《Creator of Worlds》Granting Divinty, Problem?
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Waking up from my 500 year nap, I decided to observe the planet and the moons.
Status reports:
Jugganautilus- The Water Moon, with next to no land above the water, it is a perfect sphere with the exception of the tidbits of land that juts out from the water surface, the core is cradled with ravines and abysses,
A ring of water extends around the planet, The ring of water is mostly icy cold water as it is not in the atmosphere and somewhat resides in space.
Meteors that have collided with the ring of water show bacteria that are accustomed to the cold temperatures.
Sticky Eel has bonded and fused with Weed snakes and Water Slimes to create a hydra-type creature.
Algae bits form together to make a soft ball, it his called a Fern Bush. Underwater trees have formed with a combination of Sticky Weed and Algae bits. Water Nymphs have taken a liking toward the Humans who have started to pop up. Creating a floating metropolis.
The four-armed monkeys grow fins and webbing and use it to glide through the water occasionally jumping out to grab unsuspecting humans. Their fur has become scaly and water resistant. They are now four-armed Sahuagin.
They have created an underwater civilization with stone tools which they carved out using bones. They love to feast on humans.
One of the volcanoes on Nekindoar has erupted when Jugganautilus was near, resulting in 1/4 of the ring to be obsidian/rock, the water around it is boiling hot.
Animals of Jugganautilus: Water Nymphs, Humans (Lesser), Four-armed Sahuagin, 2 headed hydra. Water Slime, Algae Slime, Sticky Eel, Water Snake, Frozen Aqua Snake, Ice Touch Eel, Octopus (Lesser)
Plants of Jugganautilus: Aquatic Tree, Sticky Weed, Earth Eating Moss, Fern Bush, Grasper Weed, Flesh Eating Moss.
Nekindoar: The Fire Moon, The planet surface is a mix and mash of Volcanoes, Mountains, Valleys, Seas and Oceans of Lava, and skeleton forests.
With the introduction of humans, Charcoal treants stay far away from them, fearing that they will use them for building materials.
Humans have properly befriended Fire Slimes and use them for the basis of cooking and heating. Small villages spread out across the continent.
A general mistrust to the humans are formed, Fire Nymphs stay elusive to their advances, Lava Golems and Fire Constructs do not fight on land anymore for fear of attracting attention, they stay almost exclusively in volcanoes and deep under lava.
Humans claim the Obsidian Pillars , using it to protect themselves from the raging blistering winds. Fire Nymphs who claimed it as their home were driven out, and a war is going on to reclaim it.
Humans have forged tools out of obsidian and wear bark armor, they are slightly heat resistant and black skinned due to exposure to extreme heat at all time.
Four-armed Monkeys grew a solar fin on their arms and use it to fly from place to place. They became known as Solar Sailers, for their bright orange and red fur. They eat fruits from Luminous Trees.
Lizard creatures are born from Aether and bathe freely in lava, they have the ability to breath fire.
Creatures of Nekindoar: Fire Nymphs, Solar Sailors, Humans, Lava Constructs, Lava Golem, Lava Slimes, Charcoal Treants, Fire Slimes, Drakemen, Lizardmen.
Plants of Nekindoar: Ash Weed, Luminous Tree, Earth Eating Moss, Fire Herbs, Skeleton Trees, Lava Drinking Gourd,
Aeriola- the Wind Moon, The surface is smooth and huge dunes of sand are everywhere. Some of the sand is so compact it forms walls of sandstone, and canyons.
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Four armed Monkeys move underground, growing claws to dig through the rough sand. they start to live underground rarely going up, they are Iron-claw Moles
A variant to them, lives above ground, sailing on the howling winds and snatches anything they see, they are Airola Lemurs.
Humans have spawned in and outside of the Wind Wall, Those within are taught wind magic by the wind nymphs that reside there. They eventually create a floating temple and civilizaton to study wind magic.
Humans outside of the Wind Wall grows tougher skin as they endure the blasts of earth that pelt their skin. They grew special membranes over their eye that enabled hem to see in the blasting winds.
They armor themselves with tools from slain Armored Ants and Ironwood Willows and Armored Weeds. They live in traveling caravans to find food.
Nekindoar was nearby and turned part of the sand into glass, Unarmored creatures have a chance of being cut by flying glass. Death is quite common this way.
Armored ants evolved into a more sophisticated insect, branching into three species.
Armored Spiders, Armored Scorpions and Armored Mantis. They three create Major hives where the queen lives, and minor hives/outposts where minor queens and their subjects live. There is a constant war for territory, and humans are normally caught in the middle of it.
Animals of Aeriola: Armored Mantis (Queen), Armored Scorpion (Queen), Armored Spider (Queen), Armored Ant (Queen), Durable Sand Nomads, Iron-Claw Moles Wind Nymphs, Sand Spirits, Airola Lemurs, Wind Disciple, Aerolite Garudas, Cloud Shifters
Plants of Aeriola: Ironwood Willow, Armored Weeds, Iron Root Mangrove, Shard Sequoia, Armored Cactus, Wandering Drought Fern,
Terra-Collant- the Earth Moon, the surface is semi-sticky and swamplike, and many caverns of darkness, canyons, valleys, and abysses have formed.
Torchlight Blobs have met with wax, which was fat that was heated, boiled and strained by the blazing temperatures of the fire.
They became Candle Wisps, A moss-coated animal roams around, they fear the gauze mushrooms and eat them to prevent them from animating, they are Moss Bunnies.
A more advance version of the Moss Bunny is the Moss Bunuman, (Rabbit girls and guys) with thick, green and mossy pelts. They have grown accustom to using the weapons that they take from slain mushroom men.
Gelatin Blobs hardened their skin when the fire of Nekindoar struck, they became move obelisks aka Guardian Obelisk
They act as giant shields for the Sticky Slimes, who have grown a humanoid shape as they take form of what they eat (Mushroom Men and Humans combined)
Golems and Guardian Obelisks work together to create a civilization composed of Humans, Moss Bunumans, Humanoid Slimes, Dryads, and Sprites.
A sprite evolved into an angelic species, that ignored the large gravity of Terra-Collant.
Fallen Angels are born for those of the angelic species who can't break through the gravity and become taken over by Nightmare shadows.
A demon is born when Nightmare shadows have accumulated enough mindless shadows.
Four-armed monkeys lay low on the ground. as they can't rise due to gravity. since they are now Ground Sloths,
Humans are small due to gravity, they work with metals found in the ground and are a species of dwarfs.
A city is born: Ankleadoro: the capitol of Terra-Collant.
Species of Terra-collant: Angels, Fallen Angels, Demons, Ash Dryads, Mushroom Men, Humanoid Slimes, Ember Sprites, Sprites, Golems, Guardian Obelisks, Candle Wisps, Withered Mushroom Men, Mindless Shadows, Nightmare Shadow. Ground Sloths, Moss Bunuman.
Plants of Terra-Collant: Wax Weed, Balance Bonsai, Judgement Scale Bonsai, Tormenting Bonsai, Venomous Mushrooms, Gauze Mushrooms,
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Planet of Aetheron: The main planet which is surrounded by 5 moons. It hosts a variety of ecosystems and made up of 5 continents within 4 oceans.
Telrios Sentries watch constantly for any danger that may pose them harm. Humans have somehow domesticated them along with Armored Telrios.
Many cultures of humans have popped up, Two kingdoms have appeared, Ezelburg, and Askerfall.
Ezelburg is a kingdom of Experimentation, they always try out new things, for better or for worst. A few worthy humans have created a way to cultivate Aether like the Treants and found new powers in them, (Random Powers for everyone)
An adventurer's guild was created to capture and harvest monsters for testing materials.
They worship a king who claims to hear the voice of god (He doesn't I have never spoken to him)
As for Askerfall, they are a country who believes the idea of Survival of the Fittest, it is required to be an adventurer there, and every year they have to bring in a set amount of currency every year. Oppression is common and a secret resistance is in the beginning phases.
Four Armed Monkeys created a community of their own and they spend their time taming dangerous beasts.
Large frog creatures roam the land, eating any plant or animals they see when hungry.
A two legged snake creature wanders around, their scales have the colors of the rainbow and they seemed to be able to cast illusions.
Wideback crocodiles have became more humanlike- waking on two legs, and using tools. Some of them became more beast-like as they grew bigger, with tougher scales, and a fiercer attacking prowess.
Mantachnids have created a mantis species and Spider species, as they separated. A variant where they stayed together
made them into a type of venomous insect, (Chryssalid from Xcom, but instead of infection they have deadly poison)
Centipedes and Scorpions are in this world due to the evolution of the Armored Ants and Mantises with wings have become a wasp species.
Hardwood treants stay in seclusion for the mistrust of humans who cut down their friends.
Creatures of Aethereon: Hardwood Treants, Veromites, Devilish Void Frog, Telrios (Armored, Sentry) Armored Ant (Queen), Berserk Mantis, Arclight Wasp, Adamantium Fortress Spider, Armored Centipede, Armored Scorpion, Nymphs (Water,Wind) Water Slime, Mantachnids, Toxic Mantachnid, Weed Snakes, Sticky Eels, Weed Snakes, Crocmen, Ancient Croc, Wideback Crocodile, Four-armed Monkeys, humans, Vesperate Vipers.
Plants of Aethereon: Sticky Weed, Earth Eating moss, Carnivorous Acid Weed, hardwood Tree, Softwood Tree, Iron Bramble Bush, Ancient Bamboo, Grasper Fern, Potbelly Gourd,
Sof- The fifth moon where survival of the fittest is everything. The planet is plagued with poison from the 4 Beasts of Calamity, many species reside in the sanctuary where they hone their skills to one day fight these beasts. They prey to a god in hope of salvation.
A species of octopus has evolved to withstand the poison of the Poison Leviathon, and currently lives on the beast, draining its vitality.
King Glutton fights Dracio for territory, while Kylia sits on her sky throne, awaiting any mortals to smite.
the introduction of Humans and Four-armed Monkeys brings all the species together to fight these beasts.
Councils with a representative for each species are born, Search parties for potential locations of the next Sanctuary is progressing with minimal casualties.
The ruins of cities built within the last 500 years are shown, to be scattered in old Sanctuary locations. Deadly plague and poison has reanimated some creatures and corrupting others to work as minions for the Beasts of Calamity.
Some species change due to the hardships:
Dryad has a variant called Thorny Vine Queen.
Water Nymphs have become corrupted, becoming one of two variants (Sirens, and Acid Nymph)
Nightmare Shadows have joined the Beasts of Calamity, they become an advanced version of a demon, a few become stronger than the average demon becoming Demon Generals.
Charcoal Treants catch fire, becoming Blazing Constructs.
more varieties.
I looked over each of the information and then decided.
Time to grant some divinity. I smiled at the thought, but who should I give the honor.
I drew up all the species on the World Builder and had it choose 4 randomly.
Fire nymph, Aerolite Garuda, 2 head hydra, Human.
I looked at my points (3,732,401 Divine Points)
I decided to give each of them 10,000 Divine points.
The following people have been given divinity and became a god:
Renny Emburn: Fire Nymph, has become the godess of Fire, Parties, and Fertility
Akshakan: Aerolite Garuda, has become the god of the Void, Wind, and Freedom.
Baba- 2-Headed Hydra, has become the god of Earth/Water, Death/Life, and Servitude.
Hannah Cortesa, Human, has become the goddess of the Hunt, Harvest, and Mines.
These 4 gods are allowed worshipers, but 3/4th of any divine points they receive will go to their creator.
The 4 gods are allowed to meet their creator at any time, as long as they take a suitable form.
Immediately celebration and panic spread throughout the cities of Sof. many beings started to worship the four gods hoping they are the salvation that they were hoping for. While some said it was a hoax and became anti-believers.
Immediately I got four notifications
The God/Goddess: Renny, Akshakan, Baba, and Cortesa would like to meet you, what is the suitible form for them to take?
I pondered for a bit before smiling,
Sitting in front of the four gods, I smiled at them,
They were complaining about their forms, because I have decided to turn them into.........
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Goldfishes.
"What is this form, why am I compressed in such a small body?" Baba complained.
"This isn't exactly freedom is it" Akshakan said.
"A new form, Why is it water based, I HATE IT" Renny shreiked.
"Something new huh" Cortesa replied bored.
"Hello I am your great creator, you will be watching over the planets for me while I sleep, make sure no one causes any, BIG trouble now, bye" I said and flung myself to the bed, despite everyone shouting their questions.
"500 years from now" I said and closed my eyes.
I want to thank you all for giving praise for my story, I also like the criticism and suggestions.
For a few chapters now, I felt like this story was getting worse and worse, and I was slapping the few readers I have in the face with how bad it was.
But you all tell me its good, and thank me for the chapter and It makes me so happy, that I'm crying as I type this message (Not really, its just tears in my eyes)
Despite Julie being a douche she managed to think up some good things, like the interacting moons and some interesting species (Ow Julie, I thought you were sleeping)
Anyway, I want to thank you all for following this story. If you have a suggestion or a nasty comment, then leave it below, I will gladly take it.
From the author- Sederance
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