《Verlorene Seele(dropped)》The First Seven PT2
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Hahaha... I managed to steel myself to finish up this little story at least.
On the fourth day, he(The god of creation) decided to grant the gift of life to a single planet. He grew trees,molded all sorts of animals(lions, sheep, though not quite), molded dragons, gigantic creatures made of flesh and had their own unique power and affinity, which they would then evolve to utilize.
The god of creation did not stop there, he started to mold tiny creatures that looked kind of like an asterisk(*), he gave these creatures the gift of knowledge as they possessed incomparably insignificant power. He named this race "Humans". The god of destruction, saw these "Humans", and started to release his carnal desires upon the females of the race.
On the fourth day, the fourth sin, Lust, had manifested.
On the fifth day, the god of creation had found out of the deeds that the god of destruction had done. He immediately created a remodeled version of the humans to protect the humans and alert him of suspicious activity. These "humans", had wings growing off their backs, strength unlike the humans, golden hair and eyes as brilliant as the sun, and most of all, a unique power that revolved around light.
The god of destruction, seeing these, "super" humans, became very angry. He felt that the god of creation was denying him his right, that the god of creation was siding himself with the lesser beings. He then set off and slipped through the angels surveillance and started to offer humans uncontrollable power in return for their loyalty, these humans grey wings off their back, pointed and evil looking wings, horns on their heads, and increased affinity towards the latent life energy within the world.
The god of destruction then sent these corrupted humans to cause chaos all around, especially amongst the humans
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On the fifth day, the fifth sin, Wrath, had manifested.
On the sixth day, the god of creation had created multiple variations to the humans, tall humans with pointed ears, short and stout humans with great strength, and even merged animals and humans(cliche races, i know, if you suggest some races in the comments i might add them in) to combat the demons.
The god of creation had also taught these races and the humans to harness the life energy around and within them, resulting in the phenomenon known as magic.
Several humans, demons, and human variants started to thirst for more power, they thirsted for riches, for fame and had started committing heinous and inhumane acts.
On the sixth day, the sixth sin, Greed, had manifested.
On the seventh day, war had been waged amongst the races.
The god of creation, seeing that his beloved creations were waging war amongst each other. seeing hat he had no way of stopping the war, decided to create another universe. building on his experiences, he had created another world, much faster this time.
He looked at a lush blue and green planet, and decided to grant the gift of life to it
"I think i'll call this planet... Earth..."
End
Next chapter is where the "actual" story starts!
P.S. if you're wondering about the seventh sin sloth, there is a reason i didnt mention it like the others, it will all be clear in the future!(if youre still readng that is)
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