《The undead who yearned for life》8-A new beginning
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The burning sensation is pervading me once again, I don't know how much time passed from when I first awoke, but every single time the sensation of my body burning is intolerable, and every time I hope, I wish to die for the last time, but I can't, I come back in this eternal torture.
I always try to walk for some seconds or even minutes (though it seems hours), following what the instinct tells me, but it's useless, I fall all the times, only to come back after some time, and everything repeats.
Sometime, I feel something apart from the burns, like if I'm being slashed, sometimes I feel as if I'm being eaten, other times I feel someone dragging me somewhere, I can't really say where to, I can't even open the eyes from the pain.
I started to think that the goddess cursed me, but she shouldn't had any motives for it, so I continued to walk and to fall.
I lost count of how many times I raised only to die, but I can fell something, like if the salvation is near, maybe this time I'll be able to sleep peacefully.
And one day, I reached it, the end of my torture, I don't know why, but I don't fell pain anymore, for now... let me sleep, it was a very long journey.
WELCOME TO HELLWelcome to the utmost external circle of hell.If you can read this, my best regards, it means you reached the minimum level of intelligence necessary to access to the system.
(quite rare on that level, you're the most intelligent idiot out there, must feel good) The rules here are simple:
1) You can do what you want, but beware, you are not alone. 2) You will always be revived, so don't worry about dying.
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3) If you want a more eternal death, please head to one of the many exits.4) Please, make me laugh with your struggles.
I woke up with this strange window in front of me... I really fell in Hell? I don't even remember living, is it possible that i died before even being born?
Too many questions start pouring in my head, but the most important are: how much time passed from when I was reborn? Is my sister still alive? And what about Elise?
I still don't understand anything, the goddess didn't tell me a thing about this world.
I swiped away the window, then tried what everyone would try in my situation: -GRSHHHHHHHH-
....Fantastic, I can't even talk, with no light I can't even see what I am... isn't there a function here?
H.E.I_.P.Which underdeveloped idiot called for me in the middle of the night?
And what the hell is this? An help window is insulting me; first I can't talk, then this, is there something that actually works here?
H.E.I_.P.Oh, this underdeveloped and half dead... thing has some actual intelligence, I guess I'll have to give you some kind of privilegesGranted lvl 2 access to the system, you're now recognized as a system user
H.E.I_.P.And with this, I'm able to go back to sleep, no need to thank me, underdeveloped thing
That was... fast, can't exactly understand what's going on, let's just try again: -GRSHHHHH-
....this doesn't really work, did the Help window really help?
H.E.I_.P.For the devil sake, I take back the underdeveloped, you don't deserve it. If you can't talk, just think about the word.
That's unsettling, did I really become that much of an idiot? no matter, let's try.
"Status"
NameJackRaceLesser GhoulAge0GenderMaleTitles-Class-Level1Fame-100Health Points70/150HP regen0.15/sMana Points733/733MP regen1.03/sStamina Points50/320SP regen4,44/hEnergy Points17/17EP regen0.57/sRage Points0/5RP generation?Vitality15Soul100Strength17Intelligence40Agility20Wisdom30Charisma-100Leadership11Luck0Comprehension10,33Phisical resistance0.00%Magical resistance0.00%
Now... this explains a lot and creates a lot of questions... tch, I'll ask them to Help tomorrow, for now let's sleep some more, I'll think about everything tomorrow.
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Note from the author: I'm new to those blue windows, give me some time to get better at them, I used all this this just to do them, I'm dying
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