《Broken System》Back To School And New Magic.
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Jack wakes up and notices it is only 6 in the morning so he has about 3 hours until he has to leave for school so he decides to head back into the dungeon to level up more.
Ding - Host is Entering Dungeon, Please Stay Still. 3...2...1... Have Fun Host.
'Did this System just tell me to have fun killing undead?Well whatever let's try out my new magic!'Jack finds a zombie near his small rooms door so he decides to hit that with his magic."Fireball!" A soccerball sized fireball flys out of Jacks hand and hits the zombie head on and it basically explodes.
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombie:25 xp,10 Credits.
'Uh.. That seems dangerous as hell so lets not use that near me haha...'Jack finds a few more zombies and shoots out 4 more fireballs killing 7 zombies. He notices that he is tired and remembers he doesnt have a lot of mana.'Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:5(1425 xp to lvl up)
-Health:90/90(0.9 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 10/50(0.9 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:15
-Speed:10
-Dexterity:10
-Vitality:10
-Endurance:9
-Wisdom:11
-Intelligence:13
-Charm:-6
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery.
-Stat Points:0
-Credits:180
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'Damn, I forgot about my mana,Well whatever let's go kill zombies until it's time for school.'
2 and a half hours later
Ding - Host Has Slain Zombiex6:Gained 150 XP,60 Credits.
Ding - Host Has Leveled Up:Gained 10 Hp,10 Mp,1 Of Each Stat,5 Stat Points,5 Credits.
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:6(3000 xp to lvl up)
-Health:100/100(0.10 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 60/60(0.10 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:16
-Speed:11
-Dexterity:11
-Vitality:11
-Endurance:10
-Wisdom:12
-Intelligence:14
-Charm:-5
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery.
-Stat Points:5
-Credits:795
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'It's time to head back home to get ready for school, but before that I'll put my 5 Points into Charm so that It goes with my body.'
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Ding - Host Has Put 5 points Into Charm, 0 Total.
Jack heads back to his room now and looks at the mirror. What he sees is a normal looking male face, a skinny body and his blood red eyes and shaggy black hair that goes to his shoulders. He gets ready to head to school and puts on his school uniform.
While Jack is walking down the street on his way to school people aren't avoiding him like hes the plague anymore.'People are finally not avoiding me like I would kill them if I am near them, This is all thanks to this system'
Jack reaches his school and when he is walking in the halls to his class he hears people murmuring.
"Who's that?'(Male 1)
"I dunno a transfer student?"(Male 2)
Jack reaches his classroom and sits in his chair near the back window and waits for class while he waits for class to start.
"Alright everybody sit down i'm doing attendance.(Teacher)
"Jack Bolard"(Teacher)
"Here"(Me)
Jack raises his hand and everybody looks at his confused.
"You say you are Jack Bolard?(Teacher)
"Yea, I changed a bit over the weekend"(Me)
'Changed a bit my ass! You are basically a different person!'(Everybody)
"Uh okay let's start class"(Teacher)
Jack waits for his boring class to end so he can go eat and finally it ends.
Ring Ring Ring
Jack heads to the cafeteria to buy his lunch which is just some bread and juice then heads to the roof to eat until lunch break ends.
Ring Ring Ring
Jack heads back to his class to wait for the teacher and checks his status while he is at it
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:6(3000 xp to lvl up)
-Health:100/100(0.10 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 60/60(0.10 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:16
-Speed:11
-Dexterity:11
-Vitality:11
-Endurance:10
-Wisdom:12
-Intelligence:14
-Charm:0
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery.
-Stat Points:0
-Credits:795
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
Jack decides to look at his magic list to buy more magic since he has 795 credits.
- Shop -
- Magic Only - Mana Arrow:20 Credits, Water Magic:60 Credits,Earth Magic: 60 Credits,Wind Magic:60 Credits, Lightning Magic:65 Credits,Ice Magic:50 Credits,Healing Magic:70 Credits,Teleportation Magic:150 Credits,Inventory:250 Credits, Fire Spear:25 Credits, Fire Wall:25 Credits,Waterball:20 Credits, Water Arrow:25 Credits,Water Wall:30 Credits,Wind Cutter:25 Credits, Wind Wall;25 Credits,Wind Arrow:20 Credits,Earth wall:20 Credits,Earth Spikes:35 Credits,Earth Arrow:25 Credits,Lightning Arrow:20 Credits, Lightning Spear:35 Credits,Lightning Maelstorm:90 Credits,Ice Arrow:20 Credits,Ice wall:30 Credits,Ice Path:20 credits,Ice Blizzard:80 Credits,Heal:35 Credits,High Heal:50 Credits, Area Heal:120 Credits,Cure Disease:75 Credits.
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'I'll buy Wind Magic and Lightning Magic.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Wind Magic, Minus 60 Credits. 735 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Lightning Magic,Minus 65 Credits. 670 Remaining.
'Now I will buy Wind Cutter and Wind Arrow aswell as Lightning Spear and Lightning Maelstorm.I'll also buy Healing Magic and Heal.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Wind Cutter, Minus 25 Credits. 645 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Wind Arrow, Minus 20 Credits. 625 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Lightning Spear, Minus 35 Credits. 590 Remaining
Ding - Host Has Purchased Lightning Maelstorm, Minus 90 Credits. 500 Remaining.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Healing Magic,Minus 70 Credits. 430 Remaining.
Ding - Host Has Purchased Heal,Minus 35 Credits. 395 Remaining
'Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:6(3000 xp to lvl up)
-Health:100/100(0.10 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 60/60(0.10 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:16
-Speed:11
-Dexterity:11
-Vitality:11
-Endurance:10
-Wisdom:12
-Intelligence:14
-Charm:0
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery, Wind Magic, Lightning Magic,Wind Cutter,Wind Arrow,Lightning Spear,Lightning Maelstorm,Healing Magic,Heal
-Stat Points:0
-Credits:395
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
Ring Ring Ring
'Oh crap I forgot I was at school, Thankfully nobody talked to me when I was using the Shop.Well time to head home and go dungeon diving I guess.'
Jack heads back to his house and goes into his room. He changes out of his School Uniform and puts on regular clothes and then goes into the dungeon. Back in his small room,Jack decides to test his new magic out again.
'Alright since I see 2 zombies there let's try out wind cutter on them."Wind Cutter!"The 2 zombies got hit by Jacks wind cutter and got cut into pieces by it.'Nasty.. Let's check my mana to see how much that took.'
- Mana: 50/60
'So it takes 10 per use, Let's try not to use it that much.'Jack continues to kill all the zombies and skeletons on on this floor with his magic and sword and eventually he sees a screen pop up outside of the kills.
Ding - Host Has Killed Zombiex10:250 XP, 100 Credits.
Ding - Host Has Leveled Up:Gained 15 Hp,15 Mp,2 Of Each Stat, 10 Stat Points, 10 Credits.
Ding - Since Host Has Cleared The First Floor Of The Dungeon, Host Has Gained
100 Credits And Access To The Second Floor.
'Weird, I gained 15 hp and mp instead of 10, And everything else gained was doubled.. Was it because i hit level 5 so i get more now? Well it works for me haha. Status'
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:7(3500 xp to lvl up)
-Health:115/115(0.12 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 75/75(0.12 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:18
-Speed:14
-Dexterity:14
-Vitality:13
-Endurance:12
-Wisdom:14
-Intelligence:16
-Charm:1
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"7'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery, Wind Magic, Lightning Magic,Wind Cutter,Wind Arrow,Lightning Spear,Lightning Maelstorm,Healing Magic,Heal
-Stat Points:10
-Credits:1052
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
'Well let's put 5 points into Charm, 2 in Strength,2 in Speed and 1 in Dexterity.
Ding - Host Has Put 5 Points Into Charm, 6 Total.
Ding - Host Has Put 2 Points Into Strength, 20 Total.
Ding - Host Has Put 2 Points Into Speed, 16 Total.
Ding - Host Has Put 1 Point Into Dexterity, 15 Total.
'Well my status is starting to look damn good, Well let's head back to my room and sleep now.'
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