《Ah, here we go again!》Chapter 6
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Somewhere in the deep forest. "khuk khuk khuk khuk" a vibrating noise generated by continusly rubbing two riggid objects could be heard. "Clack!" the sound of an object cracked and breaking in half. "God fucking damn it!, you piece of shit!, you fucking useless piece of shit!" An angry and agonizing cry was heard as the person proceeds to get another piece of wood and grind them like before. " Clack!".
"I'm done, so fucking done!, why is making fire so hard!, fuck this shit I'm out!" Lokie stood up, picked the large stones he had placed aside, and started walking in a straight direction. "Since i can't make a fucking fire then lets look for water". Lokie walked around the forest looking for any sources of water he could find; from time to time he would stop to observe plants that had berry like fruits to see if any signs of animals were feeding on it.
"sheshshes" shaking sound was heard, and Lokie immediately docked down, gripping the stones hard, staring at the shaking bush, preparing for a possible fight. "Mhm! mhm!, come!" As Lokie starred cautiusly at the bush, a dark hairy rodent like animal came out, although I think its a rodent, it's size, were around adult cats back on Earth."oH! crap, that's a huge ass ratatouille. "A staring standoff began. Lokie couldn't help but observe it more thoroughly 'Sharp teeths on both upper and lower jaws, saliva dripping on it's teeth, not good, I see two disgusting sharp tipped tails with some spots that are hairy, what caught my attention were the four horizontal eyes. shit's creepy as fuck. Although most rodents are known to run away or escape when they see larger creatures, they are still carnivores.
"squeek! squeek! squeek!(meet your maker!)" As the rodent hysterically started making aggressive squeels and slowly circled Lokie around. It suddenly sprinted and rushed towards Lokie as it seemed like it could smell as if he was a coward or a wuss.
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"Oh shit!, shit!" Lokie frantically tried throwing the large rock he was gripping from his hand *WHOOSH* the large rock flew above the rodent, completely missing, and landing towards the bushes, the sudden large projectile throw halted the rodent's movement. " squeeeeek! squeeeeek! (To think he would blocked my only path of retreat, formidable apponint indeed!). Lokie tried to kick the rodent away hoping to scare or intimidate it more but all he did was aggravating the roddent to attack and scartch on his legs.
Small green pieces of flesh were ripped off from his legs. "Argghh! fuck that hurts, it stings!, screw you ratatouille!" Using the last large rock, and used it as a hammer trying to smash the rodent with it to pulp but the rodent won't let him hope, for, the rodent was too agile for him to even scratch it; he tried to smack the rodent with the large rock he was gripping and the rock finally showed signs of crumbling, it gave the rodent a chance to leap and landed on his shoulder, gripping, biting and ripping a small amount of flesh even the rodent's two pairs of tail pierced some parts of his shoulder, somewhere close to his neck.
Felt pained and terrified, Lokie frantically tried to remove the rodent, after a few struggles and some flesh ript off, the he was finally separated from the rodent. "Holy fuck that hurts, arrghh I'm bleeding, no I got to get out of here!" Having scared all of his life, decided to turn around and run, but the rodent wouldn't let its prey escape just like that, not after it tasted blood, like a rabid dog, the rodent gave chase and surprisingly was catching up to him "Holy Fuck! he's fast as fuck boi!".
Lokie kept on running, but the rodent was gaining up on him, and, left with no other choice, chose to confront the rodent in a fight to the death. Lokie picked up the large tall tree branch he had just found and waved it around "Ha! where's your god now!, die! you little shit!" As Lokie frantically waving the tree branch trying as hard as he could to hit the rodent but unfortunately for him, the rodent was just really too agile, in fact it's even faster and more aggressive, but lokie didn't stop and instead kept waving and smashing the tree branch to the ground, signs of damage slowly starting to appear from the tree branch, suddenly the rodent jumped and used the tree branch as bridge and rushed towards Lokie, in panic Lokie let go of the tree branch and used his hands to cover his face, out of instinct. As the rodent does a powerful thrust leap towards his face, Lokie's yellow eyes suddenly glow, a growling sound from his mouth and his wavering eyebrows begin to form a fierce form combined with his glowing eyes forming a violent aura of beast.
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"Squek!(Nani)" Surprised by the sudden violent action of Lokie, the rodent made out a panicked squeal!, a large palm covered the rodden's view, as the large hand held and gripped the rodden's face. Feeling the life-threatening danger from the grip, the rodent tried everything, even using his pair of tails to pierce into the arm, hoping it would let go; poking holes were apparent and dark blood slowly slips out on them. an imaginable urge of violence fueled by pain was felt by lokie and subocnsiously applied a full force on his grip. " CRACK!" A loud breaking sound was heard. The commotion suddenly turned quiet.
A few minutes passed and Lokie's glowing eyes dyed down, his gripping eyebrows relaxed, and his haggard breathing returned to normal. "What the actual fuck just happened?, Did I just do that. Holy shit that was some super saiyan shit or something. ho ho ho" Lokie was rejoicing like a kid who finaly did a kamehameha, but his joy didn't last long " huh?!" Lokie stared at his bloody right hand and saw pieces of skulls and brain matter." A blurred vision, sweating, and a floating feeling was felt by Lokie" blughh! disgusting, blughh!, Argghhh! My body is aching, blughh!, like a fat man suddenly decided to do 40 push-ups, my body, my muscles and bones hurt, blughh!" Disgusted by the scene, Lokie continued to vomit acid stomach; he hurriedly wiped the disgusting pieces off the leaves. "ohh this is so disgusting ^sniff! sniff^, blughh!".
And some time had passed again after the drama. Lokie felt tingling pain in his legs, arms and shoulders. Especially the place he was scratched and pierced by the tail; he just noticed the bite marks from his palm, as seconds passed by Lokie started to feel inflamed pain on his wounds, worried, Lokie tried to clean it but having no water, has no other choice but to use his saliva and ripped a piece of his cloth to wipe clean his wounds. Feeling re-assured and left with nothing to do, decided to pick up the rodent, although he felt nauseous when looking at it, nothing a large leaf couldn't solve.
"Why am I doing this?, why am I struggling?" Lokie walked further into the forest while mumbing these words.
Lokie looked for a safe place to rest, and recuperate for a bit placing the rodent's corpse on the side, and as he sat down, began to contemplate what had just happened. After a few minutes, Lokie was seen sitting behind the large tree panting and breathing heavily in pain; after the adrenaline rush was off, intense pain and exhaustion finally came down on him, unable to bear the pain and exhaustion Lokie's mind went black.
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