《Superficial Story》Chapter 5: Raping the Goddesses and Creating Hell
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Jaur is trying to break into my realm.
Useless.
He’s not going to be able to do it. It’s part of the System. I have a greater rank than him, it doesn’t matter how much Karma he expends doing that, he isn’t going to be able to get in.
Now, the souls of the evil people.
There are some of them waiting at the door already, but I can’t just shove them into a big empty space, right?
…
Actually, I can.
Fuck those guys.
I don’t have many karma points yet, so I can’t build hell now.
It will be better if I just let them wander around until they start killing and fucking each other for pure boredom and anger.
And here they come…
10 people per minute, more or less.
They just pop in this blank empty space and go on floating around.
Plus, they are tiny!
400 times smaller than me.
I guess I look like a huge mountain to them.
Well, with 700 million people living in this universe’s only existing world (the planet I’m the King of Evil of) 10 people per minute seems to be a good amount of death.
That said, those are only the evil ones. More or less 1 person goes to Heaven out of every 10, so it would be 11 deaths per minute.
And they are crawling around already.
Look there.
A couple of guys gawking on each other’s throats.
They died in the middle of a bar fight and keep fighting even while in hell.
Go on, go on.
Each time you punch your friend I get one-thousanth of a bad karma point, so keep doing that.
Oh, here they come.
[Sophia] - King of Evil, I have arrived.
[Nina] - Me too.
They aren't so tiny here. I have allowed for them to get forms only a little bit smaller than mine.
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“Aren’t you two a couple of obedient bitches.”
[Sophia] - Please… you can use my body, but don’t stop receiving the souls of the evil. Don’t make us challenge the God Emperor.
“He.”
I took the bitch by her hair and pushed her neck behind. This is a nice pair of tities, so let’s take these clothes off.
Niiiice.
Tits and pussy-open leather outfit.
“What a lewd bitch you are.”
[Sophia] - Please King of Evil, don’t shame me…
“He. Shut up…. And start working on this…”
At that moment I made a big, bulky and strong divine body for myself. It is a better version of who I was in my previous life.
[Sophia] - Uuuhm, uuhm…
“That’s it bitch. Put that tongue out. Work that shaft. And you, bitch daughter. Your whore of a mother needs someone licking that ass of hers. Don’t you see how it is tingling?”
Bitch goddesses.
At least they are easy to please.
Sophia is cumming already. And Nina is getting herself a nice taste of the mother’s asshole.
Oh?
The amount of Bad Karma points increased a lot.
It seems even fake-rape is enough to give me a lot of bad karma if I do it with goddesses.
Besides, our Divine Presences carry a small amount of information about what we are doing.
The folks around this hell are getting furiously excited already. And those on the planet seem to be felling weirdly sexual today.
Oh yeah bitch.
Let’s work this shit up.
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“Have I ever said I would stop receiving the souls if they didn’t serve me?”
I’m done getting my pleasure.
Now I’m telepathy-talking with Jaur, so he stops hammering my realm’s divine protection.
The amount of karma he’s spending is stupid. Besides, he’s trying to mess with the divine system. It doesn’t matter how much karma he uses, it won’t break.
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[Jaur] - You… you…
“If they got it wrong, that’s their own problem you know?”
Not really.
[Omniscience] tells me everything.
They knew it. And they allowed me to know they knew it.
[Jaur] - Using a mistake, a misjudgment from their part like this! Don’t you have no shame?!
“I have shame? I’m the king of evil. Besides, there’s plenty of what I did happening on the world right now. And also a lot of worse things. Like those orcs raping the elf girl in the middle of the desert. Shouldn’t deserts be under your watch?”
[Jaur] - The Emperor doesn’t allow us to…
“Yeah, yeah, the Emperor. Fuck that bitch. If you can’t do something about that idiot’s unfair rules because you’re too scared to do it, then don’t come babbling your fat mouth to me. Fuck you and your hypocritical honour.”
And then I hang up.
I have plenty of Bad Karma points now.
I can start making my hell.
So I will add a lot of infernal landscapes.
Just the basics, really.
Souls can’t die, but I can make them suffer.
There.
Everyone will feel hunger, heat, cold, all of the mortal sensations.
Now, if I put some scenery…
A lake of blood, a mountain of needles, a place of hellish heat with sulfur and Vulcans… a cold hell filled to the brim with snow…
And now some minions as well.
Let’s make a cute girl demon.
A little one, since I have had enough of grown sluts.
There.
“You are Miiia.”
[Miiia] - My lord.
“You are a Demon Queen and my reproduction tool. Go on and take my dick. Get pregnant and fill this world with half-god demons. Torture the souls here to make them become like you.”
[Miiia] - Y… ah… yeeesss… my… aaaah… Looorddsssh…
She barely took it in and is cumming already.
God-level dick is a thing to be admired.
By the way, Miiia is a demi-god demon queen.
It took me a few million bad karma points to get her, but the souls around have been producing them like crazy.
I guess it is because of what I did to the goddesses. Everyone just started to rape and murder each other.
Of course, since they are souls they don’t die forever, but I get the bad karma points the same way.
There. She took it all.
[Miiia] - Aaah… aaaah…. Aaaasssaaaahhhashh…
Hum.
If I go any longer she will get permanently broken eh.
What a letdown.
Gods can’t fuck mortals in god form without them getting like this. Even if it’s a demi-god.
Fine.
“Get ready Miiia. I’m going to give it to you now.”
[Miiia] - Iiiii… iiiiaaaaaaaahhhhssshh aaa uch! Uc! Iiiii…
She can’t talk anymore. There.
AAAaaaarh.
Nice.
I dumped a lot of cum inside of her.
She will start producing me some offspring soon enough.
Then those will be half-god demi-god demons.
They will breed amongst themselves, with her and with the souls around, and produce a lot of lesser demons.
I believe soon my Hell will be established as a wild and crazy place.
More Bad Karma Points for me. Nice.
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