《RPG Nightmare》Updates! Must READ!
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Minor Edits:
Chapter 1-3 and 7 has been slightly tweaked. No changes to plot line or characters.
Chapter 10: I realized that Peter could easily chase down a mini-van at peak speed, so I tweaked the scene a bit. PLOT remains the same.
Slightly more important Edits:
Chapters 4, 5 and 13 have been editted for character flaws and plot line holes.
Chapter 4: Peter doesn't spare the cat, he just outright kills it.
Chapter 5: Added a flashback of Amy and some more important things. (I recommend you re-read this chapter, but if you're lazy then here are the two most important edits.)
Spoiler: Spoiler
Chapter 13: Added an explanation for Killing intent (2 lines below). Killing intent is essentially releasing your murderous intention for the opponent. It is normally used as a spiritual attack.
Despite staring at each other, the two were clashing spiritually with their killing intent. Both of them were trying to get the upper hand and, in a sense, understand the opponent’s fighting style.
Note from author:
Other than chapter 5, you don't really have to re-read the editted chapters, but its up to you. I will be taking today off, since I'm stupid tired after all the edits. I hope the story flows better now. Any comments are appreciated, thanks.
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