《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 16: Shock, 'Friends', 'Family' And Explanations.
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"Speak" people speak
'Thought' people thought
demon/demonic speak
'demon/demonic thought
-----Mui And Konoha Group-----
"Fast we need to stop him." Mui said. They can feel Naruto's Killer Intent and Bloodlust rises due time.
"Mui, how powerful is Naruto?" Sasuke asked
"If you think you can beat him even with chakra then you underestimated him. He easyly can beat all of us." Mui explained Naruto's strength. "Don't pick fight with him now. He already killed to many prisoners before he was put in Block Z."
"How many?" Sasuke and Menma asked.
"If I remember... 204." Mui answered. Everyone is shocked. Naruto killed 204 prisoners.
"204... How?" Naruko said sadly knowing her brother can be killer machine now.
"Coups on his life. Every since he came here. He was beaten, torched and stabbed. But after one month he has enough and starts fighting back."
Everyone again was shocked. He live here like in Konoha they thoughts.
"We are here." Sam said.
-----Naruto's Fight-----
Naruto was in 'Calm Gorilla' stance. He countered with full force causing internal bleeding in everyone who he hit. Prisoners still came, more and more. And Naruto is smiling insane. He liked it. He liked going killing spree. Now he is going in 'Raging Fox'.
Everyone is staring at him at thoughts 'What is he doing?' but before they could do anything in blink of an eye Naruto was now besides one prisoner with his head. They looked at him and sees that he has long nails like claws and long fangs like fox. Due to Kurama's chakra he reminded much like fox. Just like his senses. His hearing, sight, smell is better than a dog's. Now Naruto is going on rampage. In blink of an eye naruto rip off heads, arms and legs. Last one remain. Naruto go into 'Raging Fox' stance again. Time slowe down Naruto i running towards him faster then Raikage. Naruto jumpen with opened jaw and shows him his fangs also he reached out his claws. Second later in Naruto's jaw is his head and in his hand was impaled last one through his chest where heart was placed. He take his head by his other hand and throw it in the crowd. After that he reached out his claws from chest and take out his heart and also throw it.
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"HAHAHAHAHA!" Naruto laughed insane. "SOME ONE ELSE WANNA TRY AND FIGHT WITH ME?!?!" No answers only shivered bones. "241...242...243...244...245! Fuck five kills and I will have 250 kills on my count!" He looked around and spotted Konoha group with Mui and Sam.
"Well, well, well. Who we have here. So called 'friends'...'" Naruto looked at Minato, Kushina, Menma and Naruko. "And 'family'." he roared softly.
"N-Naruto is that you?" Tsunade asked with disbelief in her eyes. 'Tell me this isn't Naruto. Please he can't be this monster.'
"It's me old hag. And I know I'm a monster. Monster you created." Naruto said with cold, death glare. Every one was shocked at that comment.
"Naruto. You know who we are?" Minato asked with tears in his eyes.
"Sadly yes. My so called 'biological family'."
"Please come with us we can live like family now." Kushina said.
"" Naruto said in demonic voice. Every one can't move a finger due to his voice, scene they watching how Naruto killed near 40 men like he had fun. And his eye. One eye.
"N-Naruto-kun?" Hinata speak first.
"" Naruto asked annoyed still in demonic voice.
"What h-happened to y-you N-Naruto-kun?" They don't know what she mean. But after few seconds Uchiha started to speak. "Naruto from where you have these scars?" He asked shocked how many scars one person can have. Every one looked at him. They see scars all over his body. But most off all one scar on left eye. Also white hairs and long nails along with fangs.
"OH. You mean this scars. Hmm... Mui told you I was stabbed, Torched, beaten and also raped?"
"Raped? What do you mean?" Kushina asked with widened eyes in shock.
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"Why do you care?" Naruto said coldly.
"I'm your mother so tha-" she was interrupted because of Killer Intent thet Naruto released. Every one is on their kneels. Except Naruko. She is barely standing.
"" He said in demonic voice and every one can feel venom when he said mother. He looked at Naruko "" She nodded. "" He said with fox grin and stops releasing his Killer Intent. " "
"How do you know?!" Menma shouted.
"" They do as he said. ""
"Your chakra is rising." Naruke said. "But why?"
"" They nodded. "" he asked with fox grin.
After few minutes thinking Naruko speak. "Soul?" Naruto laughed insane that everyone shivered. "" He said with insane grin.
"To... YOU?!" Kushina spoke.
"sright." Kushina and Minato looked at Naruko and Menma and are now worried that they can die due to lost Bijū chakra. "Don't worry Kushina. They don't die because-" he was interrupted by his 'parents'.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN THEY DON'T DIE THEY HAVE BIJŪ CHAKRA SO IF THEY LOST BIJŪ CHAKRA THEY CAN DIE. THEY ARE JINCHŪRIKI AFTER ALL!!!" Minato and Kushina yelled and Menma and Naruka have tears in eyes due the fact that they can die.
"" Naruto shouted before pointed at corps without legs or arms or heads or even hearts. They are scared now to even speak. "As i said they don't die because they aren't Jinchūriki. And before some one say 'How they aren't Jinchūriki after all, they have a Kyūbi chakra.'. No this not work like this. Jinchūriki is a person who have and Bijū chakra and Bijū soul, and since chakra always return to source, I'm Jinchūriki not they. Only what happen is that they reserves will decrease." Naruto explained.
"But can you give us Kyūbi chakra, right?" Menma said worried that he can be now weak.
"Yes and no." Naruto answered.
"What do you mean 'Yes and no'?!?!" Manma shouted.
"" Menma is now stay scared. "" Naruto yelled in demonic voice and Menma nodded feared. "Now lets go i don't want to be here any longer." Naruto said.
"Wait, Naruto. Come to my office i will take off this seal and give you your belongings." Mui speak. Naruto nodded. "Follow me."
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