《A Technomaniac in Another World (Prototype)》♦ Hi, Let’s Talk ♦
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Yay! Hello. Why I'm so excited? It's bad news. Very bad news.
Anyway. Hi guys and sorry to give you bad news. As is right now, I'm doing a small pause in the chapters release. Simply put, I'm gonna edit every chapter that is currently available. Reason?
"Because they lack a bit of depth and Detail."
No, I won't be stopping in writing the new ones. Is just that, after I took a look on my other novel, I noticed this one wasn't very different. Yes, I know that that's completely normal, after all, I'm not a pro writer, just an amateur. But the novel lacks a bit of detail that it would be nice to see.
I'm currently reading the Overlord novel, and man! How much detail it has! It's a lot! The writer makes you dive into the novel and makes you be there facing and seeing what it's written. And that's what a novel does. Mine on the other hand, I don't think it has that same aspect.
"But you're comparing yourself to someone who has a entire team to help him out. That is a mistake you know?"
"Oh, don't worry. I'm not exactly comparing myself. I'm just saying."
Anyway, another reason as to why I'm doing this, was after some critic on RR. It was a constructive criticism, which is the right criticism, and that made me think more on the chapters I published.
"So, why are you so happy?"
"Because the discord Server!"
Yep! I'm launching the Discord Server together with this announcement. Actually, it was already made, but I wanted to publish after the first Arc, but as it is right now, that won't do. I need help.
"I gotta need some help!"
I'm without Ideas to do the story. As it is right now, the chapter which was to be launched Sunday, was slow paced, and with the Status of the MC. Tell you the truth, I should have shown to you guys before. Because I'm lost on it. I'd made it sound he got lots of skills and levels, which is wrong, since he has the Abnormal Status condition.
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"But it didn't changed him a lot, did it?"
It didn't. In fact, it didn't change anything! But it is strange for me. When I take a look, I just want to stop, toss the novel away, and let you guys on the dark. But that's not cool. That's bad. I did this on the past, and lefts a bad taste in the mouth.
But anyway, Here's the Discord Server. Come there to talk to me, and so help me out please! https://discord.gg/wVtu6DYc
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