《Broken System》Near Death And New Skills
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It has been a week since Jack got the System and it is now Saturday again.'Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:12(5915 xp to lvl up)
-Health:190/190(0.16 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 125/125(0.16 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:26
-Speed:24
-Dexterity:24
-Vitality:20
-Endurance:16
-Wisdom:20
-Intelligence:24
-Charm:10
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"11'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery, Wind Magic, Lightning Magic,Wind Cutter,Wind Arrow,Lightning Spear,Lightning Maelstorm,Healing Magic,Heal,High Heal,Earth Magic,Water Magic,Ice Magic,Inventory,Teleportation Magic,WaterBall,Water Wall,Fire Spear,Fire Wall,Water Arrow,Earth Wall,Earth Spikes,Earth Arrow,Lightning Arrow,Ice Wall,Ice Path,Ice Blizzard,Cure Disease,Martial Arts(Advanced),Hand To Hand,Spear Mastery,Gun Mastery
-Stat Points:0
-Credits:825
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
Jack has leveled up to 12 and a few of his stats are over 20 now, He also has nearly every magic currently available and most of the other skills he can buy right now. Jack is currently in the Dungeon staring at a giant ass door.'This is one giant ass door, I guess this is where the first boss is? This is the 5th floor so I guess there is a boss every 5 floors. Well let's try it out, I have lots of magic and i have 2 sword now so I should be fine.'Jack opens the door and heads inside the boss room. What he sees is a giant zombie with armor and a sword, Jack looks at it's health and he sees that it has 2500 Hp!
"Fireball!""Lightning Spear!""Liightning Arrow!" Jack shoots out a fireball,Lightning Spear and a Lightning Arrow but it only takes 100 health away from the total taking it to 2400. In exchange Jack used up 40 mana to do that.The giant zombie roars and swings his sword at Jack, Who barely manages to dodge and it leaves a massive hole where it landed. Jack gets a scare and jumps back more and fires more magic."Earth Spikes!""Earth Arrow!""Fire Spear!" Jack hits the giant with stronger magic and takes off 250 health leaving the giant zombie at 2150 hp. Jacks mana is low so he buys a mana potion while dodging the giants next slash and drinks it recovering his mana to full. Jack decides to use his strongest magic."Lightning Maelstorm!" -50 -82 - 23 - 95 - 85 - 30. The giant gets caught up in jacks Lightning Maelstorm and takes a decent amount of damage, Dropping his health from 2150 down to 1785. the giant roars and smashes his sword down on jack which he barely dodges but this time he gets hit by a lot of rock -10 -8 -12. Jack loses 30 health and drops down to 160 hp. he is bleeding a decent amount. "Heal!" +20. Jack uses Heal and regains 20 health and closes his wounds slowly. he then buys another few mana potions and drinks them, getting ready for another magic spam on the giant. "Ice Blizzard!" "Lightning Spear!" "Ice Wall!" "Earth Arrow" Jack uses an Ice Wall to block the giant from dodging and it gets hit by Ice Blizzard, Lightning Spear and Earth Arrow taking a lot of damage. -50 -120 -85 -90 - 52 -64 -30 -100. The giant loses 591 more health dropping down to 1194. Jack is tired as heck because that used 160 of his mana, Leaving him at 30. The giant roars and jumps at jack ignoring its wounds. It punches jack who jumped to negate some damage but he hits a wall. -60 -40. Jack loses a whole 100 health and drops down to 90. The giant then stomps on the ground near jack and he loses another 30 dropping to 60. Jack hurriedly buys 2 health potions and mana potions and drinks them. His health goes back up to 130 and his mana goes back to 100. Jack distances himself from the giant, Who tried to punch jack again, then let loose his magic. "Earth Wall!" "Lightning Maelstorm!" "Ice Blizzard!" The giant is dead center of Lightning Maelstorm and Ice Blizzard taking loads of damage. -100 -120 -150 -95 -35 -95 -100 -75 -130 -150 -80 -70. The giant takes 1200 damage but it only has 1194 so it ends up dead. Jack also got hit by his magic and dropped down to 20 health! He slowly buys a health potion and drinks it going back to 90.
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Ding - Host Has Killed Floor Boss Krulgar: Gained 5000 XP,500 Credits
And Title:GiantSlayer
- Giant Slayer: Deal 20% More Damage Against Giant Type Monsters.
Ding - Host Has Leveled Up: Gained 15 Health, 15 Mana, 2 Of Each Stat, 10 Stat Points, 10 Credits
"Hah.. Hah.. I could of used that damn title earlier.. Ugh" "Heal" +60 "Heal" +60 "Damn I nearly died there, I guess I got too cocky because I destroyed all the zombies and skeletons.. Well, Let's head home I guess."
Somewhere Unknown
"Hmm.. I didn't expect him to be able to beat that boss yet, Looks like this will be more entertaining then I thought HAHAHAH(???)
Jacks Room
Jack is changing after showering and he notices he has some scars on his body now from that giant.'Damned giant hurt like hell, I even got scars now. Well lesson learned, Don't be cocky anymore.' Jack lays on his bed and sleeps.
Next Day
'Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:13(6500 xp to lvl up)
-Health:205/205(0.18 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 140/140(0.18 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:28
-Speed:26
-Dexterity:26
-Vitality:22
-Endurance:18
-Wisdom:22
-Intelligence:26
-Charm:12
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"11'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery, Wind Magic, Lightning Magic,Wind Cutter,Wind Arrow,Lightning Spear,Lightning Maelstorm,Healing Magic,Heal,High Heal,Earth Magic,Water Magic,Ice Magic,Inventory,Teleportation Magic,WaterBall,Water Wall,Fire Spear,Fire Wall,Water Arrow,Earth Wall,Earth Spikes,Earth Arrow,Lightning Arrow,Ice Wall,Ice Path,Ice Blizzard,Cure Disease,Martial Arts(Advanced),Hand To Hand,Spear Mastery,Gun Mastery
-Stat Points:10
-Credits:1800
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
Ding - Since Host Has Killed Floor Boss Krulgar, Host Is Now Able To Buy More Equipment And Skills.
- Shop -
- Item Shop -
- Skill Shop -
- Misc Shop -
'Show New Items'
- Item Shop -
- New Items - Leather Chestplate:50 Credits, Leather ArmGuard:50 Credits,Leather Boots:50 Credits,Iron Helmet:100 Credits,Iron Chestplate:100 Credits,Iron Leggings:100 Credits,Iron Boots:100 Credits, Iron ArmGuard:100 Credits,Mithril Sword:250 Credits,Mithril Spear:300 Credits,Mithril Bow:150 Credits,Iron Arrow:50 Credits Per 5, Mithril Arrow:100 Credits Per 5
'Holy I got a lot of new stuff, being able to buy armor and better weapons is super good for me, Especially since I will take a lot more damage in the future parts of the dungeon I assume.Let's check out the new Skills'
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- Skill Shop -
- New Skills - Darkness Magic:100 Credits,Dark Arrow:40 Credits,Dark Spear:40 Credits,Shadow Control:75 Credits,Sneak:80 Credits,Shadow Ride:125 Credits,Invisibility:175 Credits
'Hmm Darkness magic, I feel like I will need this in the future, Especially those spells, They are all useful. What does Sneak do?'
- Sneak - Allows User To Make No Noise And Sneak Up On Target. No Mana Use.
'Wait, I can see what all the skills do? Damn why didn't I try this earlier. Okay what does Invisibility and Shadow Ride do.'
- Invisibility- Allows User To Go Invisible And Not Be Seen By Anyone Unless Touched Or Stopped. 60 Mana Per Minute
- Shadow Ride - Allows User To Hide And Travel Through The Shadows,Not Able To Be Attacked Or Attack Inside Shadows. 10 Mana Per Second.
'Wow those are both useful, Okay then what does shadow control do.'
- Shadow Control - Allows User To Control His Or Others Shadows, If User Uses Their Own Shadow, User Can Use It To Attack Or Defend. If User Uses Others Shadows, Can Be Used To Bind Their Bodies For 1.5 Seconds. 50 Mana Per Use
'Oh that will be super useful when fighting enemies, I can just bind their shadow for 1.5 seconds to get away or attack.'
'Credits'
- Credits:1800
'Okay buy Dark Magic, Dark Arrow, Dark Spear, Shadow Control,Sneak,Shadow Ride and Invisibility.'
Ding - Host Has Purchased Darkness Magic,Minus 100 Credits. 1700 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchases Dark Arrow, Minus 40 Credits. 1640 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Dark Spear, Minus 40 Credits. 1600 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Shadow Control, Minus 75 Credits. 1525 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Sneak, Minus 80 Credits. 1445 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Shadow Ride, Minus 125 Credits. 1220 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Invisibility, Minus 175 Credits. 1045 Remaining.
'Let's also buy a full set of iron armor and a Mithril Sword'
Ding - Host Has Purchased Iron Helmet,Minus 100 Credits. 945 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Iron Chestplate, Minus 100 Credits. 845 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Iron Leggings, Minus 100 Credits. 745 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Iron Boots, Minus 100 Credits. 645 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Mitril Sword, Minus 250 Credits. 395 Remaining.
All of the Iron Armor and the Mithril sword fell infront of Jack, Who put all of it in his Inventory then went to sleep.
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