《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 17: Freedom And New Power But With Big Cost.
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"Speak" people speak
'Thought' people thought
demon/demonic speak
'demon/demonic thought
-----Mui's Office-----
Everyone is in Mui's office. Naruto stood in front of his desk.
"This is all what you had when you came here." Mui said. "Also as you wished your new jacket."
Naruto looked at his desk and sees black jacket with hood and with blood-red kanji 'NINE' where 9 tails come from on back, and in front kanji 'FOX' where you can see blood-red fox head in the middle. "Thank you, Mui." Naruto thanked.
"Come closer so I can take off of that seal." Mui said and Naruto do as he said. Mui starts doing several hand signs in the end he yelled "Katon: Tenrō Kai!!!" and slammed his palm on Naruto's chest. Naruto goes flying through entire room. All of a sudden from where was Naruto everyone can see burst of blood-red, dark-purple and black chakra. Everyones eyes widened at his chakra. 'This chakra! Is much evil and darker than Uchiha Madara... Not only that he is stronger then him or even my grandfather Hashirama.' Tsunade thoughts. 'Naruto...' was everyone thoughts and regretted in the same time that this is their fault Naruto became what he is now.
Naruto stood up and chuckled darkly. Everyone shivered. "It's good to be back." Naruto said with fox grin.
"N-Naruto, you and your comrades can leave now." Naruto is about to leave. "Hey, Naruto! You forget something?" said Mui pointed at jacket and necklace he got from Tsunade.
Naruto turned back and starts walking to grab his things. He put on his jacket. He grab nacklace and looked at it. He turned to Tsunade and said "You won this bet." and throw it to her.
She catches necklace "What do you mean?" she asked with tears and with one thought 'Don't tell me he gave up on his dream...'
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"I gave up." everyone gasped and was shocked except Mui. "Come on this place give me bad memories." Everyone nodded and are about to leave and then Naruto spoke. "Mui..."
"Yes?" Mui asked worried.
"Remember our promise?"
"Yes." Mui is now much worried and fearful.
"Try to brake it..." Naruto's eye is now blood-red like fox. "" He nodded fast with big fear.
Naruto's eye back to normal. "Good. Farewell, Mui." and with that Naruto leaved with Konoha group.
"Finally he is gone..." Mui lied on his chair and sighed.
-----Outside Blood Prison-----
"NARUTO-KUN! LET'S FIGHT AND CHECK YOUR YOUTHFULNESS!!!" shouted Lee.
"Don't bother me. And shut up. Or I will kill you." Naruto said with cold and give Lee a death glare.
"H-Hai." Lee said fearful.
'Humans never changed...' Naruto thoughts
'Oh, Kurama. You aren't asleep?'
'How can I after this burst of chakra you made?!'
'Sorry, Okay?! By the way... This isn't my fault... My Tenketsu needed to full open after for long not using chakra.'
'I know but you should have know that you are stronger than Hashirama Senju or Uchiha Madara...'
'I know...'
'How?'
'When Mui take off of this seal and my chakra bursted... Tsunade looked at me like something he didn't feel so long... But stronger...'
'Heh... Okay, Kit... Lets talk later...'
'Why?'
'This humans tried to speak to you...'
'Should I care?'
'Maybe they give you '
Naruto thought about this for second 'I guess... See you later...'
'Yeah, whatever Kit.' mental link is canceled. Kurama thought with sad face.
-----Real World-----
"Naruto!" Kushina shouted annoyed.
"What do you want?!" Naruto said rised his voice.
"Naruko wanted to speak with you."
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Naruto turned to Naruko and she looked at him.
"So?" Naruto said annoyed waiting for her speak.
"A-Are you really my Nii-san?" Naruko asked.
Naruto narrowed his right eye. "Yes. Yes I am." Naruko have tears in her eyes. She started to run to him and tried to hug him. "Stop." Naruto said and Naruko stopped. "Don't do this. I'm no longer a part of this family."
"But you are my b-brother." Naruko started to cry.
"I'm no longer in your family-" Naruto was interrupted be unbelievable pain in his eyes and right arm. He collapsed.
-----Naruto's Mindscape-----
"Kurama! What's going on?!?!" Naruto shouted.
Kurama said with sadness in his voice.
"For w-what?" Naruto opened his eyes and they widened. "Oi. Kurama what's going on to you." He sees him faded.
"What do you mean?" Naruto said with tears.
"Why?" Naruto is crying.
Kurama said with tears and sadness.
"You are only one thing that keep me live in this cruel world." Naruto sobbed.
"W-What?"
"So you telling me that my so called 'parents' don't even told them that I'm alive or even existed?!" Narutos anger rises.
"Bastards!"
Kurama said with smile.
"Gifts?"
"There is Fox Summoning Contract in this world?"
"What do you mean?"
"You mean I will be first fox summoner?"
Naruto take of his jacket and shows Kurama his right arm.
Naruto does as Kurama said and now is in front of the fox. Kurama reached his right arm and start sending his remaining chakra. On Naruto's right arm appeared black fox tattoo.
Naruto hissed in pain from his right shoulder and eyes."There is another one?"
"What is it?"
Naruto now have a little headache when he sees all Demton Jutsu and handsigns.
"What is last one?"
Kurama's chakra fading faster due to sending much chakra to Naruto.
Naruto begin crying "Bye... Father..." Kurama in with that words starts to cry an fading away. There is no one for Naruto anymore he is alone by yourself now. He going to mirror he crated in mindscape and gasped. His eyes morphed in Kitsune Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan.
'Thank you father...' He noticed something else behind him. He has now white nine tail, fox ears instead of human, his nails and fangs is longer by 0.7 inch and his whiskers are now more visible and chaotic. And his scars are healed. All of them.
'Looks like I'm new Kyūbi no Yōko. Time to face them...' with that thoughts Naruto left his mindscape.
-----Real World-----
Everyone gaped at Naruto as he started to morphed and his scars healed except one on left eye.
"We need to help him!" Naruko shouted.
"Stay back Naruko!" Kushina and Minato shouted. "Your and Menma Bijū chakra is gone Naruto absorbed all of Kyūbi chakra. He might transformed in Kyūbi now!"
All of a sudden burst of chakra larger than in Mui's office appeared from Naruto's body. It's black, dark-purple, blood-red and white. Then Naruto stood up. Every one sees how tears fell from his eyes. "N-Naruto?" Naruko speak to him worried.
Naruto turned back he has tears in his eyes. But what caught their attention are his eyes.
"Sharingan?!" Sasuke shouted. Naruto deactived his now Kitsune Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. And start to walk towards nearby village where he should find Black Diamond. He ignored every questions directed towards him about his eyes, why he looks like a fox and his tattoo.
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