《Dagon, Dungeon evolved》4 - First Kill - Your review is my motivation
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Your review is my motivation.
Newyevon2 - i hear you XD thank you for your review i won’t get it rigged to that level that soon. No fun if the trespassers enters and dies all the time.
Neufeldr1 - not everyone like the intro of the game type. May do a side chapter for that in the future if people demands more of it by liking your review.
Nature is your non-stop magical shop - Mercator
The Merry band and the not so merry leader walked on through the dungeon and headed towards the 2nd room. As an exploration party, they sure took their time. I am already impatient from all that waiting. The first room had nothing much just some basic herbs to entice the party to head to the 2nd room. The 2nd room is where all the fun starts. I planted sensor near the herbs.
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“Not a bad haul leader. If the 1st room is already giving so much, i wonder what the next rooms will provide. More expensive herbs? Also, where is the eternal sleep? They fetch 2 silver per stalk. Those are good stuff. The insomniacs love it not to mention the ‘special’ potion that it can turn into … ($o$)”
“Roselle, as a thief i know it is your dream for the next best score. There is however no point in all those if you die before you get to the sleep of your dreams. Stay alert we are reaching the 2nd room.”
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Curious, i PM Alex.“Alex what is the special potion that the plant Eternal Sleep makes that earns plenty of money?”
“Lucky you Xavier i happen to be now at the apothecary. According to them, it is the dream potion. 1 drop to sleep well and more for a good dream. It works only on NPC so u won’t hear about on the forums even.”
“Ah thanks. By the way i am near Ragna Town.”
“Ok. Sure. i will drop into the town later. Hopefully i will be the First player in your Dungeon. See you.”
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Just as everyone reach the 2nd room, Roselle sniffs the air for a brief moment as her eyes lit up.“I Smell GOLD!!!” and she dashes in before anyone could stop her.
“SHIT” everyone dashes in right after her hoping that she did not just kill herself with her stupidity. A money loving thief. No one can really that it fit her but her love of gold is way too overbearing.
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As they stepped in, all was a scene for madness, chaos and laughter.
Madness as everywhere plants were uprooting themselves. Chaos as all types of plants were crossing each other and tumbling into each other. Laughter as Roselle is chasing after a flower of fragrance with another in her hand and another in her mouth while mumbling words like “gold”, “stop running” “my money” “my precious” over and over again. It seems like she is lost in the delusion that the flower of fragrance is gold coins and it is running away from her.
I must admit. Low level NPC has funny personalities. It makes killing them easier. It is just that i have almost no killing ability other than sapling, bewitcher and traps. The rest simply annoys.
Finally, Roselle fell into a trap. As pitfall traps are just a simple hole, i had to kill her by another way. I planted a Sensor and Eternal Sleep in them. So one second after she fell in, the Eternal Sleep uprooted and ran all around her. After 2 brushes with Eternal Sleep, she is knocked out cold. That is how potent Eternal sleep is. Not to mention that they were still running around and on her even after she collapsed.
It is good night to Roselle as she has Fallen into Eternal Sleep thanks to Eternal Sleep.You have gained bonus 1 evolution point!
Dave and his team raced forward and looked down. All they could do was watch as Roselle sank into the soil. A sign that a trespasser is dead and killed by the dungeon.
You gained loot type: Leather Helm
You gained loot type: Leather Boots
You gained loot type: Leather Armor
You gained loot type: Cloth Leggings
You gained loot type: Copper Dagger
You gained loot type: Silver Coins
You gained loot type: Copper Coins
You gained material: Perfect Female Human Body
Woo… new loot. Too bad i do not have any that drops loot other than bewitcher right now. Ah and i can have Saplings drop Coins and occasional Equipments.
After many moments of silence, Daniel was the first to speak up. “There goes our money.”
*smack*
“Roselle just died and the first thing you say is about money. Just what kind of head do you have”
“But she is holding on to ALL our money.”
Dave stumbled at that and gave a sigh after reorganizing his thoughts. “No helping it. As a new Dungeon, there are many unknowns that can kill us. No use crying over spilt milk. Gather what we can from this room. Be careful of traps. Use your staffs and swords to prod on the ground to check for traps before you take the step. Healers keep casting dispel and keep us clear headed. Keep the scroll ready so that if anything happens we can teleport out at moment’s notice. May Eloln Bless us.”
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“May Eloln Bless us.”
“May Eloln Bless us.”
“May Eloln Bless us.”
Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries, is quite beautiful, with fair skin, waist length black hair, and eyes the color of banked coals. She is average height and slightly plump and generally appears mischievous. She usually wears armor dyed brown.
She is also associated with night and names. She is often worshipped by wanderers. Her vast flocks of followers can be primarily distinguished by their daily prayers. There are a respectable amount of shrines to her at crossroads. There are many myths involving her ill-fated adventures with Jousur. She is the sister of Lorin. She is known to place challenges before mortals in dire need.
Sure. Eloln can bless you guys but as long as you are stupid enough to fall for the traps then go ahead and try to reach room 4 and finally the boss room. Jace was lucky as i did not have as many plants in my arsenal as i have now to keep him and his party around permanently.
After about 10 minutes of prodding and slowly progress, they finally cleared the room and headed for room 3.
The Debuff is awesome. The lowered stats is nothing but the minus 2 luck really takes its toll on these newbies. Stumbling and tripping is just a small part. It also lowered their resistance to status effect. It was not long before the healers started to run out of mana. “
Panting, the healers looked at each other and whispered to each other.
“Are you running low on mana as well?”
“Yea. i am at 20% already. I am not going to use any potions. Dave barely has enough to pay us for this trip now. If we progress any further we may just pay with our lives too. Not having a thief to check for traps really cost us. I do not want to faint from running out of mana.”
“I will make the call. Dave, we are running low on mana. To save cost and save ourselves from needless harm, when we hit 10% we are all leaving. With or without you and Daniel.”
Dave stopped in his tracks and with a growl in his voice, “The deal was to explore the entire Dungeon with the party.”
“Read the terms carefully. It says Explore the entire Dungeon with the FULL party. With Roselle gone, the party is no longer complete. Safety is now compromised. We healers are weak and we are usually the first to die when there are lots of enemies. With this Dungeon being Uncharted it is even more dangerous for us. Not to mention, as Daniel has said, she holds your party’s money and now that she is gone, you will be broke other than the herbs you just gathered. You do know that mana potions are not that cheap. If we start using potions pretty much your profits will go to zero.”
Nooo!!!! Don’t leave. Give me the EXP!!!!! That is what i wanted to shout out but can’t. Being a Dungeon sucks as there is no way to directly communicate with people. Or at least not until i gain an avatar.
*A sudden wind sweeps in from the entrance of the Dungeon*
Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries, heard their prayers.
Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries, Laughs at how weak your Dungeon is.
Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries, is impressed that such a weak dungeon can kill a Thief.
Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries, come to the conclusion that they would not be able to clear your Dungeon after touring your Dungeon. She decides to transport them to safety.
Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries, noticed that you do not have a sign yet and decides to PLANT a sign for you.
A Sign is placed at the Entrance of your Dungeon by Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries.
SignWoe is to the weak-willed, tread forth with a steeled heart for you will need a strong heart and mind to move forth here in Gladious, Florae Coliseum. -Eloln, the Goddess of Mercenaries.
*ring-ring*
“Sup. give me a minute i am reaching Ragna in a moment.”
“Look at this” With that i sent him a visual of the alerts.
*Player has Disconnected*
Really! again?
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