《Freshman》Not official chapter
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~November 15th, 2018~
When I am starting this story there are two versions of Beam getting back to Medical and leave Engineering.
I have choose which one I use.
I just want to show which one I don't use this time. So you have and why I don'g take request.
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Timeline: before gear giving ceremony
Difference: Beam win the Campus Moon tittle and the come back is not because of himself
Written at September 19th, 2018
Chapter tittle:
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Phana walks in wide steps into Engineering foodcourt. The minute he walks into it, he founds Beam sits with Forth's gang.
"Beam Baramee, this is the longest joke you ever play and that's enough!" Phana blasts his anger then second he reaches the table. He stands up beside the table, glaring at surprised Beam, with both hands in his waist.
Beam sits between Forth and Lam. He looks up to Phana.
"You are belong to Medical, not in Engineering! You can't just suddenly finds those fucking equations mych more interested than your forever fond of anatomy! You should be first class surgeon like you always say you will instead of being blue collar workers with tattoos and piercing!!" Phana continues.
"But, Pha~...."
"Don't worry, I've been thinking hard to solve your problem! You won't ever be alone again facing your enemy you create yourself by fucking some random people's girlfriend! I'll be with you! I have talked yo Wayo and we agreed that I'll spend my lunch with you for Monday, Wednesday and Friday! And when I'm not, you can spend your lunch with your new setbof friends here! I believe people already notice how you one of this Engineering rascals anyway, so you are save."
Six Engineering students at the table looks at Phana.
Five or them chews their food slowly and Beam still trying to argue, "But Pha.... I can't just go back to Meds, I rolled out from there already."
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"No, you were not! I had cancel your roll out application and get you on leave study instead." Phana said. "You are student in two Faculty right now. So.... get your ass up and come back with me!"
"But...."
"You complete your SOTUS, you already one of them!
You have your Campus Moon tittle too and if you want me to say it, then I will, you are better Campus Moon than me and Ming combined.
You even have copy of every subject and assignment you missed during your absence.
What else?!" Phana really lost it.
Beam blinks.
Phana reaches out his hand with the palm facing up. "Now take my hand and let me get you back home. Tomorrow you could fill the roll out application from Engineering Faculty."
Beam blinks. And then he slowly gets up. "I'll take a leave first before really roll out. I have to make sure you keep your promise."
"Fine." Phana takes Beam right wrist and grips it thight. He turns to Forth. "Thank you for taking care of him these times, I'll take him back from here."
Forth looks at Phana back. And then he turns to Beam. "You'll leave?"
Beam winks at Forth. "Yeah, I guess.... This funride has to end, Phana is right. But I'll come to SOTUS closing ceremony. I'll take my share of heart, my gear, first."
Forth nods.
"See you tomorrow morning, P's...." Beam winks to his 'seniors' and then let Phana drags him along the foodcourt away.
All of the hazers on the table only could see as Beam dissapear from their sight.
"He'll he missed." Park breaks the silent.
Everyone turns to Park.
"He always push my buttons but I'll definitely miss that kid." Park adds.
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Lam blinks. He looks at Park with unreadable expresion.
"He's like a son I don't have." Park says as he let out a sigh.
Max laughs. "By the way and the many times you fucking girl after girl, I am actually surprise that you have no son. But even you have, I doubt that one of them could be like Beam. You won't have a son that handsome, you're ugly."
Park smacks on Max's head.
Max burts into a good laughter.
Tul laughs too.
Lam just blinks ad he looks at the laughing Park.
Forth still looking at the Engineering foddcourt entrance where Beam dissapear.
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"Did I do something?" Park asks Lam when they already finished the last class and Lam has not talking to Park since lunch ends.
Lam looks at Park.
"We'll meet at the meeting room." Forth gets up first. "Last checking before going to the beach tomorrow."
Park and Lam turns to Forth. They nod.
And then Forth walks out the class first.
Lam turns to Park again. "Like what?" He returns the question with another question.
Park shrugs. "I don't know. You tell me. Looks like you mad at me."
Lam blinks. "I'm not mad at you."
"Then talk to me."
"I am talking to you."
Park frowns. "See...? You mad at me."
Lam sighs. He gets up. "Forth waiting for us in the meeting room."
"No." Park grabs Lam's wrist. "Tell me first, what did I do wrong? I'll make it right."
Lam blinks. "You can't."
"Try me."
Lam stares at Park's grip at his wrist. And then looks at Park in his eyes. "Stop sleeping around with girl after girl. Even Forth is no longer doing it again."
This is written after the 1st chapter being released. But :
Now you know why not only I don't take request, but mainly I don't follow my readers prefference. I follow what comes up in my messy mind along the journey.
I am not a people pleasure. But I am happy if people enjoy my work.
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