《The garden of Eden》Chapter 2 born
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(Edwin pov)chapter 2
Everything was dark and I could not move it was really moist. Then I felt like I was being pulled I tried to resist but it was no use.there was a bright light it made me close my eyes. After a few seconds I opened my eyes and was surprise to see an old lady in a maid costume
Maid[ it's a boy
What? so they talk English in this world that's a relief I don't think it would've been an easy thing to learn a new language.
?[please let me see my baby]
The old lady gave me to a women who was laying in a bed. She was beautiful with her black hair and black eyes she looked around 20 years old.
?[hello baby I'm your mother]
Maid[what will you name him Roxy]
So my mother name is Roxy I wonder what they will name me.
Roxy[ I already decide on a name I like Edwin]
What are the odds that I would have the same name as my past life.she then hugged me tighter and kissed my forehead.
Maid [ that's a good name]
I looked around the room and see it's a small room with only a bed. there was a stone that gave light to the room like a light bulb. When suddenly the door opened and a man came in he had blue hair and brown eyes with a furious expression on his face.
( Roxy pov)
My name is Roxy I am 20 years old I was working as a maid in one of the four high nobles house the Cruz family. The head of the family Jerref Cruz took an interest in me and told me if I did not sleep with him he would kill my parents who are my only family. I was scared and did what he wanted and a few months later I found out I was pregnant. I wanted to have my baby because it was not it's fault of what his dad did to me. When I was hugging my baby Jerref came into the room with a furious expression on his face.
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Jerref[ Roxy I want you and that baby to get out of this house. I don't want anyone to know that I have a bastard child it will bring down the Cruz family name.
Roxy[ don't worry I was going to leave anyways I don't want to be here anymore. I will raise my son with my parents.]
(Edwin pov)
The next day when we where leaving I saw the house from the outside it was huge and there was a big garden outside in front.There was a woman and a boy that looked around 3 years old they both had brown hair and brown eyes. They both stared at me and my mom with disgusted eyes. They where apparently Jerref's wife Layla Cruz and his son Dominic Cruz. Then Layla walked toward us until she was three feet away from us.
Layla[ you whore get out of my house and take your stupid monkey.]
What the hell!!! did she just call me a monkey!!
My mom looked mad but ignored her and left the mansion with me and a suitcases.We traveled with a merchant for a weak and I only saw grasslands and forests until we reached a town there was a board on the entrance to town it said flower town.
We reach a small house it looked better than most houses we had past. Mom knocked in the door and a man came out he looked to be around his mid 40 he had a really muscular body. He ran at us and hugged my mom and finally noticed me he was shocked his expression was funny.
Old man[ wh wh who's baby is that Roxy!!!]
Roxy[ it's my son his name is Edwin isn't he really cute]
Old man[ what I'm a grandpa hahaha hey rose get over here!!]
A woman in her mid 40 came out the door she looked like she was a beauty in her days she looked annoyed.
Rose[ what nonsense are you saying. What!! Roxy who's baby is that.]
After that we went inside the house and and my mom explained everything to my grandparents. I found out that my grandparents where name Berg Drago and Rose Drago. My moms full name is Roxy Drago and my name is Edwin Drago.
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