“I’d also like the chance to play more of a role in the management of the guild.”
“What would you like to do?”
“I want to manage the 2nd team of the guild.”
“I need you on the first team. That won’t work. I can make you a vice-guild leader if you want to take on administering the guild warehouse,” John offered.
“Sigh. I was hoping to avoid that it doesn’t really suit me. It’s a lot of tedium,” Edward countered.
“I won’t make it a permanent thing then. If we get to a point where you’re no longer a first team member I’d be happy to have you lead the second team. Until then, would you be willing to run the guild warehouse for me?” John said.
“I suppose I can do it. But I’m going to automate most of it,” Edward finally relented.
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“In that case, congratulations on your promotion to Vice-Guild Leader my friend,” John said.
“Thanks, I hope it’s worth it,” Edward said.
“Don’t worry. I’ll be starting salaries for key contributors soon. It will be,” John said.
After a bit of small talk, the two friends seemed happier. John finally said goodbye and hung up. He was once again worried about money; how was he going to pay his team?
John hoped the stores would be enough. He’d have to tour the Kingdom buying property and setting them up. He’d need to hire more crafters for his Merchant Guild. There was much to do. He supposed it wasn’t all bad, touring the realm would let him find demon hatcheries and keep that stupid curse from triggering.
John reached his gym and started to work out as he continued to think. He laid down on his weight bench and started to bench press. I have enough gold for shops in a few places and I’ll have more when I collect the revenues from the merchant guild. I don’t have to pay the crafters their share until the end of the month, so I’ll borrow against that to get everything set up. I wonder if it is enough for two properties in every city, it would be great to have some additional guild houses. That’s probably a pipe dream. I’ll pick two new cities for guild houses, and the rest of the cities I visit will just get a shop. John completed his workout.
He headed back into the game and checked on the daily AI patch. In addition to all the unrevealed improvements to the AI itself and some hidden content that gets added every day, the AI had made some rather important balance changes. The biggest one was:
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Fighting higher levelled enemies will result in the XP for fighting them being reduced by 50% per level higher than you they are.
This was a balance nerf that would greatly reduce John’s levelling speed. He’d still get a doubling of XP for most levels but compared to 4x that was a massive slowdown.
John also checked on the level rankings. His guild dominated the Verdure Kingdom as well as the global rankings. But John wasn’t first. Neither was a guild member. Beowulf was level 24. Fortunately, he was still not a member of a guild and didn’t appear to be helping anyone else level.
John wished the rankings were more expansive. But the only one being shown was player rankings by level. No merchant rankings, No guild rankings, No item rankings. Perhaps the last one was best, if people knew Corwin had a full set of epic gear there would be outrage.
The time for the patch ticked down as Corwin reviewed the information. Finally, it was time.
3….2…1… GAME START
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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